Arzoo..

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akanksha said:
har ek qaasid mai hoti hai ek quvvat ​



sehlati hui pawan ki tarah wo chu leti hai wo har ek arzoo
har samah khil saa jata hai muskurahat se​
ek parataar ko milti hai jab uski manzil..


jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho.. ​

sehmi si rehti hai arzoo jab ehaas iltimaas ban jaata hai
raah thakhti rehti hai arzoo jab milne se hoti hai aarii​

pyaar ki daastan se navaaz hai arzoo
dooriyon ke badalon ko shanaasa nahi kabhi uski arzoo nai.. ​

jise dhoondti hain neeghain , kya wahi ho tum.. ​


akanksha.. ​

Ek muskurahat zindagi badal deti hai
Ye arzoo sehmi sehmi si kyon rahti hai
Raah takti hui un ankhon se bhi puchho
Kya woh kisi raste ko manzil kahti hai


jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..

Tamnnaao si ye zindagi har pal naya khawab
saharon ki talaash mein kitne dukh sahti hai
Phir bhi dhoondhti hai nighahen us khushi ko
Woh to ek arzoo hai jo dil mein rahti hai

jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..
 
hothon pe ho ek geet, jaagti ho mann mai ik preet
jab lagta hai yeh jag chotha, aur sabhi deeshain berang
ek purane huye mod par chalten hai doobara jab yeh kadam

neeghain kholne par jab dikhta hai kewal


aanad ka saawan...



aasamn chuppi saadhi rehta hai hamesha


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dekha hai unse sadiyon ki arzoo ko panapte..


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rachaya ye jahan ek arzoo mai, ek arzoo ke liye..


jisne apnaya is arzoo ki arzuoan ko, kya wahi ho tum..


akanksha..

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sunitahooda said:
Meri ARZOO muskaai, kumhlai/murjhai si
sunitahooda said:


hai ye ARZOO ya pankhudi ek gulab si​


parvaan na chadi ye to man bhujh gaya

ek sheetal sameer jhonka jo choo gaya

pankh faile uss alsaai si ARZOO ke
indradhanushi rang pattey ki shiraon me​

ARZOO jo har pal uthti hai muskati hai​

poori bhale na ho par ARZOO kehlati hai​


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jai ho.............

Nice Rachna Sunita bebe,

naya role mubarak ho KAVIYATRI ji aapko,

maine tai bera e naa thaa ki aapke andhar bhi ek "MAHADEVI VERMA" chupi baithe hai..........tussi chaai jaye ho hooda ji.............

maine bahut aachi laagee..........sabtai aachi last aali line....POORI NAA HO FIR BHI AARZOO KEHLATI HAI...........

kati nu ke nu sai bebe..............



sunitahooda said:
Meri ARZOO muskaai, kumhlai/murjhai si
hai ye ARZOO ya pankhudi ek gulab si

parvaan na chadi ye to man bhujh gaya
ek sheetal sameer jhonka jo choo gaya

pankh faile uss alsaai si ARZOO ke
indradhanushi rang pattey ki shiraon me

ARZOO jo har pal uthti hai muskati hai
poori bhale na ho par ARZOO kehlati hai
 
saachu mai yeh saarri tharri hi creation hai ke.................................???:p:p.....
hey bhagwaan ke kaljub aa gya.......... jhoot ki to kolli bharre log-baag bhaaj bhaaj ke..............kasutta imagination create horya hadde to................ROOKKA@ IMAGINATION...hehhehe..........................ROOKKA@ JHOOT KI KOLLI
 
Prashant tu chupp hoja chhorey....mai ek aur likhan ki sochun thi....tanne interrupt kardi mai..:o :p ..door hoja meri nazron se....:D
prashantacmet said:
saachu mai yeh saarri tharri hi creation hai ke.................................???:p:p.....
hey bhagwaan ke kaljub aa gya.......... jhoot ki to kolli bharre log-baag bhaaj bhaaj ke..............kasutta imagination create horya hadde to................ROOKKA@ IMAGINATION...hehhehe..........................ROOKKA@ JHOOT KI KOLLI
 
Yash...iss Mahadevi Verma nai tai mai bahar na likaddan deti....jai likaddgi tai tum sarey mere aage bi haath jodogey jukar Vishal Hooda arr Dolly ke aage joddey the....:D ;) :p arr ya line manne bi sab tai ghani pasand aayi jab poori likh kar padhi to
yashbeniwal said:
Nice Rachna Sunita bebe,

naya role mubarak ho KAVIYATRI ji aapko,

maine tai bera e naa thaa ki aapke andhar bhi ek "MAHADEVI VERMA" chupi baithe hai..........tussi chaai jaye ho hooda ji.............

maine bahut aachi laagee..........sabtai aachi last aali line....POORI NAA HO FIR BHI AARZOO KEHLATI HAI...........

kati nu ke nu sai bebe..............

 
imagination... nothing funny about it..

however your jokes.. are always un-understandable..am left wondering.. what was funny in there...

