Wafa aur mohabbat

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Hi all,

This is my personal gazal written by me. Please contribute here your thoughts.


Wafa aur mohabbat ki tawwako ki unse
Hum hasino ki fitrat se kitne anjaan the.

Kinara kiya sabse sirf unki chahat main
Warna duniya main hamare kitne kadardaan the

Ek suhana safar bhi gujra hai is zindagi ka
Us daur main hum par wo kitne meharbaan the

Begano ki bheed main apne se dikhne wale
Ab samajh mein aaya wo kitne be-imaan the

Kisi se kabhi shikwa kiya bhi to kya
Hamare shabd bhi to kitne bejubaan the

Jamana bura hai aur kitne masoom hai woh
Ye sochkar hum khamkhan kitne pareshaan the

Kisi ki hifazat karte hue khud lut gaye
'Vijay' har daur main kitne nadaan the
 
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vijay said:
Hi all,

This is my personal gazal written by me. Please contribute here your thoughts.


Wafa aur mohabbat ki tawwako ki unse
Hum hasino ki fitrat se kitne anjaan the.[/B/]


Kinara kiya sabse sirf unki chahat main
Warna duniya main hamare kitne kadardaan the.

Ek suhana safar bhi gujra hai is zindagi ka
Us daur main hum par wo kitne meharbaan the.

Begano ki bheed main apne se dikhne wale
Ab samajh mein aaya wo kitne be-imaan the.

Wafa aur mohabbat ki tawwako ki unse
Hum hasino ki fitrat se kitne anjaan the.

Kisi se kabhi shikwa kiya bhi to kya
Hamare shabd bhi to kitne bejubaan the.

Jamana bura hai aur kitne masoom hai woh
Ye sochkar hum khamkhan kitne pareshaan the.

Kisi ki hifazat karte hue khud lut gaye
'Vijay' har daur main kitne nadaan the.
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Bhai iss ghazzal mei jajbaat phoot-2 kar bikhar rahe hein.......great composition all the way. You have the taste buddy.




Gustakh honne se behtar hei naddan rehna
Bewaffaon ki bewaffai ke barre mei mujhe bilkool kuchh nahin kehna
Unka kaam hei sittam karna
Par ei Vijay unki iss behayaai ko kissi na kissi ko paddta hei sehna
Kabhi tum ho kabhi hum,unka shikaar ban-ne ko
Chand nikalne se pehle rehta hei ek suraj teyyar dhhalne ko
Naddan rahe to bach gaye kayyammat se
Nahin to kya tumhara dil koi falttu tha bekar mei jalnne ko.
 
downtoearth said:
good indeed............
dude ye tawakko ka kya meaning hai,, is it a urdu word>? i hav heard tawazoo
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Rupendra, tawwako means ichha , ummeed, tammana and so on.......

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devdahiya said:
Bhai iss ghazzal mei jajbaat phoot-2 kar bikhar rahe hein.......great composition all the way. You have the taste buddy.

Gustakh honne se behtar hei naddan rehna
Bewaffaon ki bewaffai ke barre mei mujhe bilkool kuchh nahin kehna
Unka kaam hei sittam karna
Par ei Vijay unki iss behayaai ko kissi na kissi ko paddta hei sehna
Kabhi tum ho kabhi hum,unka shikaar ban-ne ko
Chand nikalne se pehle rehta hei ek suraj teyyar dhhalne ko
Naddan rahe to bach gaye kayyammat se
Nahin to kya tumhara dil koi falttu tha bekar mei jalnne ko.
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Mujhse se bhikhra bhi nahin aap se tuta bhi nahi
Dil mera phool nahi kaanch ka tukda bhi nahin
Kuchh na de paye use hum to dua hi de de
Woh jo apna bhi nahi paraya bhi nahin
 
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Wo chalte rahe challein baddal-2 kar
Aur ek hum thhe ke baat pe jamme rahe.
Ek chehre mei chehra chhupa tha unke
Aur hum unki seerat ko samajh na sakke.

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vijay said:
Mujhse se bhikhra bhi nahin aap se tuta bhi nahi
Dil mera phool nahi kaanch ka tukda bhi nahin
Kuchh na de paye use hum to dua hi de de
Woh jo apna bhi nahi paraya bhi nahin
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Mangga tha haath faila kar meine pyar unse
Aur wo meri jholli katton se bhar gaye
Baddla to hum bhi le sakte thhe ei dost
Par hum thhodda khudda se darr gaye.
 
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devdahiya said:
Wo chalte rahe challein baddal-2 kar
Aur ek hum thhe ke baat pe jamme rahe.
Ek chehre mei chehra chhupa tha unke
Aur hum unki seerat ko samajh na sakke.
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Chalna shikhaya tha humne jinhe ungali pakad pakad kar
Aaj woh bhi chalte hain humse nighhahen badal badal kar

devdahiya said:
Mangga tha haath faila kar meine pyar unse
Aur wo meri jholli katton se bhar gaye
Baddla to hum bhi le sakte thhe ei dost
Par hum thhodda khudda se darr gaye.
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Chalna hai to inhi kanto par chal kar aao
Mere ghar ke raste main koi gulistan nahi hai
 
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vijay said:
Chalna shikhaya tha humne jinhe ungali pakad pakad kar
Aaj woh bhi chalte hain humse nighhahen badal badal kar
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Dua meri firr bhi yahi hei khudda se,na de wo sajja bewaffai ki unko
Aakhir kabhi wo merre humnassi thhe
Ussne kiya wo usko mubarak
Chalo maan leta huun wo hi sahi thhe.



vijay said:
Chalna hai to inhi kanto par chal kar aao
Mere ghar ke raste main koi gulistan nahi hai
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Kanton pe chalne ki aadat banni hei,phullon ke kissne sapne liye hein
Kismat hammari mei jo raste hein,chaloonga unhi pe jo rabb nei diye hein.
 
