hi

[bawlajat]

sabko apni ram ram
eb ek or kavita padh lo

Some words you never say​

Some fears you never put away​

Someone you remember everyday​

Someone who is your last ray​

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Sometime you just wanna close your eyes​

Sometime you wanna listen to those lullabies​

Sometime you wanna feel your dream​

Sometime you ask yourself where you have been​

 

[bawlajat]

bhai aaaj mood aacha hai to laage laage ek or padh lo
title hai Love

Someone you know very well​

Whose presence rings a bell?​

Some you think of everyday​

Lots of things in your heart​

But you can’t say​

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Sometimes you want to go with the flow​

No boundaries, No directions​

Still no worries​

But you don’t want to be slow​

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When straight things looks like a curve​

Don’t worry, its nothing, its only love ​

 

[mothsara1st]

Bhai jalveer dangi tere dono kaveeta jaroor badhiya e hongee ...par mere e inka or chor samjha main nahin aann lag rahya sai itne sare some and somtimes dekh kai main sometimes some confuse ho jata hoon.......

 

[choudharyneelam]

Friend i also tried a little like you...hope you and all others like it...aur kahin kami ho to wo jaroor point out karna so that i can make it better next time

Some feelings you can't hide
Shows your emotions tide

Some pains you can't resist
Love makes forget all with a twist

Some tears you can't stop
Brings smile when someone makes you feel at top

Some happiness you can't take
To see him happy with other the next morning you awake

 

[bawlajat]

hey neelam
its a very nice attempt
keep it up
n i write just for fun i m not pro
n thanks for the appreciation
talk to u later

 

[bawlajat]

bhai surjeete some ar sometime ke chakker main kit par gaya tu
kavita padhan khater hain uska ras kadhan khater koni
main to time paas ar maje khater likh di thi

 

[choudharyneelam]

hey neelam
its a very nice attempt
keep it up
n i write just for fun i m not pro
n thanks for the appreciation
talk to u later

Thanks!! Friend

 

[bawlajat]

hi Neelam
read this one
i hope u ll like it

A night full of stars​

A hand full of flowers​

I will be on my knee​

I am not sure, but may be​

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If it is my dream​

I won’t complain​

Everybody knows​

Love comes with pain​

Will she be ready? Let us see​

I don’t know, but may be

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Not lips but eyes speak in love​

I heard so​

Love will make its own way​

I think so​

God created love​

Will love make it? Let us see​

I can’t say, but may be​

 

[rajeshrathee]

Dangi bhai sahib

welcome to jatland

 

[sunitahooda]

Rajesh Ji aap ke welcome kare paachey samjh mai aaya ke yo Introductory thread tha....mai to kaal iss mai badd kai chup-chap likadd aayi thi

Dangi bhai sahib

welcome to jatland

 

[choudharyneelam]

hi Neelam
read this one
i hope u ll like it

A night full of stars

A hand full of flowers
I will be on my knee
I am not sure, but may be​

If it is my dream
I won’t complain
Everybody knows
Love comes with pain
Will she be ready? Let us see​

I don’t know, but may be

​

Not lips but eyes speak in love

I heard so
Love will make its own way
I think so
God created love
Will love make it? Let us see
I can’t say, but may be​

This one is also nice

 

[bawlajat]

thanks rathee bhai

 

[ritu]

hahahhaahah sunitta k hogaya bebe ghane dina m ayi se na.aajkal jatland me hi hello bhi kavita likh k hove se.hehehe.er koi baat kahni ho tane bebe er deswal sir ki rabad t bachani ho t tu bhi kavita likh diye oski fer va rabadproof ho jagi.ja su bebe k bera deswal sir ka bhoot padta ho.

Rajesh Ji aap ke welcome kare paachey samjh mai aaya ke yo Introductory thread tha....mai to kaal iss mai badd kai chup-chap likadd aayi thi

 

[mothsara1st]

bhai surjeete some ar sometime ke chakker main kit par gaya tu
kavita padhan khater hain uska ras kadhan khater koni
main to time paas ar maje khater likh di thi

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha hs ha ha ha ha ha ha h..............good comment jalveer bhai ........"Kavita padhann khater hai uska ras kadhan khater koni"......damn cooooooooool.....haha ha ha hah

 

[bawlajat]

ok sunita
thoda saa to time lagja ga tera sense of humour sanjhan main
jib tak ms hooda tu teri bebe te do baat kar le ar main
intezar intezar intezar

 

[sunitahooda]

Jab tere PM ka jawab manne PM mai diya to Mere PM ka jawab aade de kai ke kahna chave sai????

 

[ravinderdahiya]

Arre dangi, Tu to poet ho gaya angreja k desh mein ja k,
aaj Kal to pooray ballad likhan laag raha hai,
Lagay raha

 

[skarmveer]

Bhai Jaivir Dangi,

Aap ney time pass me bahut badhiya likha hai, Aagey bhee time pass me he likhana, Jadater log kavi bankey Dukhi ker detay hai.

ur Bhai yo Bawalajat kau likh diya.

Good Luck
Karmveer Chahal

bhai surjeete some ar sometime ke chakker main kit par gaya tu
kavita padhan khater hain uska ras kadhan khater koni
main to time paas ar maje khater likh di thi

 

[bawlajat]

bhai karmveer aapki baat ka pura-2 dhayan rakha jayaga
or aage bhi time paas ke liye hi likha jaayega
bus yun hi thora-2 badhava dete rahna
aapke saath hamara bhi waqt gujar jayaga

 

[bawlajat]

Jab tere PM ka jawab manne PM mai diya to Mere PM ka jawab aade de kai ke kahna chave sai????

sunita yo pm ke bala hai??????????????