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maniisha

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Hello frnds,
while browsing through some site i came across this heart touching lines which i want to share with u all ..:)

Samajh na sake dooriyan kyun thi,
Zubaan per the lafz phir majbooriyon kyun thi,
Dilon ki baat agar chaye haqiqat hoti hai,
Hamare darmiyan woh khamoshiyan kyun thi,
Boone the humne bhi kuch reshmi dhaagon ke khwaab,
Humare hisse mein woh kaali dooriyan kyun thi,
Idhar honthon per azab si joombish,
Udhar kuch raaz dil ke talon mein,
Samajh nake na sargoshiyan hawaon ki,
Humare hisse mein sehra ki andhiyan kyun thi,
tumhe gurez meri chand baaton se,
Main bhi parwaz ki thi hamil,
Pahoonch ke mill ke patthar per sochti hoon,
Safar tanha tou phir woh dooriyan kyun thi...:)
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Manisha i dunno abt dooriya n all but i like ur signature
“Experience is the name every one gives to their mistakes.” --> absolutely correct

And somewhere ur lines r also talking abt experience n mistakes... really good
 
maniisha said:
Hello frnds,
while browsing through some site i came across this heart touching lines which i want to share with u all ..:)

Samajh na sake dooriyan kyun thi,
Zubaan per the lafz phir majbooriyon kyun thi,
Dilon ki baat agar chaye haqiqat hoti hai,
Hamare darmiyan woh khamoshiyan kyun thi,
Boone the humne bhi kuch reshmi dhaagon ke khwaab,
Humare hisse mein woh kaali dooriyan kyun thi,
Idhar honthon per azab si joombish,
Udhar kuch raaz dil ke talon mein,
Samajh nake na sargoshiyan hawaon ki,
Humare hisse mein sehra ki andhiyan kyun thi,
tumhe gurez meri chand baaton se,
Main bhi parwaz ki thi hamil,
Pahoonch ke mill ke patthar per sochti hoon,
Safar tanha tou phir woh dooriyan kyun thi...:)​
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Bahut Khoob..aur is say inspire ho kar kuch pesh kar raha hoon..meri hi kuch pankatiyaan

Jab hum woh dooriyan mitaa na sake
paas ho kar bhi paas aa na sake.

Saanatta tha itna gehra
Ghar kay konay main ek deepak bhi jala na sake

Kya thi woh majbooriyaan
Ki apnay hokar bhi unhe apnaa na sake.:)
 
meri bhi ek koshish

doorio ka ehsas door rah kar to kitna kareeb tha
pass aakar bhi jab tum na mile to ehsas bhi gaya
na mille to milne ki tamanna to kahi thi dil me
jab mil ke bhi vo na milaa to aas bhi na rahi ehsas bhi gaya
 
deepakchoudhry said:
Bahut Khoob..aur is say inspire ho kar kuch pesh kar raha hoon..meri hi kuch pankatiyaan

Jab hum woh dooriyan mitaa na sake
paas ho kar bhi paas aa na sake.

Saanatta tha itna gehra
Ghar kay konay main ek deepak bhi jala na sake

Kya thi woh majbooriyaan
Ki apnay hokar bhi unhe apnaa na sake.:)
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Good one sir Ji...:)
 
1 more :)

1 more but this time in Punjabi....hope u all like this :)

Ik dua di aas ch sari raat jaage,
par koi tara ambro tutya na,
Chura k nazr langh gye kolo di,
onna haal v sada puchhya na.
Badi mudat ton reejh c kujh aakhan di
par koi manya na koi rusya na,
Asin dil te hath rakh takde rahe,
onna da turda kadam koi rukya na.
onna de bullaan te assi khid de rahe te sade nain'o pani sukya na,
ik milan di aas rahi dil vich te ise aas ch jiwan mukya na....:)​
 
For my Net frnds :)

Somehow in this great big world
I found my way to you -:)
My friend across the Internet,
My heart, my soul, that's who!
You try to make me smile
With the mail you send my way,
You never fail to drop a line
Each and every day...
Whenever I have hurried home
With something new to share,
I find it just so comforting
That you are always there...
Encouragement you give me
And a friendship that is true...
I'm glad my soul while reaching out
Found someone like YOU!
Thank you for being such a blessing in my life!....:):)
 
Jab dil mil gaye hein tou durri hi kya
Fassane ye duniyan ko yuun na sunna
Nazzar lagg gai tou pachhtaoge
Paas reh kar bhi na mil paogge

Sapnon mein unko bulaya karo
Dil ki dhhaddkan sunaya karo
Gar dil hei sachcha tou chinta na kar
Suraj ki dhoop mein nahaya karo

Ye dil ka laggana koi khel nahin
Bin izzazat ke hotta koi mel nahin
Dua kar uss duniyan ke rachaita se
Tere darbaar mein derr hei andhher nahin.
 
