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Tau bolya"Beta tu fikar mat kar,tanne main agli flight mein jaroor chand pe chadai karaunga bas tu apna weight reduce kar le balance ki tai"
 
Hi Jatlanders,

Ye kahani to Kyonki Saas Bi Kabhi Bahu Thi ki tarah Ghani laambi hoti ja ree hai, isme koi twist lao ya phir koi nai (New) kahani suru karo.
 
Kahani to abhi shuru hoyi hai, isme 'Saas or bahu' ki koi jagah nahin se.

Bhola Shankar yu TAU ka saara nazara dekh ke mann he mann mein razi ho rya tha. Par Bhola thahryaa Bhola, Bahi Bhola bhi adhaa JAT se, sochi kyun na kahani mein ek twist layaa jaaye. Bhole nain Damroo bajayaa or Chaand hazir ho gyaa. Bhole ne Chaand te Kahee "Re Chaand, tu TAU te itni dur kad te hogyaa. Chal, bhaj ke Sisana pahunch jya. TAU doga le ke ar TAI belan le ke teri raah dekhen sai".
 
Chand Bhole se bolla, hey Somnath, mai hamesha aapke sur par virajman rehta hoon. Bhala aapko chorkar ekela kaise jaa sakta hoon. Esliye aapko bi mere saath chalna parega aur Tau/ Tai ko darshan dene parenge. Es Par Bhole maharaj achraj me par gaye..

RK^2
 
Amarnathji aur Chand ki sari bat Parvati mata bee sun rahi thi vo boli baghwan agar app Mirtuylok ( yani Dharti) mein gay to main bhee sath mein jaoongi varna app ko bhi nahi jane doongi. ye sab dhekar Bholanath soch mein pad gaya.?
 
Chand yeh sab dekh kar man hi man me mushkura raha thaa. Ek taraf Tai tau ko ghere khaadee thee aur doosree taraf Parvati Bhole maharj ko. Bhole maharaj ki kuch samajh me nahi aa raha thaa. Bhole maharaj ki es mansik vyathaa se Vishnu bhagwan ka singhasan dagmagaya. Vishnu ji ne Narad ko bulakar aadesh diya ki ek dam kailash parvat par jakar Bhole maharaj ki samasya ka nivaran kare...Narad ji Vina bajate hue Kailash Parvat ke aaur sidhaare..

RK^2
 
Tau ko practical hone do bhai - aage badho

Tau ne apna dimaag jhinjhodyaa ar sochyaa, "khettan mae baith kae chand pae jaan ka plan banaoonga" ar vo saari bheed nae wahin khadyaa chhod kae khettan kenyaa bhaaj liya.
 
story mein twist

Tau din-raat soch soch k bawla sa ho gaya tha.Khet jaate hue raste mein Tau ne ek chhori dikhi akeli naachti hui....Tau ne koni bera tha ke ya bhootni sai
 
Tau baith kar uska Nach dekhne lagga aur uskee sundarta par ek dam mugdh ho gaya. yeh choree koi nahi thee, balki Indra devta ke darbar se ayee Rambha thee. Esko Narad ji ne Tau ka dhyaan bantne ke liye bheja thaa. Rambha ne roj khet me nachne ka waida kiya. es tarah Tau ka Dhyan Chand se hatkar Rambha ke naach par atak gaya.

RK^2
 
Tau Rambha ke saath mast ho kae naachan laag gyaa aur naachte-naachte uski nazar upar chand pae pad gee ar wo udaas ho gyaa.
 
Tau bhi the pakka Jat chand ke taraf dhek ker bola ek beta tere uper jaroor ana hai , tau ab Rambha ki chal samaj gaya tha aur fir Rambha ki taraf kerda - kerda :mad: lakahya aur apni lathi tha ke bola agar jan ke khar chhati hai to mujhe chand pe jane ki tarkeeb bata nahi to tuje se khetten mein kam karvaunga.Rambha soch mein pad gayi :rolleyes:
 
tau ko bachao

Rambha ne ghani soch lii ,jo ki uske baski na thi....To is baar Rambha 'Samba' dance seekh k aayi ar kati bhootni ki dhaal tau k piche pad gyi
 
Tau Ji ne bhootni ke agge haath jode aur bolle, "tham sab nae mil kae mere palaan (plan) ki khichdi si banaa di - ar mannae chand pae nahin jaane denaa chahte to theek sae, aap sab ko Ram-Ram", aur Tau wahan se udaas hokar ghar ko chal diyaa. :o :o :o

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New Story

Let's start a new story, but dear all, please refrain yourself from writing more that one line - so that it can be enjoyed to it's best. If anyone writes more than one line - then only consider the first line to move forward.
Add only a single line to the story

Here we go>>>>


Ek baar Tau Bhartu bus mein baith kar, apni susraad ja ryaa thaa.
 
sapne mein tau ne ke dekhya......

sapne mein tau ne dekhya jannu wo pardhanmantari banna diya ar lallo khush ho ke talli pittan lag rhya se.
 
Tau ki aankh khul gayi ar usne dekha ki sab log Tau ne dekhan laag rahe sain.
 
Tau ko phir neend aa gayee aur sapne mae koi Tau ke paas aa kae bolyaa, "Bharat Singh Ji, Aaiye, "shapath grahan" kar lijiye".
 
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