Aane ka karke vada wo na aaye

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Aane ka karke vada wo na aaye hamne intjaar bahut kiya
Jis ghadi se hame thi nafrat us se hamne bahut pyar kiya
Tumhare liye hamne kya socha tha tumne hame kya soch liya
Jab jab gujra ek ek pal hamne na jane khud ko kaise tham liya
Main apne gile sikwe tumse kahta magar dil ne inkaar kiya
Na jane kon se wo ghadi thi jab hamne tumse pyar kiya
Na aaye tum iska na mujhe afsos hai magaar kyu wada kiya
Tumhare na aane se tumhe kya pata is dil ne kitna intjaar kiya.

santosh benaam
 
Santosh, u r really talented!
Beautiful shayaari....! May yr intzaar end soon and be fruitful!
Best wishes!
 
here are few from my side on the same theme..

1. Mere paas thaa bhi kia, ek sabr ke sivai
wo bhi aaj luta diya, teri intzaar mai

2. jaldi aaiye, humne phool bikhraaye hain teri rah me
der agar ki to phoolon ko chale jayenge dushman rond kar

3. ne jaane kyoon aa jaati hai roj , yah kambakhta raat.
hokar majboor hatani partee hain nigaahen, teri raah se.

Rajendra
 
Hi Santosh,
Really cool man. Do keep writing like this.....its really nice. Yes i really wish the same that tumhara intezaar zaldi se khatm ho.

Rajendra...your sher are nice too especially this one
Mere paas thaa bhi kia, ek sabr ke sivai
wo bhi aaj luta diya, teri intzaar mai.
 
Meena Singh (Jan 16, 2004 10:31 p.m.):
Santosh, u r really talented!
Beautiful shayaari....! May yr intzaar end soon and be fruitful!
Best wishes!
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sukriya meena ji , bas main kya kahu, aapko sayari pasand aayi iski bahut khushi hai
 
Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jan 16, 2004 11:04 p.m.):
here are few from my side on the same theme..

1. Mere paas thaa bhi kia, ek sabr ke sivai
wo bhi aaj luta diya, teri intzaar mai

2. jaldi aaiye, humne phool bikhraaye hain teri rah me
der agar ki to phoolon ko chale jayenge dushman rond kar

3. ne jaane kyoon aa jaati hai roj , yah kambakhta raat.
hokar majboor hatani partee hain nigaahen, teri raah se.

Rajendra
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bahut bahut sukriya rajendra ji
 
monika (Jan 19, 2004 05:02 a.m.):
Hi Santosh,
Really cool man. Do keep writing like this.....its really nice. Yes i really wish the same that tumhara intezaar zaldi se khatm ho.

Rajendra...your sher are nice too especially this one
Mere paas thaa bhi kia, ek sabr ke sivai
wo bhi aaj luta diya, teri intzaar mai.
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mera intjaar kabhi khatm nahi hoga monika ji , jab tak meri saans hai , intjaar khatm ho gaya to life me kya maja rah jayega

santosh benaam
 
Bahut Khub

AANE ka karke vada wo nahi aaye
Wo Aaye der aaye- dursat aaye
Phulo ka haar bhi- dil mae saja kar aaye
vad kismati tum intjar hi nahi kar paye

cheers
 
Santosh ji aap kamal hai .
Dudee uncle aap bemisal hai .

Carry on .
 
Sujata Dahiya (Feb 05, 2004 01:02 a.m.):
Santosh ji aap kamal hai .
Dudee uncle aap bemisal hai .

Carry on .
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hey sujata, bahut bahut sukriya

dharmpal ji aapka sukriya ada kaise karu samaj nahi aata

santosh benaam
 
Sabhi Kala karo ka Sawagat hae
KOn kis ko bulata hae
Kon kisky Aata hae
Yah to Adar Maan- DIL ki chahat hae


Aane ka karke vada wo jarur aaye
Sorry Tum pahachan hi nahi paye
 
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Feb 06, 2004 03:36 a.m.):
Sabhi Kala karo ka Sawagat hae
KOn kis ko bulata hae
Kon kisky Aata hae
Yah to Adar Maan- DIL ki chahat hae


Aane ka karke vada wo jarur aaye
Sorry Tum pahachan hi nahi paye
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tune chaha nahin halaat badal sakte the
tere aansoo meri aankhon se nikal sakta the
tu sada thehri rahi jheel ke paani ki tarah
agar dariya banti to bahut door nikal sakte the

santosh benaam
 
Dudee Uncle Aap to Tope Ho,
'Benaam Daruwala' Aap Jatland Ke Hope Ho.

Bahut Badhia, Laagey Raho :-)

Sujata Dahiya (Feb 05, 2004 01:02 a.m.):
Santosh ji aap kamal hai .
Dudee uncle aap bemisal hai .

Carry on .
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Dear Dheeraj, Ashok, Amardeep and all
pasand ky liye danyavad

TutAy- murjhye phool
Kahbi Khil nahi sakaty
Tutay huye dil bhi
Kahbi mil nahi sakaty

Dariya ky 2 kinary
Sath sath rah sakaty han
Parantu hakikat yah hae
Ki khabi mil nahi sakaty
 
that was really good santosh ji. aap koi kitab kyon nahi likhte, bhaut chalegi.
dudee uncle kya shayiri hai app ki, that was realy great of u.
 
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