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Aaj phir dil ko thodi khushi si mehsus hui..
berang zindagi mein roshni si mehsus hui..

Uska wo ek pal ka sath.. laga jaise meri saans hi tham jayegi..
jane kitne kitne dino baad in hontho ko hasi si mehsus hui..

Wo fir mujhe mera farishta sa lagne laga..
aaj phir laga ki usse b meri kuch kami si mehsus hui..

Yu laga jaise khuda ne sun li meri fariyaad..
aaj fir uski ibadat karne ki dilllagi si mehsus hui..

Laga jaise koi hai jo aaj bhi yaad karta hai..
jane kitno dino baad aaj uski bandagi si mehsus hui...

Aaj phir dil se jeene ki chah umdi hai mann..
zindagi ek arse baad zindagi si mehsus hui..!:)
 
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Nice !

maniisha said:
Aaj phir dil ko thodi khushi si mehsus hui..
berang zindagi mein roshni si mehsus hui..

Uska wo ek pal ka sath.. laga jaise meri saans hi tham jayegi..
jane kitne kitne dino baad in hontho ko hasi si mehsus hui..

Wo fir mujhe mera farishta sa lagne laga..
aaj phir laga ki usse b meri kuch kami si mehsus hui..

Yu laga jaise khuda ne sun li meri fariyaad..
aaj fir uski ibadat karne ki dilllagi si mehsus hui..

Laga jaise koi hai jo aaj bhi yaad karta hai..
jane kitno dino baad aaj uski bandagi si mehsus hui...

Aaj phir dil se jeene ki chah umdi hai mann..
zindagi ek arse baad zindagi si mehsus hui..!:)
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Few lines from my side :) :

जब कभी भी उनका जिक्र हुआ किसी महफ़िल में
हमारे दिल की धड़कने कुछ चलती सी महसूस हुई ||

बडे दिनो बाद पुकारा है किसी ने इतने प्यार से
उम्मीद की शमा फिर से जलती सी महसूस हुई ||

शायद उनके नाम के बिना अधूरा है हमारा नाम
'विजय' के नाम में आज गलती सी महसूस हुई ||
 
Anil bhai ye shayaron ki mehafil hai...... mere bhi kam hi samajh main aata hai.
vo kehte hain na:

kam hi hote hain jajbaaton ko samajhne vaale
isliye shayad shayaron ki bastiyan nahi hoti :)

very well written manisha ji
 
maniisha said:
Aaj phir dil ko thodi khushi si mehsus hui..
berang zindagi mein roshni si mehsus hui..

Aaj phir dil se jeene ki chah umdi hai mann..
zindagi ek arse baad zindagi si mehsus hui..!:)
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ye padh ker aaj fir mujhe ek song ki 2 lines yaad aa gayi.....

Aaj phir dil ne ek tamanna ki,,,,
Aaj phir dil ko humne samjhaya.....

Lines from the song 'Tumko dekho to ye khayal aaya'...from Saath-Saath. I wonder about these lines ...this happens so often in life na...!!!
 
sandeeprathee said:
Anil bhai ye shayaron ki mehafil hai...... mere bhi kam hi samajh main aata hai.
vo kehte hain na:

kam hi hote hain jajbaaton ko samajhne vaale
isliye shayad shayaron ki bastiyan nahi hoti :)

very well written manisha ji
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Wah wah Sandeep.....ek meri taraf se....

Tumhara Jikr aur apna bayan-e-haal raha,
Ye shaayri ka zamana to bemisaal raha
 
maniisha said:
Aaj phir dil ko thodi khushi si mehsus hui..
berang zindagi mein roshni si mehsus hui..

Uska wo ek pal ka sath.. laga jaise meri saans hi tham jayegi..
jane kitne kitne dino baad in hontho ko hasi si mehsus hui..

Wo fir mujhe mera farishta sa lagne laga..
aaj phir laga ki usse b meri kuch kami si mehsus hui..

Yu laga jaise khuda ne sun li meri fariyaad..
aaj fir uski ibadat karne ki dilllagi si mehsus hui..

Laga jaise koi hai jo aaj bhi yaad karta hai..
jane kitno dino baad aaj uski bandagi si mehsus hui...

Aaj phir dil se jeene ki chah umdi hai mann..
zindagi ek arse baad zindagi si mehsus hui..!:)
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Nice excerpt you remind me of pretty old song ...

Aaj phir jeene ki tamanna hai
Aaj phir marne ka iraada hai ......
 
aabhisheksirohi said:
Nice excerpt you remind me of pretty old song ...

Aaj phir jeene ki tamanna hai
Aaj phir marne ka iraada hai ......
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इसी ब्रिज....:confused:... से क्या भाई जी.......:p:D....?
आजै आण लाग रया सूं मैं भी...:cool:....मुम्बई....:eek:...?
दोपहर तक रूक जाइयो...;):D..?
 
One of Guljars best........