Akanksha..


prashantacmet said:
saachu mai yeh saarri tharri hi creation hai ke.................................???:p:p.....
hey bhagwaan ke kaljub aa gya.......... jhoot ki to kolli bharre log-baag bhaaj bhaaj ke..............kasutta imagination create horya hadde to................ROOKKA@ IMAGINATION...hehhehe..........................ROOKKA@ JHOOT KI KOLLI
 
very well said yash.. sunita bebe indeed surprised me as well with such beautiful poetry..n yes last line was absolutely awesome..

hope to read more of hers soon..

akanksha..


jai kilkii taull..

yashbeniwal said:
Nice Rachna Sunita bebe,

naya role mubarak ho KAVIYATRI ji aapko,

maine tai bera e naa thaa ki aapke andhar bhi ek "MAHADEVI VERMA" chupi baithe hai..........tussi chaai jaye ho hooda ji.............

maine bahut aachi laagee..........sabtai aachi last aali line....POORI NAA HO FIR BHI AARZOO KEHLATI HAI...........

kati nu ke nu sai bebe..............
 
Thanks to both of you....i seldom write:)
akanksha said:
very well said yash.. sunita bebe indeed surprised me as well with such beautiful poetry..n yes last line was absolutely awesome..

hope to read more of hers soon..

akanksha..


jai kilkii taull..
 
hehheheh.............majhe pata tha tu issa hi juwab deggi........ tu adde jatland pe JOKER ne dhoondti haande ke??........Jo tajhe hasawe........:D...... chaal raahan de.......issme terri bhi galti kona....... tu convent mai tai eibbhi eibbhi likdi........issi issi baat terri simajh mai kaha tai aawegi...................."It was my first copy-paste of Hindi poem.."(It's my first attmept in English........hehehhehe)..............eibbke to paakki aaja gi terri simajh main.........................hahhahhah....hhahah
akanksha said:
imagination... nothing funny about it..

however your jokes.. are always un-understandable..am left wondering.. what was funny in there...

Akanksha..
 
Re HALWAAN.... sahi kahe hai.... JOKER ne tohte ee handte dikkhe inghe ne majhe bhi.....
ROKKA@JOKER hahahahahahahahahahahahaha... Arr first attemt tera ghana suthra laagya bhai!!!!! ROKKA @ First attempt...
Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal

prashantacmet said:
hehheheh.............majhe pata tha tu issa hi juwab deggi........ tu adde jatland pe JOKER ne dhoondti haande ke??........Jo tajhe hasawe........:D...... chaal raahan de.......issme terri bhi galti kona....... tu convent mai tai eibbhi eibbhi likdi........issi issi baat terri simajh mai kaha tai aawegi...................."It was my first copy-paste of Hindi poem.."(It's my first attmept in English........hehehhehe)..............eibbke to paakki aaja gi terri simajh main.........................hahhahhah....hhahah
 
cont.

poocha hai kai baar is sehmi si arzoo se
muskurana bhula hi deti hai use zindagi kai baar..

aakhon mai hai ek nami, naa jaane ek haul saa hai..
chup rehti hai yeh arzoo kyun ki usi se sab kuch seeka hai..


jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..


naya khawab hi to kehta hai jee le phir se ek baar
sahaara nahi ek ehsaas ko kehti hai wo apni manzil
logon ki teshaa ne ronde uske kitne ki khawab
phir se jeene ki aas hi hai arzoo ka ehsaas

kalpna ki duniya mai hi sacchai dhoondti hai wo arzoo..


sehmi si, chup si..rehti hai wo arzoo..

jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..



akanksha..




vijay said:
Ek muskurahat zindagi badal deti hai
Ye arzoo sehmi sehmi si kyon rahti hai
Raah takti hui un ankhon se bhi puchho
Kya woh kisi raste ko manzil kahti hai


jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..

