aasman tujhse kya kam hai

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aasman tujhse kya kam hai ye aankhia meri
teri trah ye bhi barsati hai to kabhi jhulsati hai

aasman ki trah ye bhi rato ko mundti din me khulti hai
raat ko inme bhi timtimate hai taare sapne bankar
to deen me suraj ki trah ye bhi chamkti hai

jab kabhi dukho ke badal chaa jaaye aur sambhaale na jaaye
to ye bhi rudan ke saath teri garjan ki trah barsati hai

aur jab ho jaaye dil halka to ye laali aankho me liye
tere inderdhanush ki trah satrangi hokar chamkti bhi hai
 
ritu said:
aasman tujhse kya kam hai ye aankhia meri
teri trah ye bhi barsati hai to kabhi jhulsati hai

aasman ki trah ye bhi rato ko mundti din me khulti hai
raat ko inme bhi timtimate hai taare sapne bankar
to deen me suraj ki trah ye bhi chamkti hai

jab kabhi dukho ke badal chaa jaaye aur sambhaale na jaaye
to ye bhi rudan ke saath teri garjan ki trah barsati hai

aur jab ho jaaye dil halka to ye laali aankho me liye
tere inderdhanush ki trah satrangi hokar chamkti bhi hai
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Ritu ji....... ye aapne likhi hai kya?.......... chaliye mera dimag kuch line bol raha hai mai likh du please................ please jheliyega :)

tere daaman me jaise simte rehte hai ye sitaare............
inme bi jhilmilaate hai sapno ke asankhaya taare........


tu jab lagaata hai chand ka teeka...........
ye bi itraati hai odh neend ka ghoonghat.......


tu baadlo ke saath jab khelta hai aankh mincholi......
ye bi dekh ke kisi ki nazar doobkar utar jaati hain laaj ki dariya ke paar........


teri aankhein rokar jab chhalni karti hai dharti ka seena..........
ye aankhein kisi ki yaad me dariya ban ufaan pe aa jaati hai tab........

teri aarzoo me jab hawa ko chooti hain kisi ki kalpnaaye........
ye machal uthti hain kal ke anginat aahat karte sunder sapno ko chookar.....

tere upar jab chalti hai badalte rango ki rang bhari kunchi...........
ye bi sunhere sapno ke rang me doobkar rang deti hai zindgi ka aanchal........

kuch baat to tujhme hai ae aasmaa..........
jo ye tujhse judi hoti hain ek adrashya dor se.........



 
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ha shweta ye maine hi likhi hai.
tumne bhi bahut acchi koshish ki hai .keep writing.
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Ritu ji....... ye aapne likhi hai kya?.......... chaliye mera dimag kuch line bol raha hai mai likh du please................ please jheliyega :)

tere daaman me jaise simte rehte hai ye sitaare............
inme bi jhilmilaate hai sapno ke asankhaya taare........


tu jab lagaata hai chand ka teeka...........
ye bi itraati hai odh neend ka ghoonghat.......


tu baadlo ke saath jab khelta hai aankh mincholi......
ye bi dekh ke kisi ki nazar doobkar utar jaati hain laaj ki dariya ke paar........


teri aankhein rokar jab chhalni karti hai dharti ka seena..........
ye aankhein kisi ki yaad me dariya ban ufaan pe aa jaati hai tab........

teri aarzoo me jab hawa ko chooti hain kisi ki kalpnaaye........
ye machal uthti hain kal ke anginat aahat karte sunder sapno ko chookar.....

tere upar jab chalti hai badalte rango ki rang bhari kunchi...........
ye bi sunhere sapno ke rang me doobkar rang deti hai zindgi ka aanchal........

kuch baat to tujhme hai ae aasmaa..........
jo ye tujhse judi hoti hain ek adrashya dor se.........
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