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devdahiya said:
Dua meri firr bhi yahi hei khudda se,na de wo sajja bewaffai ki unko
Aakhir kabhi wo merre humnassi thhe
Ussne kiya wo usko mubarak
Chalo maan leta huun wo hi sahi thhe.
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Bewafai ki kasam raaj-e-muhabbat kya hai
Ek yeh baat jara humko batae jao
Taaki hum bhej saken apni tabahi ki khabar
Gar pata ho to koi apnaa to batae jao
 
vijay said:
Bewafai ki kasam raaj-e-muhabbat kya hai
Ek yeh baat jara humko batae jao
Taaki hum bhej saken apni tabahi ki khabar
Gar pata ho to koi apnaa to batae jao
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Unhein jo tha karnna wo kar ke challe gaye
Hum khadde-2 haath malte rahe
Rokka to bole sanam kuchh iss trah
Jaisse mille hon abhi naye-2
 
devdahiya said:
Unhein jo tha karnna wo kar ke challe gaye
Hum khadde-2 haath malte rahe
Rokka to bole sanam kuchh iss trah
Jaisse mille hon abhi naye-2
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Pass rahkar bhi na pahchan saka tu mujhko
Door se dekh kar ab hath hilata kya hai
Main tera kuchh bhi nahin hoon magar itna to bata
Dekh mujhko tere jehan main aata kya hai
 
vijay said:
Pass rahkar bhi na pahchan saka tu mujhko
Door se dekh kar ab hath hilata kya hai
Main tera kuchh bhi nahin hoon magar itna to bata
Dekh mujhko tere jehan main aata kya hai
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Matlab nikal gaya hei to pehchante nahin
Iss kaddar chilman dabbaye hein ki jaisse jante nahin
Agar chilman uthh jaye tumhari ek baar
Firr dekheinge kaisse tum mante nahin.
 
devdahiya said:
Matlab nikal gaya hei to pehchante nahin
Iss kaddar chilman dabbaye hein ki jaisse jante nahin
Agar chilman uthh jaye tumhari ek baar
Firr dekheinge kaisse tum mante nahin.
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Nazren mili magar aankhon main chahat nahin thi
Waqt ke saath saath unki nigahen bhi badal gai
 
vijay said:
Hi all,

This is my personal gazal written by me. Please contribute here your thoughts.


Wafa aur mohabbat ki tawwako ki unse
Hum hasino ki fitrat se kitne anjaan the.

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Beautiful......

RK^2
 
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Bhai, Log Baag Itne Dukhee hain Mohabaat Kar ke, Humein pataa na Thaa
Vo kya Khaaq Duniya se Ladeinge, Jo Mohabaat ke Gum ne Peet Diye...
 
jagmohan said:
Bhai, Log Baag Itne Dukhee hain Mohabaat Kar ke, Humein pataa na Thaa
Vo kya Khaaq Duniya se Ladeinge, Jo Mohabaat ke Gum ne Peet Diye...
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Sahi farmaya Malik Sahab.. magar,

Duniya jeet kar hum, jab ghar ko laute
sab kuch mera, unki ek nazar ne loot liya

RK^2
 
jagmohan said:
Bhai, Log Baag Itne Dukhee hain Mohabaat Kar ke, Humein pataa na Thaa
Vo kya Khaaq Duniya se Ladeinge, Jo Mohabaat ke Gum ne Peet Diye...
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Ha..ha..ha.. Jaggu sir shero-shayari chal rhi se....koe dukhi konya.........Aap bhi kar lete ho yo dramma uun te...ha..ha..ha.
 
jagmohan said:
Bhai, Log Baag Itne Dukhee hain Mohabaat Kar ke, Humein pataa na Thaa
Vo kya Khaaq Duniya se Ladeinge, Jo Mohabaat ke Gum ne Peet Diye...
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Respected Malik Sir,

Ye mohabbat ka gum kya mitayega humen
Ye garam khoon abhi bhi inqulaab par hai
Koi mita na paya humko is jahan main
Hum dastkhat samay ke dil ki kitab par hain



rkumar said:
Sahi farmaya Malik Sahab.. magar,

Duniya jeet kar hum, jab ghar ko laute
sab kuch mera, unki ek nazar ne loot liya

RK^2
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Unki fatah hui na hamari fatah hui
Afsos shart rakh ke hi unse sulah hui
Hamne to pal bhar main likh diya faisla
Sari umar magar unse hamari jirah hui
 
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vijay said:
Respected Malik Sir,



Ye mohabbat ka gum kya mitayega humen
Ye garam khoon abhi bhi inqulaab par hai
Koi mita na paya humko is jahan main
Hum dastkhat samay ke dil ki kitab par hain
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Pehle wo karte thhe koshish lubhane ki
Ruthh kar intezar karte thhe mere mannane ki
Hummein unke sivva kuchh bhi nahin lagta tha achchha
Issi ko kehte hein tajjurbbe ka kachcha

Wo dheerre se thhe aaye meri jinddagi mei,aur nikal gaye ek dumm
Hum tabb se behosh hein aur padde hein gumm-suum.
 
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