Tamnnaao si ye zindagi har pal naya khawab
saharon ki talaash mein kitne dukh sahti hai
Phir bhi dhoondhti hai nighahen us khushi ko
Woh to ek arzoo hai jo dil mein rahti hai

jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..
 
Full Ishtop

Nazaro se sitaro tak, sitaro se nazaro mein
Najar aata hai chehra tumhara,bat sunti hai tumhari sabhi baton mein

Subah ka hosh nahi mujhe, Shaam na jane kab dhal jati hai
Tum hi tum chaahe ho sitaro ki jagah, meri sab raton mein

Na jane kab iqrar hoga, aur kab humara saath hoga
Sari kaynat wahi ruk jayegi, jab tere hathon mein mera hath hoga

Meri har dhadhkan se gunjegi bar teri hi sadaa
Aankho se chalkega bas tere hi pyar ka nasha
Aur is Nashe mein jab ho jayegi meri har arzoo Gum
Tab har dhadhkan, har saans kahegi, haan Wohi ho tum​

Ib lagya full ishtop saa is arzoo pe......
 
nice poetry... :)

full stop...hmm..not too sure.. no one can reallt stop arzoo.. she is meant to be carried on forever...


akanksha..


jai kilkii taull..

desijat said:
Nazaro se sitaro tak, sitaro se nazaro mein

Najar aata hai chehra tumhara,bat sunti hai tumhari sabhi baton mein​

Subah ka hosh nahi mujhe, Shaam na jane kab dhal jati hai
Tum hi tum chaahe ho sitaro ki jagah, meri sab raton mein​

Na jane kab iqrar hoga, aur kab humara saath hoga
Sari kaynat wahi ruk jayegi, jab tere hathon mein mera hath hoga​

Meri har dhadhkan se gunjegi bar teri hi sadaa
Aankho se chalkega bas tere hi pyar ka nasha
Aur is Nashe mein jab ho jayegi meri har arzoo Gum

Tab har dhadhkan, har saans kahegi, haan Wohi ho tum​


Ib lagya full ishtop saa is arzoo pe......
 
akanksha said:
nice poetry... :)

full stop...hmm..not too sure.. no one can reallt stop arzoo.. she is meant to be carried on forever...


akanksha..


jai kilkii taull..
Aarzoo ne Zindagi ki goad mein sar rakh kar poocha, mein kab poori houngi?

Zindagi ne haskar kaha - Jo puri ho jaye wo arzoo kaisi
 
akanksha said:
poocha hai kai baar is sehmi si arzoo se
muskurana bhula hi deti hai use zindagi kai baar..

aakhon mai hai ek nami, naa jaane ek haul saa hai..
chup rehti hai yeh arzoo kyun ki usi se sab kuch seeka hai..


jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..


naya khawab hi to kehta hai jee le phir se ek baar
sahaara nahi ek ehsaas ko kehti hai wo apni manzil
logon ki teshaa ne ronde uske kitne ki khawab
phir se jeene ki aas hi hai arzoo ka ehsaas

kalpna ki duniya mai hi sacchai dhoondti hai wo arzoo..


sehmi si, chup si..rehti hai wo arzoo..

jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..



akanksha..


Woh sahmi si arzoo, apni kismat pe roti hogi
Warna kya zindagi es qadar badnaseeb hoti hai
Kya zindagi itni berang hai ki muskan nahin hai
Kisi ko apna kar dekho khushi kitne kareeb hoti hai

jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..


En ankhon ki namee ek khushi mein badal jayeegi
Eak baar hi sahi, kisi ko azmaa kar to dekho
Ye mana ki zindagi ne bahut kuchh sikhaya hai
Dil pe jo chot khai hai use bhoola kar to dekho


jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..

Ye khawab haqeeqat mein badal jayenge kabhi
Sahi raston pe chalne par kabhi manzil bhi milegi
Har zindagi kisi 'Arzoo' ki talash mein rahti hai
Agar kuchh paane ka iradda hai to har khusi milegi


jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..

