Dedicated to Cma Sndhu

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I have been reading some threads regarding Cma Sndhu and the ‘ban’ business. In a hurry, I have attempted this running poem. No offence to anyone – for reading pleasure only !!

http://www.jatland.com/forums/member.php?u=13058

सीमा, ए सीमा !
तू ठहरी एक पत्रकार, तेरे काम की नहीं कोई सीमा
पर तू है एक जाटणी भी और एक 'जाटलैंडर' भी !
सो, यहां तूने सारे रिकार्ड तोड़े -
पर सिर तो किसी के नहीं फोड़े !
तू बनी जाटलैंडर कुछ दिन पहले ही
पर इस मैदान में इतनी जल्दी 'रन' बना लिये 1120
कितना अच्छा स्कोर !
यानि एक ओवर में 6.30 का रन-रेट !!
इतना अच्छा स्कोर तो मैं भी कभी न बना सका !

तूने खूब चौके और छक्के मारे
तेरे लिखे धागे भी कोई कच्चे धागे न थे -
खूब पढ़े गए सारे ।

तुझे शायद हिन्दी से थी कुछ 'अलर्जी'
पर वो तो तेरी मर्जी, इसमें कुछ न थी खुदगर्जी
पर देखो न, मुझे पता होते हुए भी कि
सीमा को है मेरी हिन्दी पोस्ट से अलर्जी -
मैं क्यूं लिख रहा हूं यह हिन्दी पोस्ट ?
मेरी मर्जी !!

उम्मीद है तू यह सब पढ़ रही होगी -
आउट होने के बाद भी - बेशक जवाब न सके तू


कई छक्के मारे, कई बाउलरों को दी मात
वे कर नहीं सके तुझे आउट !
पर देख सीमा - यह दुनिया है
हमारे जाटलैंड की दुनिया -
और पगली, दुनिया तो दुनिया है !
शेक्सपीयर वाली बात - यह दुनिया एक रंगमंच है
और हम सब इसमें काम करने वाले कलाकार -
अपना-अपना काम करो और रुख्सत हो जाओ यहां से

इसमें भी - कभी न कभी आउट तो होना ही पड़ता है
सुना है तुझे 'आउट' भी किया तो एक जाटणी ने ही ।
मत हो निराश - याद रख वही ताऊ वाली बात
घरवाले अगर डांटें, तो भी प्यार से ही डांटते हैं

पर कोई बात नहीं, तू निराश न हो -
भला वो खिलाड़ी भी क्या जो कभी आउट न हो
वो लीडर भी क्या जो कुछ दिन 'हाउस-अरैस्ट' न हो
वो पार्टी-नेता भी क्या जिस पर 'वाक-आउट' न हो
वो पत्रकार भी क्या जिस की पोस्ट पर 'डाउट' न हो

तुझे जाटलैंड से बहुत थी आस
एक अच्छे दूल्हे की भी तुझे है तलाश -
शायद इसीलिए एक 'मैट्रिमोनियल' डाला जाटलैंड पर
भगवान तेरी इच्छा जरूर पूरी करे -
और तुझे मिले एक अच्छा जीवन-साथी ।
और फिर तू वापस आये यहां उसी धूम-धड़ाके से
और फिर बनाये रन
यह भी है एक फन !!

अंधेरी रात बीती, हो गई भोर -
भाई सरपंचो (और सरपंचनियो)
जरा करना कुछ गौर !

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Dev Uncle chale gaye unke saath saath unki last post bhi band kar di. Why??? Kyunki as per Bharti "Goodbye mails not allowed".
Are "dedications" allowed????
Agar hum sab thoda sa dimaag saaf kar le to behtar hoga.....

Sick,
Sumit
 
Deswal Sir...mhaari Seema Kargil me shaheed hogi....aapne mombati si kyun na jalayi yaadey??? Aap kaho to Maun sa bhi rakh le 2 minute ka???
Sorry if I offend you but this thread to me is "silly".

Thanks,
Sumit

dndeswal said:
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I have been reading some threads regarding Cma Sndhu and the ‘ban’ business. In a hurry, I have attempted this running poem. No offence to anyone – for reading pleasure only !!

http://www.jatland.com/forums/member.php?u=13058

सीमा, ए सीमा !
तू ठहरी एक पत्रकार, तेरे काम की नहीं कोई सीमा
पर तू है एक जाटणी भी और एक 'जाटलैंडर' भी !
सो, यहां तूने सारे रिकार्ड तोड़े -
पर सिर तो किसी के नहीं फोड़े !
तू बनी जाटलैंडर कुछ दिन पहले ही
पर इस मैदान में इतनी जल्दी 'रन' बना लिये 1120
कितना अच्छा स्कोर !
यानि एक ओवर में 6.30 का रन-रेट !!
इतना अच्छा स्कोर तो मैं भी कभी न बना सका !

