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[shobhitdeshwal]

Chalna thi.. phir bhi mera... usme vishwas ghana tha...
Us Maya ki chaya me kuch saccha swayam bana tha....

Dukh kya tha unko.. mera sukh le kar jo yun Bhage....
sote me chumban le kar jab rom tanik sa jaage...

Sangya se aaye tum.. Madakta se chale gaye....
Hum vyakul pade bilakhte... Utre hue nashe se....

Ab chut ta nahi chudaye... rang gaya hriday hai kaisa??
Aansoo se dhula nikarta... yeh rang anokha kaisa????????????????????

Vismriti hai, madakta hai... Murchana bhari hai mann me....
Kalpna rahi... sapna tha... Murali bajti nirjan me....

NISHTHUR!!!!! yeh kya chup jana???? MERA BHI KOI HOGA....
PRATYASHA VIRAH NISHA KI.... hum hone aur DUKH HOGA!!!!!

Itna sukh le pal bhar me.... jeevan ke antsthal se....
Tum khisak gayin dheere se... ROTE pran VIKAL se.....

vo HANSI aur yeh AANSOO ghulne de... mil jaane de.....
Barsat nayi hone de... Kaliyon ko khil jane de....

Meri priya, Priyatam sangini.. SUNDAR, KATHOR, KOMALTE....
hum dono rahein sakha hi... jeevan path chalte chalte!!!!

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal

 

[choudharyneelam]

hmmmmmm you all guys are very good in writing all sad shayaris and poems and even few female members are coming up to show their talents hidden inside.....keep on writing more such great things.....but i'm waiting for the day when you all will engage yourself in thinking about some happy moments and then putting those in your nice words.....keep this continuity working......sometimes i wish that i lend you one seperate dairy to each, to write everything that comes in your thoughts/mind and then i'll read it in my free time

 

[shobhitdeshwal]

yeah sure, Neelam, I would welcome this encouragement and would look forward to the time when I get that diary!!
Will be coming up with happy notes as well, with happier times.. if at all they arrive!!!

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal

 

[choudharyneelam]

yeah sure, Neelam, I would welcome this encouragement and would look forward to the time when I get that diary!!
Will be coming up with happy notes as well, with happier times.. if at all they arrive!!!

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal

hey why you said like that.....surely there will be lots of happy moments in your store.....only you haven't realised that...but soon you will be having all ...and i'm also looking for that good day when i'll get the chance to give you all one one dairy each, but ritu is very far.....i don't know when will i meet her in personal.....

 

[shobhitdeshwal]

hey why you said like that.....surely there will be lots of happy moments in your store.....only you haven't realised that...but soon you will be having all ...and i'm also looking for that good day when i'll get the chance to give you all one one dairy each, but ritu is very far.....i don't know when will i meet her in personal.....

Thanks for putting in faith once again!!
And kutru sun main.,... dairy tawla de diye.. na to kaat khaunga!! ha ha...
Arr Ritu bhi aan laag ri hai July me India... mil liye uste bhi.. Dilli aawegi......
Koi door na honda/..
Jahan Chah Vahan Raah

 

[choudharyneelam]

Thanks for putting in faith once again!!
And kutru sun main.,... dairy tawla de diye.. na to kaat khaunga!! ha ha...
Arr Ritu bhi aan laag ri hai July me India... mil liye uste bhi.. Dilli aawegi......
Koi door na honda/..
Jahan Chah Vahan Raah

hahahahahahaha.....ok i'll definitely try to meet her, in july i'll be bit busy in school as we are going to conduct I-terms for students...but i'll try my best to meet her.....and listen none of my friend is animal.....they are real human beings who all have some great talents inside and they are intelligent also....i know that....IIT tag is sufficient for this intelligency

 

[shobhitdeshwal]

hahahahahahaha.....ok i'll definitely try to meet her, in july i'll be bit busy in school as we are going to conduct I-terms for students...but i'll try my best to meet her.....and listen none of my friend is animal.....they are real human beings who all have some great talents inside and they are intelligent also....i know that....IIT tag is sufficient for this intelligency

Tu masterni sai!!! Gyan dekh ke laage to tha.. ib bera pada!!!!!
Kunse school be padhaya kare Neelam?? Arr ke subject??

 

[rity79gem]

Nice Poem Sir,

Keep posting such nice stuff......

hail Sythian Culture!!

Rity

Chalna thi.. phir bhi mera... usme vishwas ghana tha...
Us Maya ki chaya me kuch saccha swayam bana tha....

Dukh kya tha unko.. mera sukh le kar jo yun Bhage....
sote me chumban le kar jab rom tanik sa jaage...

Sangya se aaye tum.. Madakta se chale gaye....
Hum vyakul pade bilakhte... Utre hue nashe se....

Ab chut ta nahi chudaye... rang gaya hriday hai kaisa??
Aansoo se dhula nikarta... yeh rang anokha kaisa????????????????????

Vismriti hai, madakta hai... Murchana bhari hai mann me....
Kalpna rahi... sapna tha... Murali bajti nirjan me....

NISHTHUR!!!!! yeh kya chup jana???? MERA BHI KOI HOGA....
PRATYASHA VIRAH NISHA KI.... hum hone aur DUKH HOGA!!!!!

Itna sukh le pal bhar me.... jeevan ke antsthal se....
Tum khisak gayin dheere se... ROTE pran VIKAL se.....

vo HANSI aur yeh AANSOO ghulne de... mil jaane de.....
Barsat nayi hone de... Kaliyon ko khil jane de....

