Betiyan

[satender]

Beti jiski gaud mein aati hai
Khushiyon se wo ghar bhar jata hai

Uski pyaari muskan se
Ghar ka har kona chahakta hai

Laad pyaar mein badi hoti hai
Palkon pe bitha har nata rakhta hai

Kitne naazon se palti beti
Maangne se pahle sab milta hai

Babul ka dil ka ye tukda
Jo vidayi pe sabko rula jata hai

nice poem.....aise hi likhte rahiye

 

[choudharyneelam]

nice poem.....aise hi likhte rahiye

jaroor...ye sabse pahli post maine khud ko mile pyaar ko soch ke likhi thi.... ...i really have got lots of love from my papa dearest and from every member of my family, all relatives....bas bayaan nahin kar sakti ki kitna sara pyaar mila hai mujhe aaj tak aur abhi bhi waise hi barkarar hai....i feel myself the luckiest one when i compare the stock of love from others that i gained from everyone...really unforgettable memories for me ..touchwood!!... ...aur baaki aage ki lines kisi kisi ki life dekh ke likhi hain

 

[skarmveer]

Really Good,

Really nice and heart touching thread,

True love and effection we get from-mother-sister and then doughter i never find this type of love any where in my life although I am very much satisfied with my life partner but the type of love i got from my doughter
no comparison.

Thanks to all women's for this uncompareable love and for Neelam Ji for this
nice thread and nice poems.

Karmveer

jaroor...ye sabse pahli post maine khud ko mile pyaar ko soch ke likhi thi.... ...i really have got lots of love from my papa dearest and from every member of my family, all relatives....bas bayaan nahin kar sakti ki kitna sara pyaar mila hai mujhe aaj tak aur abhi bhi waise hi barkarar hai....i feel myself the luckiest one when i compare the stock of love from others that i gained from everyone...really unforgettable memories for me ..touchwood!!... ...aur baaki aage ki lines kisi kisi ki life dekh ke likhi hain

 

[choudharyneelam]

Really nice and heart touching thread,

True love and effection we get from-mother-sister and then doughter i never find this type of love any where in my life although I am very much satisfied with my life partner but the type of love i got from my doughter
no comparison.

Thanks to all women's for this uncompareable love and for Neelam Ji for this
nice thread and nice poems.

Karmveer

Thanks a ton for praising my such compositions