devdahiya said:
Jab dil mil gaye hein tou durri hi kya
Fassane ye duniyan ko yuun na sunna
Nazzar lagg gai tou pachhtaoge
Paas reh kar bhi na mil paogge

Sapnon mein unko bulaya karo
Dil ki dhhaddkan sunaya karo
Gar dil hei sachcha tou chinta na kar
Suraj ki dhoop mein nahaya karo

Ye dil ka laggana koi khel nahin
Bin izzazat ke hotta koi mel nahin
Dua kar uss duniyan ke rachaita se
Tere darbaar mein derr hei andhher nahin.
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Bohut badiyaan lekha hai Kaka ji.....good composition.....
 
devdahiya said:
Jab dil mil gaye hein tou durri hi kya
Fassane ye duniyan ko yuun na sunna
Nazzar lagg gai tou pachhtaoge
Paas reh kar bhi na mil paogge

Sapnon mein unko bulaya karo
Dil ki dhhaddkan sunaya karo
Gar dil hei sachcha tou chinta na kar
Suraj ki dhoop mein nahaya karo

Ye dil ka laggana koi khel nahin
Bin izzazat ke hotta koi mel nahin
Dua kar uss duniyan ke rachaita se
Tere darbaar mein derr hei andhher nahin.
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Bahut Khoob :)
 
Nice1 Sir ji :)

devdahiya said:
Jab dil mil gaye hein tou durri hi kya
Fassane ye duniyan ko yuun na sunna
Nazzar lagg gai tou pachhtaoge
Paas reh kar bhi na mil paogge

Sapnon mein unko bulaya karo
Dil ki dhhaddkan sunaya karo
Gar dil hei sachcha tou chinta na kar
Suraj ki dhoop mein nahaya karo

Ye dil ka laggana koi khel nahin
Bin izzazat ke hotta koi mel nahin
Dua kar uss duniyan ke rachaita se
Tere darbaar mein derr hei andhher nahin.
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Good one :)
 
Quiet Emotions

I always wanted more from you,
Than you were willing to give;
So now we have gone our separate ways,
With each of us a different life to live…

The bond will always be there,
The friendship always intact;
But the time for us has come and gone,
And pages of time we can’t turn back…

I will remember those smiles & laughters,
And those fights that have left painless scars;
I will always be a friend to you,
And wonder how you are!

Sometimes on those busy days,
When you have thousands of things to do;
Just lemme slip through your mind,
And spend some time with you!!

In that quiet moment when you are surprised to find me there,
Just remember, even with the distances between us, I’ll always be that someone; who will forever care..!!
 
Good lines manisha...

It has nothing to do with previous mails but simply I would like to add something more which i read on net ......
Don´t let someone be your priority when you are just an option in their life.....relationship works best when they are balanced.

People who leave you with tears in your eyes were never there for you and those who really loves you will never bring tears in your eyes. Live for those who really love you.
Time spend together is worth remembering. But If its not part of present and future let it go.....let it have place in memories but no associated dreams......memories should be cherished with a smile....if they really deserve....
Its good to be good to the whole world but before that its good to be good to yourself as well. Before loving the whole world...its good to love someone who loves you most.....Love yourself first.....Before caring for the whole world..there is no harm caring for your soul as well and at first.........
 
shashiverma said:
Good lines manisha...

It has nothing to do with previous mails but simply I would like to add something more which i read on net ......
Don´t let someone be your priority when you are just an option in their life.....relationship works best when they are balanced.

People who leave you with tears in your eyes were never there for you and those who really loves you will never bring tears in your eyes. Live for those who really love you.
Time spend together is worth remembering. But If its not part of present and future let it go.....let it have place in memories but no associated dreams......memories should be cherished with a smile....if they really deserve....
Its good to be good to the whole world but before that its good to be good to yourself as well. Before loving the whole world...its good to love someone who loves you most.....Love yourself first.....Before caring for the whole world..there is no harm caring for your soul as well and at first.........
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Real pearls of WISDOM these.
 
shashiverma said:
Good lines manisha...

It has nothing to do with previous mails but simply I would like to add something more which i read on net ......
Don´t let someone be your priority when you are just an option in their life.....relationship works best when they are balanced.

People who leave you with tears in your eyes were never there for you and those who really loves you will never bring tears in your eyes. Live for those who really love you.
Time spend together is worth remembering. But If its not part of present and future let it go.....let it have place in memories but no associated dreams......memories should be cherished with a smile....if they really deserve....
Its good to be good to the whole world but before that its good to be good to yourself as well. Before loving the whole world...its good to love someone who loves you most.....Love yourself first.....Before caring for the whole world..there is no harm caring for your soul as well and at first.........
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Don have words to reply for this... bahut bahut bahut hi badhiya baat kahi Dr ji... have feelings to write pages but dunno wt ... keep on giving such msgs...
 
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