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Ek din bahut hota hai rishte ban jaane ke liye................

Tere shabdo ki hatheli ne mere man ki dharti ko chua tha
Bahut kuch keh gayi thi teri awaaz ki wo chup si nazar..........

Yu to ek din me kuch hi pahar hote hai
Par ek poori zindagi jee aayi thi mai.............

Us din mai kuch chod aayi thi peeche us mod pe
Kuch bikhre sapne bhi pade ho shayad dard ke teer liye..........

Ho sake to unhe utha kar pare hata dena
Kahi chubh na jaaye tumhaare pairo me koi............

Ek din bahut hota hai rishte ban jaane ke liye................
 
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dilzaleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :)

bahut badiya likha dhaka ji bahut hi badiya :)
 
Aaah! watta coincidence, am just listening to 'Rishtey' the cool rock song from the movie Metro!! :rolleyes:

It goes like this 'Rishtey to nahi Rishton ki parchhiyan mile'....

Am kinda naive in this Shero-Shayri thing but indeed this song makes sense in today's life....very well describes the paradox of 'Rishtey' in kinda realistic manner!! :)


Btw, gud stuff CA saab!! ;):p


Rock on
Jit
 
shwetadhaka said:
Ek din bahut hota hai rishte ban jaane ke liye................
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बहुत अच्छा लिखा है श्वेता

रिश्तों के बारे में मेरी तरफ़ से भी २ पंक्तिया :


कभी उमर छोटी पड़ जाती है रिश्तों को निभाने के लिए
तो कभी एक पल भी बहुत ज्यादा है तोड़ जाने के लिए ||
 
vijay said:
बहुत अच्छा लिखा है श्वेता

रिश्तों के बारे में मेरी तरफ़ से भी २ पंक्तिया :


कभी उमर छोटी पड़ जाती है रिश्तों को निभाने के लिए
तो कभी एक पल भी बहुत ज्यादा है तोड़ जाने के लिए ||
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Hamne umar bhar khud ko jalaakar rishto ko taap di thi
Ek din barsa aisa paani jo baha le gaya rishto ko kahi..........


Aaj tak doobte utarte khade hai usi mod pe hum to
Suna hai wo hame doobta chod gaye hai.........
 
shwetadhaka said:
Hamne umar bhar khud ko jalaakar rishto ko taap di thi
Ek din barsa aisa paani jo baha le gaya rishto ko kahi..........
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वो रिश्ते ही क्या जो सावन की पहली ही बारिश में बह गए
जरा देखो, लोग समंदर की लहरों पर आशियाना बनाए बैठे हैं ||
 
vijay said:
वो रिश्ते ही क्या जो सावन की पहली ही बारिश में बह गए
जरा देखो, लोग समंदर की लहरों पर आशियाना बनाए बैठे हैं ||
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Samundar ki leharo pe aashiyaana banaaya tha kabhi ........... par aaj samundar ki god me hi pade hai wo rote hue se rishte ........ kabhi aasmaan ke aanchal se khud ko baandh ude the door tak....... par aaj aasmaan ke haatho ne uthayi hui hai rishto ki kuch bikhri kirche............
 
shwetadhaka said:
Samundar ki leharo pe aashiyaana banaaya tha kabhi ........... par aaj samundar ki god me hi pade hai wo rote hue se rishte ........ kabhi aasmaan ke aanchal se khud ko baandh ude the door tak....... par aaj aasmaan ke haatho ne uthayi hui hai rishto ki kuch bikhri kirche............
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Hey Shweta Di .. :)
Gud goin ..
wanna share some lines I have read somewhere... sometime ago..
Bhulne se bi bulayi nahi jaati ye tho ab...:)

Yeh bante toot te rishte
kay mol hai inka es jeevan mei
jab chahe bane dost, jab chahe bane dushman
khele mere jeevan se, yeh nirmohe rishte

Kabhi to bahar aayege
kabhi to zindagi muskurayege
rote huey hans denge hum
unke aagosh mei kho jayenge hum

Tootay hue rishton ko jod lena tum
muskurakar, udassi se daaman chhura lena tum
kabhi jo yaad aaye hamari, utha kar tasveer meri
kavita ke saath hi chhippha dena tum...:)
 
Wah Ji Wah..!

Itne saare kavi chhupe hue the JatLand par aur pata bhi naa chala
Har shabd hai itna gahra ki bahut der padha par arth pata bhi naa chala
Kavita ke har wakya me chhupa tha saransh usko samjhe to kuchh jaana
Par intna samjhate hi paaya ki kitna samay nikla isme pata bhi naa chala
:)
 
maniisha said:
Yeh bante toot te rishte
kay mol hai inka es jeevan mei
jab chahe bane dost, jab chahe bane dushman
khele mere jeevan se, yeh nirmohe rishte
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Very nice lines, Manisha :)

Like to quote someone here :


तुम मेरी भूलों को भूलो
मैं अपनी पीड़ा को भूलूं
बस इतना सम्बन्ध बाकी रहे-
तुम मुझे याद कर लो, हंस लो
मैं तुम्हे याद कर लूँ, रो लूँ
- नीरज
 
Good one manisha..and all who posted there thoughts in this thread....To kuch shabd meri taraf se bhi....

waqt ki gaheraiyoon main kahin choot Jai...
jaise ki umadte lahroon se samandar rooth jai...
Tum kaho to kaho usko koi "Rishta" a-Tabasumm..
Main nahi maanta usko "Rishta" jo toot jai.....
 
crsnadar said:
Itne saare kavi chhupe hue the JatLand par aur pata bhi naa chala
Har shabd hai itna gahra ki bahut der padha par arth pata bhi naa chala
Kavita ke har wakya me chhupa tha saransh usko samjhe to kuchh jaana
Par intna samjhate hi paaya ki kitna samay nikla isme pata bhi naa chala
:)
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Thik aise hi hote hai rishte .........

Unme itne rang chupe hote hai ki kai baar hum pehchaan bhi nahi paate aur kai baar hum inko padhne ki koshish karte hai par arth nahi milta !

Rishto me chupi hoti hai kuch khaas baate jinko jitna samjho lagta hai kuch hai abhi jo nahi samajh paaye ab tak aur jab kuch samajh paate hai to kaafi kuch peeche choot jaata hai !

Anyways, jyada dimag na lagaaiyega:)
 
maniisha said:
Hey Shweta Di .. :)
Gud goin ..
wanna share some lines I have read somewhere... sometime ago..
Bhulne se bi bulayi nahi jaati ye tho ab...:)

Yeh bante toot te rishte
kay mol hai inka es jeevan mei
jab chahe bane dost, jab chahe bane dushman
khele mere jeevan se, yeh nirmohe rishte

Kabhi to bahar aayege
kabhi to zindagi muskurayege
rote huey hans denge hum
unke aagosh mei kho jayenge hum

Tootay hue rishton ko jod lena tum
muskurakar, udassi se daaman chhura lena tum
kabhi jo yaad aaye hamari, utha kar tasveer meri
kavita ke saath hi chhippha dena tum...:)
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Hi Mani Moderator :)

Good lines indeed, keep pouring ! :)
 
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