Arz Kiya hai

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Arz kiya hai..........

Ret par naam likhne se kya faydaa,

Ek leher aayegi sab badal jayega......

Tumne pathar - dil humko keh to diya,

Patharon pe likhoge mitega nahi.......
 
Wah!!! Wah!!! Wah!!!!

Arz Kiya Hai,

Ret per naam likhne wale nadaan hote hain,
Woh log aane wali lehron se anjaan hote hain,
Jo kehte hain pathar dil chahne walon ko,
Woh mohobbat ke jahaan mein gumnaam hote hain.:)
 
gd one.....

swati said:
Arz kiya hai..........

Ret par naam likhne se kya faydaa,

Ek leher aayegi sab badal jayega......

Tumne pathar - dil humko keh to diya,

Patharon pe likhoge mitega nahi.......
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Khud ki mohabbat ko Fanaah kaun karegaa..
Sabhi nek banege toh gunah kaun karegaa..
E-Khuda salamat rakhna mere Bewafa sanam ko..
Warna roz meri maut ki "DUA" kaun karegaa....
 
[FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif] Dard ko bhi dard hone laga, Dard khud hi mere gham dhone laga, Dard ke liye hum na roye kabhi, Dard hemein choo kar khud hi rone laga.[/FONT]​
 
swati said:
[FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Dard ko bhi dard hone laga, Dard khud hi mere gham dhone laga, Dard ke liye hum na roye kabhi, Dard hemein choo kar khud hi rone laga.[/FONT]​
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wah waaaaaah Ye to pahale wale se bhi acha hai ....nahin b..bahut acha hai....ye sher mujhe yaad nahin rahte .warna main bhi ek sher jaroor likhta
 
Swati Ji, Yash Ji or Sejwal Ji.

Aap sabhi ney bahut achchaa likha hai or mujhey lagata aap sabhee achchaey shayar hai.

Mey ek bat janna chahata hu kya shayari gum me he ke jati hai.
Jadater shayar Roney, lutney or marney ke bat kartey hai Khusion bhari shayari nahi hoti kaya or agar hoti hai to bhaio or bahanji khusion wala kuch
likho, Khud bhee khush raho or oroko bhee khush rakho.

Shayeri se Anjan
Karmveer Chahal
 
skarmveer said:
Aap sabhi ney bahut achchaa likha hai or mujhey lagata aap sabhee achchaey shayar hai.

Mey ek bat janna chahata hu kya shayari gum me he ke jati hai.
Jadater shayar Roney, lutney or marney ke bat kartey hai Khusion bhari shayari nahi hoti kaya or agar hoti hai to bhaio or bahanji khusion wala kuch
likho, Khud bhee khush raho or oroko bhee khush rakho.

Shayeri se Anjan
Karmveer Chahal
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Kisi kee yaad mein jeene mein kya rakha hein
kisi kee yaad mein marne mein kya rakha hein
ye to adat see ho gai hein udash rhene kee
warna udash rhene mein kya rakha hein


aisa lagta hein kee shari aur udashi kuch najdiki dost hein
 
ek do sher maine bhi dundhe(likhe nahin hain .....kyonkee main aaj bhi sher nahin likhta:D ) hain dosto....

copy kiya hai ......
Yeh mere aasu jinhe koi pochne wala bhi nahi,
Koi aanchal enhe milta to sitare hote..........wah wah
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.Be Positive sher
Dil na umid to nahi, nakam hi to hai,
Lambi hai gam ki shyam magar, shyam hi to hai.......


Too coool sher
Itni raat gaye Kyon apni qabra khod raha hai Galib
Itni raat gaye kyon apni qabara khod raha hai Galib
La, phawda mujhe de de !!
 
Bhai Vijay Raj Ji

Bahut badhiya aapney sahi kaha hai Udas reh key jeeney may kya rakkha hai. Bhai khush raho< Bhagwan ne etni saree cheej they rakhi hai ek aadhi ne bhee de to koi bat nahi, Jo dey rakhi hey onhey bhee kyu bekar karo dukhi reh key.

Mein Bhagwan sey perrathana karta hun kee ye jitney bhee shaya dukh bhari shyari likhetey enhey itna sukh dey ke enhay yad he na rahey ki dukh kya hota hai.

Karmveer Chahal

vrshokeen said:
Kisi kee yaad mein jeene mein kya rakha hein
kisi kee yaad mein marne mein kya rakha hein
ye to adat see ho gai hein udash rhene kee
warna udash rhene mein kya rakha hein


aisa lagta hein kee shari aur udashi kuch najdiki dost hein
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yaar ya phawde wali jo baat hai ya ghani badhiya lagi majhe
humare bade bhi kahein "Doosron ki madad (help) karni chaha":D
 
good one.......

swati said:
[FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Dard ko bhi dard hone laga, Dard khud hi mere gham dhone laga, Dard ke liye hum na roye kabhi, Dard hemein choo kar khud hi rone laga.[/FONT]​
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"Koi dikha ke roye, koi chupa kar roye...
Humein rulane wala humein rula kar roye..
Marne ka maza toh tabh hain yaaro..
Jab kaatil bhi janaze par aakar roye.."
 
skarmveer said:
Bhai Vijay Raj Ji

Bahut badhiya aapney sahi kaha hai Udas reh key jeeney may kya rakkha hai. Bhai khush raho< Bhagwan ne etni saree cheej they rakhi hai ek aadhi ne bhee de to koi bat nahi, Jo dey rakhi hey onhey bhee kyu bekar karo dukhi reh key.

Mein Bhagwan sey perrathana karta hun kee ye jitney bhee shaya dukh bhari shyari likhetey enhey itna sukh dey ke enhay yad he na rahey ki dukh kya hota hai.

Karmveer Chahal
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"Yeh wo dard hain bhai sahab jo dawa lene ke saath saath badtaa jaata hain"
 
Karmveer, bhai tu to ghana badiya aadmi lage maine to, bhagwan se kuch maana bhi orr wah hi dusro ke khatir...wah.......




skarmveer said:
Bhai Vijay Raj Ji

Bahut badhiya aapney sahi kaha hai Udas reh key jeeney may kya rakkha hai. Bhai khush raho< Bhagwan ne etni saree cheej they rakhi hai ek aadhi ne bhee de to koi bat nahi, Jo dey rakhi hey onhey bhee kyu bekar karo dukhi reh key.

Mein Bhagwan sey perrathana karta hun kee ye jitney bhee shaya dukh bhari shyari likhetey enhey itna sukh dey ke enhay yad he na rahey ki dukh kya hota hai.

Karmveer Chahal
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sandeepsomu said:
Karmveer, bhai tu to ghana badiya aadmi lage maine to, bhagwan se kuch maana bhi orr wah hi dusro ke khatir...wah.......
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you are right Sandeep, Karmveer seems kind-hearted person....so now you pray for him that his wish should be listened soon by God :)

and you all other members Swati, Deepak, Yash, Sujeet are writing very good shayaris...but dear all of you take some concerns for happiness also.
 
Kya dua maange aaj us khuda se hum bhi
Mere sanam ko ek haseen si zindagi de de
Kaun shikaayat karta hai ab kisi bedard se
Bus yahi sochte hain ki unko bandagi de de
 
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