तूने खूब चौके और छक्के मारे
तेरे लिखे धागे भी कोई कच्चे धागे न थे -
खूब पढ़े गए सारे ।

तुझे शायद हिन्दी से थी कुछ 'अलर्जी'
पर वो तो तेरी मर्जी, इसमें कुछ न थी खुदगर्जी
पर देखो न, मुझे पता होते हुए भी कि
सीमा को है मेरी हिन्दी पोस्ट से अलर्जी -
मैं क्यूं लिख रहा हूं यह हिन्दी पोस्ट ?
मेरी मर्जी !!

उम्मीद है तू यह सब पढ़ रही होगी -
आउट होने के बाद भी - बेशक जवाब न सके तू


कई छक्के मारे, कई बाउलरों को दी मात
वे कर नहीं सके तुझे आउट !
पर देख सीमा - यह दुनिया है
हमारे जाटलैंड की दुनिया -
और पगली, दुनिया तो दुनिया है !
शेक्सपीयर वाली बात - यह दुनिया एक रंगमंच है
और हम सब इसमें काम करने वाले कलाकार -
अपना-अपना काम करो और रुख्सत हो जाओ यहां से

इसमें भी - कभी न कभी आउट तो होना ही पड़ता है
सुना है तुझे 'आउट' भी किया तो एक जाटणी ने ही ।
मत हो निराश - याद रख वही ताऊ वाली बात
घरवाले अगर डांटें, तो भी प्यार से ही डांटते हैं

पर कोई बात नहीं, तू निराश न हो -
भला वो खिलाड़ी भी क्या जो कभी आउट न हो
वो लीडर भी क्या जो कुछ दिन 'हाउस-अरैस्ट' न हो
वो पार्टी-नेता भी क्या जिस पर 'वाक-आउट' न हो
वो पत्रकार भी क्या जिस की पोस्ट पर 'डाउट' न हो

तुझे जाटलैंड से बहुत थी आस
एक अच्छे दूल्हे की भी तुझे है तलाश -
शायद इसीलिए एक 'मैट्रिमोनियल' डाला जाटलैंड पर
भगवान तेरी इच्छा जरूर पूरी करे -
और तुझे मिले एक अच्छा जीवन-साथी ।
और फिर तू वापस आये यहां उसी धूम-धड़ाके से
और फिर बनाये रन
यह भी है एक फन !!

अंधेरी रात बीती, हो गई भोर -
भाई सरपंचो (और सरपंचनियो)
जरा करना कुछ गौर !

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sumitsehrawat said:
Deswal Sir...mhaari Seema Kargil me shaheed hogi....aapne mombati si kyun na jalayi yaadey??? Aap kaho to Maun sa bhi rakh le 2 minute ka???
Sorry if I offend you but this thread to me is "silly".

Thanks,
Sumit
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Don't be sentimental Sumit. Your above post seems to be "silly", not this thread itself. Koun shaheed ho gaya Kargil mein?

Don't worry - wait for a few days. Believe me, Seema will start writing her posts here very soon. Actually she is still here, logging normally (despite ban), reading all our posts and seen 'online' - and is hale and hearty.
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Deswal Sir, I am afraid you read between the lines. Why would I be sentimental here? I have not been so. 'Sarcastic' would have been the right adjective.

Anyways...hey Seema...how it feels there???... I mean reading reading reading and not writing. hehehehe :)!! Come back.

Moderators or Inhibitors??? :eek:

~Sumit
dndeswal said:
Don't be sentimental Sumit. Your above post seems to be "silly", not this thread itself. Koun shaheed ho gaya Kargil mein?

Don't worry - wait for a few days. Believe me, Seema will start writing her posts here very soon. Actually she is still here, logging normally (despite ban), reading all our posts and seen 'online' - and is hale and hearty.
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सर आप ने लाफ़टर चेलेन्ज मे भाग
क्यो नहि लीया

आप तो बहुत बडीया कविता लिखते हो
 
yu ke rollya ho ryua hai merre paachhe...........kaun kuan jalwatan ho liya jatland tai.................eibb main ke kahu.......... baarre ne kitne ban kar diye iss jatland pai......par aaj lok koi dhang tai ban bhi kona hua...;)....... ba s nuoey rolla maachha rahe...ki aaj falaana ban ho gya...aaj dhimka ban ho gya.............. main bhi ho liya 5-7 bar to...par fer bhi thaarre saamhi huin........Ultimately no one is banned here..ppl leave this site on their will...it looks boring after few days..is n't it?................. khamma kha seeng aljhaate haande yeh mods bhi:p.................chhod do yeh tabbak toorre....................ROOOKAAAAAAAAAA@ tabbaktorre
 
