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Ok so this is the much delayed concluding part of the story I posted a while ago. Please do add your two bits on how you liked it. Any drawbacks/suggestions/constructive criticisms are welcome. For those of you who didn’t read the first part of the story, I’m posting it again here: Dude’s...

Oh well, Shailendra, I see quite a dialogue going on here b/w Gagan, Vijay and Raj. I only triggered it :P Will try and give it an appropriate ending, and like Mr. Vijay says, a practical one too!

Hi Sumeet! You know, I have no clue who a metrosexual male is! I have some rough ideas but well, nothing concrete. And I dont know where the story is going or what is being told in it. I wrote it in a light mood just coz i felt like it. It is not an honest peice of writing but I enjoyed penning...

Hola! Hi Vinod! How have you been? Point taken, sir. I was playing with words when I wrote this, which is not to say that I’m giving excuses! Agree with you completely on writing a few pages before the story actually starts taking shape, instead of writing on the computer. I scribble poetry...

:) Hi Shailendra, Thank you for the encouragement after the ahem.. rough comment. It feels good to know that you decided to give me a chance, however unimaginable my attempt seemed to your mind at first :) On another note, I think it would be unfair to generalize the way to a man’s heart...

Hi all ! I’m posting after a long time. This short piece here is an attempt to delve into the metrosexual male’s mindset. I hope all you men out there would give me some helpful feedback, to give it a proper ending! :P Dude’s Dilemma When the hell did we come to this?!! I wondered as I...

Thanks :) Hi Kapoor, Feels strange to address you with a surname.. anyways, thank you for the comment. Point taken, I shall keep it in mind not to rush in that level of intimacy without prior plot and work. Its always good to know readers' honest opinions :)

thanks! Well, I lack confidence big time in sharing my poetry. I blog with a nom de plume. Its with the intention of developing some confidence that I'm posting stuff here whenever I can. Needless to say, the feedback is important. As for the ragnis: Unfortunately, I dont have that kind of...

Hello Col Virendra S Tavathia sir, Thank you for your kind words :)

Thanks! Hi Sumeet, Thank you for the insightful analysis :) Yes, the characters need to be explored more in order to make them more appealing to the reader. Shall try to overcome this flaw whenever I write henceforth. Every reader understands and perceives any piece of writing in a very...

Sure, Vandana! Please do tell me what you think. Thats why I put it up here. Your critical analysis is welcome :)

Thanks for the encouragement, Vinod. I need to work a lot on my writing :)

LOL! Dev, its definitely fiction :) I already have a poetry blog. Am not so sure about blogging anything other than poetry as of now. Thanks!

Hi Vandana! I wont recommend Two Lives as your first Seth. Read An Equal Music if you can get your hands on it. Its a beautiful love story. I keep telling everyone to read it! :P

Hi Dev, long time! Hope ur well :)

This is my first attempt at prose. Your suggestions/comments are welcome. I'm hoping for constructive criticism here. Thanks! :) Fresh Start He held her hand and drew closer. “I’m falling in love with you, Riya.. I know it’s hard for you and you need more time. I know you still have...

Whenever I finish reading a book, its “feel” lingers on for some time. Every book has its own feel, its own distinct character that makes one decide how one liked the book. Two Lives has left me feeling content. I write this review after a few hours of reading the last page. It gave me time to...

Hey Everybody! Its my darling sis’s Birthday today! Apologies for the delay in wishing you on your precious budday. You’re a wonderful wonderful person, Aditi; and me is glad to have you as my sis. Here’s wishing you a very Happy Birthday. May God bless you with all the happiness and love in...

Interesting I think its because Jats, as compared to Punjabis, are not ready to shun old beliefs and the old line of thinking. For example, marrying off girls early without giving them ample opportunities to pursue a career and giving importance to other issues(paying off debts, harvest...

I am not in my best spirits today. Perhaps it’s the fever that’s getting to me, or perhaps it’s the things that aren’t falling in the right places. I hate it when things I have control on down turn out right. Anyways, I’ve been wanting to write on religion for the past couple of days. The...