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choudharyneelam

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I created this thread for it as it was not matching with yaadon ke pal...and i didn't wanted to disturb the continuity going at that thread...that's moving beautifully so i thought of putting it in a seperate thread....:) ...will write more in the future....till then anybody can share more about it.


Kabhi hanste-hansana kabhi gambheerta se sochna
Kabhi khud baccha banna kabhi bacchon ko samajhna
Kabhi maa-baap ki ungli pakadna kabhi unka sahara banna
Kabhi hai himalaya chadhna kabhi asaan dagar chalna
Iss pal hai kyushiyon ka manzar to agle pal gamon ko sahna
Ek aur se andar aana to duji aur se hai bahar jana
Isi ka naam to zindagi hai, aur hum sabko hai apna farz nibhana
Kya pata kal mile na mile aisa janam daubara
Issliye isko har haal mein hanste-gaate beeetana
 
gr8 poem neelam ...
keep it up....
gr8 thought thoughts indeed...
in this fast it life, ppl like me really need this philosophy of life...
you really posses deep thoughts about life...
keep going......
i got my food for thought today :)
nice thought to end the day with ......
 
Bahut achha likha hai neelam.. i m adding few more lines...


Kabhi kathor hakikat to kabhi sundar vaham zindagi
Kabhi anjaan ajnabi to kabhi koi hamdam zindagi
Kabhi bewafa dilbar to kabhi dilkash sanam zindagi
Kabhi hal pal khushi to kabhi gam he gam zindagi
Kabhi pyaari hansi to kabhi bheege nayan zindagi
Kabhi rukha patjhad to kabhi suhana mausam zindagi
Kabhi apno se nafrat to kabhi gairo pe raham zindagi
Aur hum jaiso ke liye to bas kaagaz aur kalam zindagi
 
divyakadyan said:
Bahut achha likha hai neelam.. i m adding few more lines...


Kabhi kathor hakikat to kabhi sundar vaham zindagi
Kabhi anjaan ajnabi to kabhi koi hamdam zindagi
Kabhi bewafa dilbar to kabhi dilkash sanam zindagi
Kabhi hal pal khushi to kabhi gam he gam zindagi
Kabhi pyaari hansi to kabhi bheege nayan zindagi
Kabhi rukha patjhad to kabhi suhana mausam zindagi
Kabhi apno se nafrat to kabhi gairo pe raham zindagi
Aur hum jaiso ke liye to bas kaagaz aur kalam zindagi
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very good Divya...keep writing more...

Zindagi koi khwaab nahin ek hakeekat hai
Jo har raah pe deti ek nayi naseehat hai
Iske bina hum sabki yahan kya keemat hai
Isko samjhna bhi har aadmi ki nazaakat hai


 
nikimca said:
gr8 poem neelam ...
keep it up....
gr8 thought thoughts indeed...
in this fast it life, ppl like me really need this philosophy of life...
you really posses deep thoughts about life...
keep going......
i got my food for thought today :)
nice thought to end the day with ......
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thanks friend...there are many great members those have more deep feelings than me...you will come in contact with such people soon :)

keep enjoying!!
 
Jo haqeeqat mein badle wo ek khawab zindagi
Insaano ke liye to karte rahna karam zindagi
Sachhaai aur jhuth bas khel hai duniyan mein
Kabhi foolon ki sez aur kabhi beraham zindagi
 
Kabhi tutta khwaab dikhati to agle pal hakeekat ka khwaab sajati zindagi
Kabhi jeette ko harati to kabhi jeet ke har shikhar tak pahaunchna sikhati zindagi
Kabhi ek kadwa sach to kabhi ek jhooth ke sahare tutte bandhan bachati zindagi
Kabhi hai ye mast lahar ya kabhi banke bhanwar kisi ki kashti dubati zindagi
 
choudharyneelam said:
Kabhi tutta khwaab dikhati to agle pal hakeekat ka khwaab sajati zindagi
Kabhi jeette ko harati to kabhi jeet ke har shikhar tak pahaunchna sikhati zindagi
Kabhi ek kadwa sach to kabhi ek jhooth ke sahare tutte bandhan bachati zindagi
Kabhi hai ye mast lahar ya kabhi banke bhanwar kisi ki kashti dubati zindagi
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very nice poem again neelam bahanjee,

netra..............
 
netrapalsingh said:
very nice poem again neelam bahanjee,

netra..............
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bhai aap pahle ye bataiye ki baar baar jee lagake aap mujhe aunty hone ka ahsaas karwa rahein hain kya... i'm still a DAMSEL my dear brother..so don't use JEE after bahan...ok bade bhai :D :D ..and thanks for liking all my poems...doston se lines jodni seekhi aur fir apni soch aur vichar usmein bhare...so simple to do and very interesting also :)
 
Very Nice Namesake,

keep it up.....!

equally well is from divya and ofcourse vijay's always there to contribute when its talk of poetry :)

 
zindagi h vo meri saheli
jiski hatheli pakad kar m chali
kabhi to isne pahado p thand me pahuchaya mujhe
to kabhi marusthal ki havao me tapaya mujhe
sab rishte kisi na kisi mod p haath chuda gaye
par zindagi ne maut se milne se pahle na chodne ka mujhse wada kiya h
 
Ek mahakati hui si rangeen shaam hai zindagi
Apno ko deti pyaar ka koi paigaam hai zindagi
Insaan wahi hai jo apno mein khushiyaan baante
Khudgarzon ke liye to bahut badnaam hai zindagi
 
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ritu said:
zindagi h vo meri saheli
jiski hatheli pakad kar m chali
kabhi to isne pahado p thand me pahuchaya mujhe
to kabhi marusthal ki havao me tapaya mujhe
sab rishte kisi na kisi mod p haath chuda gaye
par zindagi ne maut se milne se pahle na chodne ka mujhse wada kiya h
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well said Ritu...nice to see something again from your side...keep writing.