DND Ji...please don't mind....first this seems no Poetry to me and secondly why should you post her Picture n write details about her matrimonial ad on Jatland? There are so many girls who have made profiles for matrimony you should have pasted all those names here. Its ok if she wants you to post like this otherwise i see it offensive and thats what i felt after i spoke to her. She is as simple girl as any other female at Jatland then why to highlight her name like this and that too after she was banned and she can't reciprocate? Agar Seema ka writing style aapko itna pasand tha to pehley ye kavita urf Paragraph likhna chahiye tha jis mein aapney ENTER-ENTER ka button press kar ke isko kavita bananey ki naakam koshish ki?

Rahi baat uske office me kuch kaam karney ki....i feel she is wise enough to decide to use her skills n time as and when and where to use. And we all know we all are working and all have a good number of posts here, does it mean we are IDLE?

I feel Moderators should improve their vocabulary of Haryanwi Words by visiting atleast 1 hour to Wiki section and memorize new words and if possible write 10 new words here 10 times and that too in hindi then we'll see if they are spelt correctly or not and we'll see if the moderator is capable of being a moderator of a site whose name itself is JATLAND? if Asteriks appear on writing S-H-I-T then why doesn't they appear when someone write HINDI/Haryanwi slangs, why not add words that are offensive and indecent as per our Moderators to maintain a healthy atmosphere, if that's the real concern?

Also we seriously need unbiased moderators like Satyeshwar Singh and most importantly who keeps confidentiality too. A moderator should not be a prattler or who keeps blabbering and Ladies hi nahi aaj kal to gents bhi kum nahi hain iss maamley mein:)

What good is a Moderator who was made Moderator because HE/SHE never indulged in any controversies but ever since always has been in Controversies? I think learned Moderators need to look into this seriously....

If we look at 2 threads one Indira Gandhi and Mahatma Gandhi's if we read properly it has number pf slangs never ever used in any Thread at Jatland? Was the guy banned? He was just given a warning....yanni Pyar Ka Chattu....now lemme explain Chattu mean halka sa thapadd....but if i get banned for writing Pyar ka Chattu....i'll be more than pleased
 
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sunitahooda said:
DND Ji...please don't mind....first this seems no Poetry to me and secondly why should you post her Picture n write details about her matrimonial ad on Jatland? There are so many girls who have made profiles for matrimony you should have pasted all those names here. Its ok if she wants you to post like this otherwise i see it offensive and thats what i felt after i spoke to her. She is as simple girl as any other female at Jatland then why to highlight her name like this and that too after she was banned and she can't reciprocate? Agar Seema ka writing style aapko itna pasand tha to pehley ye kavita urf Paragraph likhna chahiye tha jis mein aapney ENTER-ENTER ka button press kar ke isko kavita bananey ki naakam koshish ki?

Rahi baat uske office me kuch kaam karney ki....i feel she is wise enough to decide to use her skills n time as and when and where to use. And we all know we all are working and all have a good number of posts here, does it mean we are IDLE?

I feel Moderators should improve their vocabulary of Haryanwi Words by visiting atleast 1 hour to Wiki section and memorize new words and if possible write 10 new words here 10 times and that too in hindi then we'll see if they are spelt correctly or not and we'll see if the moderator is capable of being a moderator of a site whose name itself is JATLAND? if Asteriks appear on writing S-H-I-T then why doesn't they appear when someone write HINDI/Haryanwi slangs, why not add words that are offensive and indecent as per our Moderators to maintain a healthy atmosphere, if that's the real concern?

Also we seriously need unbiased moderators like Satyeshwar Singh and most importantly who keeps confidentiality too. A moderator should not be a prattler or who keeps blabbering and Ladies hi nahi aaj kal to gents bhi kum nahi hain iss maamley mein:)

What good is a Moderator who was made Moderator because HE/SHE never indulged in any controversies but ever since always has been in Controversies? I think learned Moderators need to look into this seriously....

If we look at 2 threads one Indira Gandhi and Mahatma Gandhi's if we read properly it has number pf slangs never ever used in any Thread at Jatland? Was the guy banned? He was just given a warning....yanni Pyar Ka Chattu....now lemme explain Chattu mean halka sa thapadd....but if i get banned for writing Pyar ka Chattu....i'll be more than pleased
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my jiji needs an applaud...there's a word jiji called 'immaturity' and here it has been defined tangibly
 
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