Meri priya, Priyatam sangini.. SUNDAR, KATHOR, KOMALTE....
hum dono rahein sakha hi... jeevan path chalte chalte!!!!

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal

 

[downtoearth]

good lines bro........ keep it p

 

[ravi.shekhar]

good poem. lage raho.

 

[cooljat]

bhai Shobhit long time no c
waitin for more sucha nice poem yaar

rock on
Jit

 

[choudharyneelam]

bhai Shobhit long time no c
waitin for more sucha nice poem yaar

rock on
Jit

hahaha.....Jit he left the jatland forever....i think so.....and you waiting for him.....learn from a girl.....from me...don't wait for anything.....carry on with other friends.....many people will come and go like that.

 

[rity79gem]

Well in two days am sure no one can leave jatland for ever...
And I too am a girl and know what friends are... so its always good to recall them.. even if somethings have gone wrong with them.. friends are forever.... So Jit ji... keep on waiting, and Neelam ji join hands in recalling friends.... I mean atleast such nice stuff will be back!!! ha ha

Hail Sythian Culture!!

Rity

hahaha.....Jit he left the jatland forever....i think so.....and you waiting for him.....learn from a girl.....from me...don't wait for anything.....carry on with other friends.....many people will come and go like that.

 

[rkumar]

hahaha.....Jit he left the jatland forever....i think so.....and you waiting for him.....learn from a girl.....from me...don't wait for anything.....carry on with other friends.....many people will come and go like that.

Looks like you are right Neelam. I just checked his name in the members list and its no more there... Hope all well with him? Does anyone know the reason of his leaving Jatland?

RK^2

 

[choudharyneelam]

Well in two days am sure no one can leave jatland for ever...
And I too am a girl and know what friends are... so its always good to recall them.. even if somethings have gone wrong with them.. friends are forever.... So Jit ji... keep on waiting, and Neelam ji join hands in recalling friends.... I mean atleast such nice stuff will be back!!! ha ha

Hail Sythian Culture!!

Rity

Hey Ritika, you are very nice as it can be seen in your replies and nobody want to lose freinds.....it's good to have lots of freinds.....but he really had left the jatland.....and Rajendra Sir the reason that i know was some controversy with someone...don't know with whom....i also don't know what kind of guy Shobhit is as i have never met him personally.....but he was feeling very bad when he left the jatland, feeling very insulted....as he had a chat with me before leaving jatland.....same thing happened with him earlier few days back before leaving from here.....but i asked him not to leave it and have confidence in himself....but i think he had very high controversies with some people here, so he just left the jatland......now i don't know who all were those to made him feel bad which forced him to leave jatland forever.

 

[cooljat]

ur right Rity,
woh kya hai naa ki Jats mein ek negative trait hota hai...woh bahut jaldi ruush jaate hein....lekin koi naa I believe mein use wapas le aaonga jatland pe!

he's one of the most talented Jat I've ever met

come back bro

rock on
Jit

Well in two days am sure no one can leave jatland for ever...
And I too am a girl and know what friends are... so its always good to recall them.. even if somethings have gone wrong with them.. friends are forever.... So Jit ji... keep on waiting, and Neelam ji join hands in recalling friends.... I mean atleast such nice stuff will be back!!! ha ha

Hail Sythian Culture!!

Rity

 

[rity79gem]

You are right Jit Ji....
jats me hota hai yeh negetive trait.. chhoti baton ko bada bana dete hain!! he he he...
And us se bhi zayada negetive!!! yeh ki..... eik doosre se bada hai!!!! so koi dhyan bhi nahi dega ki talent yahan hai ya nahi????
I too am sure am gonna read something nice as this poem soon from the horse's mouth directly......

Hail Sythian Culture!!

Rity

ur right Rity,
woh kya hai naa ki Jats mein ek negative trait hota hai...woh bahut jaldi ruush jaate hein....lekin koi naa I believe mein use wapas le aaonga jatland pe!

he's one of the most talented Jat I've ever met

come back bro

rock on
Jit

 

[cooljat]

ur very much right Rity ji,
lekin all ppl r not alike, uske talent ke kuch admirer to hai, jaise ki hum
btw, I've listend whole lotta poem n other things straight from the horse's mouth


rock on
Jit

You are right Jit Ji....
jats me hota hai yeh negetive trait.. chhoti baton ko bada bana dete hain!! he he he...
And us se bhi zayada negetive!!! yeh ki..... eik doosre se bada hai!!!! so koi dhyan bhi nahi dega ki talent yahan hai ya nahi????
I too am sure am gonna read something nice as this poem soon from the horse's mouth directly......

Hail Sythian Culture!!

Rity

 

[choudharyneelam]

Nice Jit, it would be very nice if you can bring him back so taht we can enjoy reading his great poetries.....he should be strong and must believe in himself.....even if all others talk wrong about him.

 

[prashantacmet]

ussne kona chhodya Jatland......sarpancho ne baahar kar diya wo......... he has been banned forever............ eibb batao thaam usse kyooker hultaa bulaoogge.......................sarpancho tai poocho ne uski gail issa Julm kyon karra........... chokhya chorra tha........ baara ni usstai ke galti hui........

hahaha.....Jit he left the jatland forever....i think so.....and you waiting for him.....learn from a girl.....from me...don't wait for anything.....carry on with other friends.....many people will come and go like that.