~~~ Ek Khwaish ~~~

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maniisha

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Ek khwaish hai jhalak mil jaye us chehre ki,
ke is deedaar ke baad koi tamanna na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai us dil tak pahunche sadayein,
ke do dilon ki dhadkonon mein koi doori na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai rishta jud jaye us naam se,
ke phir juda rehne ki koi majburi na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai woh pyar mile unse,
ke is dil ki koi aur arzoo na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai woh haath tham le is tarah,
ke phir is dil ki koi kamjori na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai maut aa jaye unki baahon mein,
ke phir zindagi se koi shikayat na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai ke laut aaye woh,
ke phir intzaar ki koi wajah na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai bhar jaye khushiyon se daaman,
ke kisi gham ki koi jagah na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai sang chale woh umr bhar mere,
ke phir kisi aur ka aasra na rahe....

Ek khwaish hai ke puri ho jaye her khwaish is dil ki,
ke phir khuda se koi iltazaa na rahe....:)
 
Nice composition !

Nice composition !

Ek khwaish hai ki tum hamesha aise hi likhti rahi
Ke fir mujhe kabhi likhne ki jarurat na pade !

You write gud :)
 
vijay said:
Nice composition !

Ek khwaish hai ki tum hamesha aise hi likhti rahi
Ke fir mujhe kabhi likhne ki jarurat na pade !

You write gud :)
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Thanks Vijay ji but sorry this is not my composition..
n some of them i have tried...:)
I have a collections of some gud wordings so i want to
share with u all...:)
Aapke bina tho is mehfil e shayri mein kami tho rahegi hi

I like urs & vivekdh too..:) so keep pouring .. :)
 
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maniisha said:
Thanks Vijay ji but sorry this is not my composition..
n some of them i have tried...:)
I have a collections of some gud wordings so i want to
share with u all...:)
I like urs & vivdh too..:)
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Is this whole poem is borrowd from somewhere or modified somewhat by you .....
Anyways nice .... try something by yourself too :)
 
too good manisha

2 lines from my side

Ek Khwaish hai ki khuda navaze mahobbat se husan walo ko
ke fher koi ishq kisi husan ki judai me naa jalle ......
 
bahut achi khwahis hai aapki

hiiii, monika ji
bahut achi khwahis hai aapki,


Raaje ulfat chupa ke dekh liya,
dil ko jala ke dekh liya
or kya dekhne ko baki raha
aapse dil laga ke dekh liya



santosh benaam
 
santoshbenaam said:
hiiii, monika ji
bahut achi khwahis hai aapki,


Raaje ulfat chupa ke dekh liya,
dil ko jala ke dekh liya
or kya dekhne ko baki raha
aapse dil laga ke dekh liya



santosh benaam
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Monika ji :confused::confused: yahan kaun hai ji iss naam se... :p:D
well nice composition Santosh ji Gud to c u back :)
 
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