Tum

[swati]

SABHI JATLAND WASION KO MERI NAMASTE AUR DEEPAWLI KI BAHUT-BAHUT SHUBH KAMNAAYEIN

"YE AAP SAB LOG JAANTE HO IB LO MAINE TUMEIN JITNI BHI KAVITA / SHER SUNAAYE SAARE KAHIN NA KAHIN TAI CHIPKAYE HUE THE "

PAR DIKO YO JO IB SUNAN JAARI BHI YO NIRA ORIGINAL VERSION HAI KHUD LIKHA HAI , TO EMOTIONS JUD RE MERE ISKI GEL................ACHAA LAGE TO TAARIF KARNA NA BHULIO.

"TUM"

MERI SAANSO MEIN TUM BASE HO AISE ,

PAANI MEIN HO 'OXYGEN' JAISE,

MERI ZINDGI KA TUM PYAAR HO PEHLA,

MATHS KA JAISE KIO FORMULA,

MERE LIYE TUM ITNE AZEEZ HO ,

ACCOUNTS KI JAISE TUM 'BALANCE SHEET' HO,

MERE LIYE TUM HO ITNE IMPORTANT,

JAISE KISI FIRM MEIN 'MANAGEMENT',

MERE LIYE TUMHARA PYAAR HAI ANMOL,

SARDI AUR KHANSI MEIN JAISE "D'COLD"

 

[addy]

watch that step..!!

its really dicy to fall in love whn u r still in school and that too with ur chem/accts professor!!! That can spark really deadly reactions...Anyway..live it up!!

 

[anil_rathee]

Really nice

good one

waiting for more like this.......

 

[sparsh]

SABHI JATLAND WASION KO MERI NAMASTE AUR DEEPAWLI KI BAHUT-BAHUT SHUBH KAMNAAYEIN

"YE AAP SAB LOG JAANTE HO IB LO MAINE TUMEIN JITNI BHI KAVITA / SHER SUNAAYE SAARE KAHIN NA KAHIN TAI CHIPKAYE HUE THE "

PAR DIKO YO JO IB SUNAN JAARI BHI YO NIRA ORIGINAL VERSION HAI KHUD LIKHA HAI , TO EMOTIONS JUD RE MERE ISKI GEL................ACHAA LAGE TO TAARIF KARNA NA BHULIO.

"TUM"

MERI SAANSO MEIN TUM BASE HO AISE ,

PAANI MEIN HO 'OXYGEN' JAISE,

MERI ZINDGI KA TUM PYAAR HO PEHLA,

MATHS KA JAISE KIO FORMULA,

MERE LIYE TUM ITNE AZEEZ HO ,

ACCOUNTS KI JAISE TUM 'BALANCE SHEET' HO,

MERE LIYE TUM HO ITNE IMPORTANT,

JAISE KISI FIRM MEIN 'MANAGEMENT',

MERE LIYE TUMHARA PYAAR HAI ANMOL,

SARDI AUR KHANSI MEIN JAISE "D'COLD"

nice one buddy

 

[choudharyneelam]

Hi Swati

This one is really great ...ek ek baat ko bahaut acche tareeke se kaha hai....keep it up !!

Keep Smiling
Neelam

 

[swati]

thanks every one!

 

[skarmveer]

Good One,

Verry Nice, keep it up.

Karmveer

 

[prashantacmet]

This one is really great ...ek ek baat ko bahaut acche tareeke se kaha hai....keep it up !!

 

[nitika]

Really good one swati bebe
keep writing
aapne yeh talent kahan chuppa rakha tha

 

[dskadyan]

"TUM" se kun

Re madam swati khub likhya.Bas nu toh bata ek yo TUM se kun.Chal padya diya is ne te.Dekh kade koi albadi chora na tha le jaa is all-in-one kunji ne.
Very nice.

 

[swati]

Re madam swati khub likhya.Bas nu toh bata ek yo TUM se kun.Chal padya diya is ne te.Dekh kade koi albadi chora na tha le jaa is all-in-one kunji ne.
Very nice.

sir ye TUM sir ek kalpna aur kuch nahi ab aap ye mat kehna ye kalpna kaun hai