Kalpana ki duniya mein koi sachhai nahi hoti
Haqeeqat hi har waqt 'Arzoo' to talash karti hai
Zindagi ke is safar mein humsafar ki talaash hai
Kisi ki arzoo hai jo kisi ki mohabbat pe marti hai


jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..
 
dhal jaayega yeh sehma sa manzar
dhal jayega yeh anjaana sa manzar
dhal jayegi yeh teri arzoo ki rooh
dhal jayegi yeh gumrah karti si aas


kehte the sabhi aur jaane kya kya
arzoo ke sapno ki duniya ko..


aarzoo mai jaagi ek nai arzoo
ek nai kiran se jagmati subha ka
basera huya..


raat ke sabhi andheron se guzri thi wo subha..
surya ke ujalon se ghiri thi wo subha..

duniya ke rang mai dhal gayi thi wo subha..
par apne hi mann ke sapnon ki sada sunti thi wo subha..

kalpana hi to hai jeewan ka aadhaar
isi ko le kar to racha gaya yeh sansaar..


haqeeqat ko jaana aise ki bhuli nahi khud ko subha..
sab kuch bhulane ki aayi hai subha

arzoo ke daman se jaagi hai yeh subha..
har ek din ke baad, arzoo ke sapnon ko sehlaane aayi hai subha..

akanksha...



vijay said:
Woh sahmi si arzoo, apni kismat pe roti hogi
Warna kya zindagi es qadar badnaseeb hoti hai
Kya zindagi itni berang hai ki muskan nahin hai
Kisi ko apna kar dekho khushi kitne kareeb hoti hai

jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..


En ankhon ki namee ek khushi mein badal jayeegi
Eak baar hi sahi, kisi ko azmaa kar to dekho
Ye mana ki zindagi ne bahut kuchh sikhaya hai
Dil pe jo chot khai hai use bhoola kar to dekho


jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..

Ye khawab haqeeqat mein badal jayenge kabhi
Sahi raston pe chalne par kabhi manzil bhi milegi
Har zindagi kisi 'Arzoo' ki talash mein rahti hai
Agar kuchh paane ka iradda hai to har khusi milegi


jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..

Kalpana ki duniya mein koi sachhai nahi hoti
Haqeeqat hi har waqt 'Arzoo' to talash karti hai
Zindagi ke is safar mein humsafar ki talaash hai
Kisi ki arzoo hai jo kisi ki mohabbat pe marti hai


jise dhoondti hain neeghain, kya tum wahi ho..
 
Hi...........

Hi Akki.......

how r u....

Apni tog Arzoo yeh hai ki, Abh main arzoo hi naa karu.........

Kyonki Arzoo humnaie ki toh gham paaye
Roshini saath laayi thee saaye,
Saaye gahre thee..
Aur Roshini halki...............

anyway good going Nikki.......
keep it up........


akanksha said:
dhal jaayega yeh sehma sa manzar
dhal jayega yeh anjaana sa manzar
dhal jayegi yeh teri arzoo ki rooh
dhal jayegi yeh gumrah karti si aas


kehte the sabhi aur jaane kya kya
arzoo ke sapno ki duniya ko..


aarzoo mai jaagi ek nai arzoo
ek nai kiran se jagmati subha ka
basera huya..


raat ke sabhi andheron se guzri thi wo subha..
surya ke ujalon se ghiri thi wo subha..

duniya ke rang mai dhal gayi thi wo subha..
par apne hi mann ke sapnon ki sada sunti thi wo subha..

kalpana hi to hai jeewan ka aadhaar
isi ko le kar to racha gaya yeh sansaar..


haqeeqat ko jaana aise ki bhuli nahi khud ko subha..
sab kuch bhulane ki aayi hai subha

arzoo ke daman se jaagi hai yeh subha..
har ek din ke baad, arzoo ke sapnon ko sehlaane aayi hai subha..

akanksha...
 
yash, arzoo to khud se aa jaati hai.. kyun ki kehten hain na, har ghadi ek si nahi hoti.. jaise hi thoda sa bhi ujala humara mann dekhne ki koshish karega, to ek arzoo phir se jaagegi.. arzoo aur kalpana.. do aise ansh hain jeewan ke jinhe hum chaahen to bhi nahi alah kar sakte..
keep up your spirits mate..
and at times when we feel like there is nothing that we can expect from our life.. we just need to change the direction of our thoughts.. by pursuing sth else.. its easy done than said.. n i mean it..

akanksha..

jai kilkii taull..


yashbeniwal said:
Hi Akki.......

how r u....

Apni tog Arzoo yeh hai ki, Abh main arzoo hi naa karu.........

Kyonki Arzoo humnaie ki toh gham paaye
Roshini saath laayi thee saaye,
Saaye gahre thee..
Aur Roshini halki...............

anyway good going Nikki.......
keep it up........
 
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