::: Aaj Phir :::

Status
Not open for further replies.
ek hamari taraf se bhi... wrote it 21 years back.....
..............................................................

Mili na wo mujhe, subah huee thee aaj bhi
dikhi na wo mujhe, khidki khuli thee aaj bhi

nikalte the wo ban sanwar kar, hawa me zulfen udaate
udee nahi hain zulfen, hawa chali thee aaj bhi.............. 1

mujhe dekhte hi wo, kar leti thee band khidki
khulee rahi aaj khadki, maine dekha udhar thaa aaj bhi......2

hothon me pallu daba leti thee wo, hume hansta dekhkar
aaisa kuch bhi nahi huaa doston, hanse the hum aaj bhi......3

manati thee wo mujhe, mere naraj hone par
manaya nahi hai aaj, naraj hue the hum aaj bhi................4

uski gudiya se mere gudde ki roj hote thee sagayee ki baaten,
huee nahi aaj wo baaten, gudda gudiya the yahan aaj bhi.....5

.....................................................................................

RK^2
 
rkumar said:
ek hamari taraf se bhi... wrote it 21 years back.....
..............................................................

Mili na wo mujhe, subah huee thee aaj bhi
dikhi na wo mujhe, khidki khuli thee aaj bhi

nikalte the wo ban sanwar kar, hawa me zulfen udaate
udee nahi hain zulfen, hawa chali thee aaj bhi.............. 1

mujhe dekhte hi wo, kar leti thee band khidki
khulee rahi aaj khadki, maine dekha udhar thaa aaj bhi......2

hothon me pallu daba leti thee wo, hume hansta dekhkar
aaisa kuch bhi nahi huaa doston, hanse the hum aaj bhi......3

manati thee wo mujhe, mere naraj hone par
manaya nahi hai aaj, naraj hue the hum aaj bhi................4

uski gudiya se mere gudde ki roj hote thee sagayee ki baaten,
huee nahi aaj wo baaten, gudda gudiya the yahan aaj bhi.....5

.....................................................................................

RK^2
Click to expand...

Namaste Sir Ji...:)

Wah Sir...aapne to sabhi ko peeche chhod diya.

Apki shayri ke aage to baake sab pheeke se pad gaye...

We hope, it will continue Sir.

ThankYou Sir:)
 
neels said:
Okay Rahul ye aapne likha tha, i alws kept thinking that these are DDLJ's song "na jane mere dil ko kya ho gya" lines ...:)
Click to expand...

Mam bilkul sahi pehchana aapne...it means aapne bhi DDLJ kai baar dekhi hai...

...actually DDLJ jab ban rahi thi tab uska Director aaya tha humare paas...bola SirJi kuchh 2-4 line likh do...but mere pas time ki kum tha..

Maine pahle to mana kar diya tha..:) but baad me usne bataya ki Shahrukh aur Kajol hain is movie me...

...Phir mera dil Pighal gaya...:)

Bas maine 2-4 lines likh di...:) Free me..

aur aapne to dekha hi hoga kitni hit hui movie phir...:)

Humaara to dil hi kuchh aisa hai...
 
ye abhi likhi hain maine .......

Aaj fir bahaaro me wohi rang sa bhara hai;aaj fir hai hawa me wohi baat ................aaj fir dharti muskura rahi hai khul ke ;aaj fir amber hai geet gungunaata sa.............aaj fir dhundhti hai unko nazar usi tarah ;Aaj fir wo mera naam chand pe likh aaye hai shayad.............
 
well written shweta jee..bahut khub

shwetadhaka said:
Aaj fir bahaaro me wohi rang sa bhara hai;aaj fir hai hawa me wohi baat ................aaj fir dharti muskura rahi hai khul ke ;aaj fir amber hai geet gungunaata sa.............aaj fir dhundhti hai unko nazar usi tarah ;Aaj fir wo mera naam chand pe likh aaye hai shayad.............
Click to expand...



Jaane Aaj phir Aasmaan kyun roya hai..,
Naakaam Aashiqon ki haar mein ek aur moti piroya hai,
[FONT=Times New Roman,Times,Times NewRoman]Koi to bataaye kahan mera mehboob khoya hai,[/FONT][FONT=Times New Roman,Times,Times NewRoman]
Mohabbat ke Kuffun mein mera yeh pyaar soya hai...!!​

[/FONT]
 
rkumar said:
ek hamari taraf se bhi... wrote it 21 years back.....
..............................................................

Mili na wo mujhe, subah huee thee aaj bhi
dikhi na wo mujhe, khidki khuli thee aaj bhi
.....................................................................................

RK^2
Click to expand...

Sir jee bahut acsha likha hai appne..tabiyat khush ho gayi ye padh kar..:)
 
Dil darta hai dil ki baaton se

Ji bhar aata hai jab jazbaaton se
Yaad aata hai un mulaqaaton se
Ye pal kahin ruk na jaaye yahi par
Dil dar sa jaata hai dil ki baaton se
 
coolengineer said:
Jaane Aaj phir Aasmaan kyun roya hai..,

Naakaam Aashiqon ki haar mein ek aur moti piroya hai,
[FONT=Times New Roman,Times,Times NewRoman]Koi to bataaye kahan mera mehboob khoya hai,[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman,Times,Times NewRoman]Mohabbat ke Kuffun mein mera yeh pyaar soya hai...!![/FONT][FONT=Times New Roman,Times,Times NewRoman]​

[/FONT]
Click to expand...

aachhhaaa reee laalla................
 
crsnadar said:
Mam bilkul sahi pehchana aapne...it means aapne bhi DDLJ kai baar dekhi hai...

...actually DDLJ jab ban rahi thi tab uska Director aaya tha humare paas...bola SirJi kuchh 2-4 line likh do...but mere pas time ki kum tha..

Maine pahle to mana kar diya tha..:) but baad me usne bataya ki Shahrukh aur Kajol hain is movie me...

...Phir mera dil Pighal gaya...:)

Bas maine 2-4 lines likh di...:) Free me..

aur aapne to dekha hi hoga kitni hit hui movie phir...:)

Humaara to dil hi kuchh aisa hai...
Click to expand...

jee haan DDLJ kai baar dekhi hai... aur gane to na jane kitni hi baar sune hain...actually this song and these lines of the song have been my favs. so can't miss them...:). Happy to know that yu write so gud...:)

The last line of urs here..."Hamara to dil hi kuch aisa hai"...reminded me of a friend, he alws used to say,, kya karen, hamara to dil hi kuchh aisa hai. perhaps he used to speak tht in the line of Amitabh bachchan's flavour from Sholay,,, you also inspired from tht or just aise hi....!
 
Karke dekho kabhi...

Har pal hai zindgi mudkar dekho kabhi
Nahi guzrenge ye pal rokdo inko yahi
Tham jaayega har manzar yahi par
Zindgi jine ki koshish karke to dekho kabhi
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top