A Poem by a Girl

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Here I am reproducing an unpublished poem written by a girl :

"Flight of the phoenix

Like a phoenix I shall rise from ashes
Soar high like an eagle and touch the skies

Battered I might have been but defeated I am not
Treated like a burden I might have been but burdened I am not

My birth wasn’t rejoiced but my life is going to be a celebration
I will be hailed not by one but the whole generation

All the heads that had hung low under the burden of a girl child
Shall find in me their lost tranquility and forgotten pride

Despite all my flaws they showed me, I shall find love
For my hurt ego, bruised heart and the dreams I was deprived of.

I will make a place for myself, in the world that denies
If shoved again, I will make a world of my own better than their paradise

With my glory I shall dazzle those who ridiculed me
Punished me, belittled me and made me feel small

Every time I took a step ahead there they stood
In front of me raising a big dark wall

But I never gave in, never gave up
Little by little, step by step I scaled each brick and grew tall.

Like a phoenix I have risen from ashes
Like an Eagle I soar"

Don’t dare to stop me,

for I am at war.
 
Really a nice poem and heart touching also....
Rmandaura said:
Here I am reproducing an unpublished poem written by a girl :

"Flight of the phoenix

Like a phoenix I shall rise from ashes
Soar high like an eagle and touch the skies

Battered I might have been but defeated I am not
Treated like a burden I might have been but burdened I am not

My birth wasn’t rejoiced but my life is going to be a celebration
I will be hailed not by one but the whole generation

All the heads that had hung low under the burden of a girl child
Shall find in me their lost tranquility and forgotten pride

Despite all my flaws they showed me, I shall find love
For my hurt ego, bruised heart and the dreams I was deprived of.

I will make a place for myself, in the world that denies
If shoved again, I will make a world of my own better than their paradise

With my glory I shall dazzle those who ridiculed me
Punished me, belittled me and made me feel small

Every time I took a step ahead there they stood
In front of me raising a big dark wall

But I never gave in, never gave up
Little by little, step by step I scaled each brick and grew tall.

Like a phoenix I have risen from ashes
Like an Eagle I soar"

Don’t dare to stop me,

for I am at war.
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sunitahooda said:
Sir uski aur bhi compositions ho to please share with us:)
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Sunita, rest of the poems she has written for her own kids.
This poem was written by her for her friend who is a painter but could not muster courage to send her paintings for exhibition in a gallery and she was feeling very low. Tanu wrote this poem in 5-7 minutes and sent her to motivate her. The first reaction she got from her friend on phone was, tears and sobs. But I am happy that her friend participated in the exhibition for the first time and got good response. Even some art promoters have also contacted her.

This was Tanu's first such attempt but with encouraging words from all of you, I will ask her to try to write more.
 
that will be great Sir. Generally girls can devote time for such activities before marriage.:)
Rmandaura said:
Sunita, rest of the poems she has written for her own kids.
This poem was written by her for her friend who is a painter but could not muster courage to send her paintings for exhibition in a gallery and she was feeling very low. Tanu wrote this poem in 5-7 minutes and sent her to motivate her. The first reaction she got from her friend on phone was, tears and sobs. But I am happy that her friend participated in the exhibition for the first time and got good response. Even some art promoters have also contacted her.

This was Tanu's first such attempt but with encouraging words from all of you, I will ask her to try to write more.
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dahiya saheb ,It was great effort and very high thinking .My heartiest congrts to her .It will be nice to hear some more from her .thanks
 
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