तेरी आँखों से ही खुलते हें सवेरों के उफक
तेरी आँखों से ही बंद होती है ये सीप की रात
तेरी आँखें हें या सजदे में है मासूम नमाजी
पलकें खुलती हैं तो यूँ गूंज के उठती है नजर
जैसे मंदिर से जरस की चले नमनाक हवा
और झुकी हैं तो बस जैसे अजान खत्म हुई हो
तेरी आँखें, तेरी ठहरी हुई गमगीन सी आँखें
तेरी आँखों से ही तखलीक हुई है सच्ची
तेरी आँखों से ही तखलीक हुई है ये हयात
 
Aasman me taare naa jaane kuchh kum lagne lage hain
Unki har khwahish ke liye taare kahi par utarne lage hain
Apne har aansu ko bhula kar shaayad zami par bikharne lage hai
Unki ek muskaan ki khaatir sab unki raaho se gujarne lage hain


.....................wah wah.....wah wah.......Online Likha......apne aap bana bana ke..!:)
 
crsnadar said:
Aasman me taare naa jaane kuchh kum lagne lage hain
Unki har khwahish ke liye taare kahi par utarne lage hain
Apne har aansu ko bhula kar shaayad zami par bikharne lage hai
Unki ek muskaan ki khaatir sab unki raaho se gujarne lage hain


.....................wah wah.....wah wah.......Online Likha......apne aap bana bana ke..!:)
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WAH WAH...WAH WAH....WAH WAH....!!!
 
Apne tute makaan ko dekhun,,,
Ya tere aasmaan ko dekhun,,,
Har kadam pe ajab musibat hai,,,
Dil ko dekhun ki jaan ko dekhun.
 
Superb..!

neels said:
Apne tute makaan ko dekhun,,,
Ya tere aasmaan ko dekhun,,,
Har kadam pe ajab musibat hai,,,
Dil ko dekhun ki jaan ko dekhun.
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Superb Mam ...superb,
You have now revealed your Hegemony all the way.
Having Doctorate label already you have been proved to be a Maestro of Shayri also.
Salute to the Panache.

...................wo actually mam agar main bhi sahi se padh likh liya hota to shaayad main bhi Dr Rahul.......i mean shayad ......ho gaya hota... :)
Phir main bhi logo ke Dil ka ilaaj karta...
Thanx :)
 
crsnadar said:
Aasman me taare naa jaane kuchh kum lagne lage hain
Unki har khwahish ke liye taare kahi par utarne lage hain
Apne har aansu ko bhula kar shaayad zami par bikharne lage hai
Unki ek muskaan ki khaatir sab unki raaho se gujarne lage hain


.....................wah wah.....wah wah.......Online Likha......apne aap bana bana ke..!:)
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vah bhai ke baat kahi sa....... likhna to manne bhi ghana sa par tame koni..... ke sa na ki 19 ko meri pariksa sa..... us ke baad sab ka jawab likhunga.....

par apne jo likha sa jabardast likha sa.....
Unki ek muskaan ki khaatir sab unki raaho se gujarne lage hain
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.. lage raho bhai uhn hi likhte raho par likhne mien itne magan na ho jana ki jin ki khatir likhi hai vo hi samjhe apko begana.
 
Jo keh na sake

jo keh na sake wo fasana yaad aata hai
guzra hua dilkash jamana yaad aata hai
jab husn se ishq takraya tha kabhi
ghayal hua tha ek parwana yaad aata hai
dil se mohabbat ke tufaan uthe the
jab aankhon ka sapne sajana yaad aata hai
kasturi jaise din mehakte the
mere raaton ka gungunana yaad aata hai
aankhon ka mil kar jhuk jana nahin bhula
hothon ka thar_tharana yaad aata hai
mera usko kankhiyon se dekhna
baar baar aur uska wo muskurana yaad aata hai
raaton ko tanha yaad mein kisiki...
dhuan udata ek deewana yaad aata hai
 
Har ek manzar par udasi chayi hai,
Chand ki roshni main bhi kuch kami si aayi hai,
Akele acche they hum apne aashiyane main,
Jaane kyun laut kar aaj phir teri yaad aayi hai...:)
 
maniisha said:
Har ek manzar par udasi chayi hai,
Chand ki roshni main bhi kuch kami si aayi hai,
Akele acche they hum apne aashiyane main,
Jaane kyun laut kar aaj phir teri yaad aayi hai...:)
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Oye Hello...ye to cheating hai...:):):)

ye to SMS tha...ha aur kya...ek baar mere mobile pe bhi aaya tha...kisi ne bheja tha...

Anyway jo bhi hai...Badhiya hai...OK hai...Cool hai...:):):)

Keep it up
 
maniisha said:
Har ek manzar par udasi chayi hai,
Chand ki roshni main bhi kuch kami si aayi hai,
Akele acche they hum apne aashiyane main,
Jaane kyun laut kar aaj phir teri yaad aayi hai...:)
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Good stuff indeed!


Apni muskrahtton se uddasiyon ke manzzar ka manzzar Suhana kar dou
Har tutte howe dil ki gehraiyon mein tammannaon ka sansaar bhar dou
Agar firr bhi na kar pao ujjalla sehme huwe maaholl mein
Tou Appne dil ke armaanno ko kissi ki khushiyon ke liye Quarbban kar dou.
 
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