Dear members

[achalsingh]

A nazm by a famous urdu poet.
Tum kis soch me doob gaye ho,
Hath ka pathar pani ke sene par maro,
Pani chot ko sah kar, mojo ke surat me bhata, sahil sahil sar patak kar apni asli halat me aa jayega.
Tum kis soch me doob gaye ho,
Hath ka pathar pani ke sene par maro,
Mai pani ho.
Regards -Achal Singh

 

[stokas]

A small and nice nazm.

Good one, keep it up Achal.

 

[vinaysiwach]

bhai achal
mere ko to pata nahi tha ki aap shayirana shock bhi rakhte ho, undoubtedly a good one itni se gazal mein to na kuch kaha or na kuch baki raha.
keep it up !!!

 

[rajeshrathee]

A nazm by a famous urdu poet.
Tum kis soch me doob gaye ho,
Hath ka pathar pani ke sene par maro,
Pani chot ko sah kar, mojo ke surat me bhata, sahil sahil sar patak kar apni asli halat me aa jayega.
Tum kis soch me doob gaye ho,
Hath ka pathar pani ke sene par maro,
Mai pani ho.
Regards -Achal Singh

Barso rakha pahlu main
hum kuch bhi na hue
tumhari nazm padhi to
yed dil tumhara ho gaya

 

[p_singhdelhi]

Undoubtely these lines are the best if one goes into the deep of the meaning.
keep on posting such nice bazms.

 

[vrshokeen]

Yaar Achal Jatlanders ko bata hee de kee aap hamare college ke jamane ke jabardast shayar hein aur nazam bhi kaise kaise papers par likhte the pls yaar koi apni nai purani dalo purani mein yaad dilaye to tu hee meri neelam tu hee meri archana....

 

[rajeshrathee]

Vijay bhai adhuri nahi pu nazam likhwaon Achal bhai se, woh aajkal business main kuch jyada hi busy hai