Kal parson main bhi mili hun iss saheli se
Abhi to mujhe thoda sa sikhaya hai
Bola hai ki aage fir milegi mujhse
Bahaut kuch abhi mujhe sikhana hai


Har pal ek naye rang mein humein rangti zindagi
Jo naa dehka kabhi aise bhi rang banati zindagi
Dhoop-chaanv har mausam mein rahna sikhati zindagi
Naye naye logon se rishtey jodna bhi sikhati zindagi
 
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Very nice composition Neelam bebey.Keep it up...!

Socha tou paya khudgarjj hei jinddagi
Jab jiya tou paya ek FARZ hei jinddagi

Na ronne se bannti na sonne se banti
Maa-Baap ka seedhha KARZ hei jindaggi
Jab jiya......................

Jahan se gujjro,Mohobat bikhero
Dujje ka gamm harr lenna hei jinddagi
Jb jiya........................................
 
Fabulous!!

devdahiya said:
Very nice composition Neelam bebey.Keep it up...!

Socha tou paya khudgarjj hei jinddagi
Jab jiya tou paya ek FARZ hei jinddagi

Na ronne se bannti na sonne se banti
Maa-Baap ka seedhha KARZ hei jindaggi
Jab jiya......................

Jahan se gujjro,Mohobat bikhero
Dujje ka gamm harr lenna hei jinddagi
Jb jiya........................................
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Sir nice to see such a good composition...i was waiting for your post on this :)
 
zindagi ka mujhse mera zindagi se
sanso se juda ye ataut nata h
me jo kal ko na rahu jab is dunia me
to mere zindagi ka baki sab se
yado ke saath judkar ek naya rishta ban jana h
 
Its really very nice

choudharyneelam said:
I created this thread for it as it was not matching with yaadon ke pal...and i didn't wanted to disturb the continuity going at that thread...that's moving beautifully so i thought of putting it in a seperate thread....:) ...will write more in the future....till then anybody can share more about it.


Kabhi hanste-hansana kabhi gambheerta se sochna
Kabhi khud baccha banna kabhi bacchon ko samajhna
Kabhi maa-baap ki ungli pakadna kabhi unka sahara banna
Kabhi hai himalaya chadhna kabhi asaan dagar chalna
Iss pal hai kyushiyon ka manzar to agle pal gamon ko sahna
Ek aur se andar aana to duji aur se hai bahar jana
Isi ka naam to zindagi hai, aur hum sabko hai apna farz nibhana
Kya pata kal mile na mile aisa janam daubara
Issliye isko har haal mein hanste-gaate beeetana
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Hi ... Neelam...

Very Nice composition....really gr8...
 
ritu said:
zindagi ka mujhse mera zindagi se
sanso se juda ye ataut nata h
me jo kal ko na rahu jab is dunia me
to mere zindagi ka baki sab se
yado ke saath judkar ek naya rishta ban jana h
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Kal jo beet gaya usko kuch pal ke liye yaad rakhti zindagi
Aage kadam badha dene ke baad sirf nayi raahein dikhati zindagi
Piche mud ke jo dekhe usko peeche kheench le jaati ye zindagi
Aur jo doob gaya yaadon mein uski aage ki raah kamzor banati zindagi
 
choudharyneelam said:
Kal jo beet gaya usko kuch pal ke liye yaad rakhti zindagi
Aage kadam badha dene ke baad sirf nayi raahein dikhati zindagi
Piche mud ke jo dekhe usko peeche kheench le jaati ye zindagi
Aur jo doob gaya yaadon mein uski aage ki raah kamzor banati zindagi
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Jinse mohabbat ki humne woh kisi aur ko apnaa samjahe
Jinko humne chaha tha woh hamkon yahan begaana samajhe
Ye zindagi beet gai apno aur begano talaash mein
Intezaar hai uska jo humen bas ek dewaana samajhe
 
vijay said:
Jinse mohabbat ki humne woh kisi aur ko apnaa samjahe
Jinko humne chaha tha woh hamkon yahan begaana samajhe
Ye zindagi beet gai apno aur begano talaash mein
Intezaar hai uska jo humen bas ek dewaana samajhe
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Beganon ke liye kai baar apnon se naate tudwaati ye zindagi
Fir ek din begane ko bhi lejaake kahin door udaas banati zindagi
Har ek din hum jeete jaate aur kam hoti jaati ye zindagi
Sunna apne se jude bandhanon ko aur aise hi intezaar khatam karwati zindagi
 
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