Gunda Gardi--- A Folk Ragni--participate Please

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Maa bolli betti kade tu hansiye mannya anjaan gail
sudhi aayiye sudhi jayiye apni saheli ya bahan gail

gundey-badmashan tai bach nahi saktey
ye sarey kai paavein arr mauka taake javein

koi pichann ja gunda sai koye na jaave pichana
baat baat pai beijjat kardey dubhar kardey jeena

koye na kimme bigaad sake jo himmat ho sachi
apni Izzat ho apney haath baat ya batayi saachi

padhey likhey ho kai bhi lugaai nai kar dey be-ijjat
gundey khud nai manne gundey padhey-likhey bhundey

ganwar aadmi nai kehdey hum raaji ho kai ujjad
intelligent ka ke kare jo bhundi bakke arr sudhey
 
Gunda gardi--A Folk Ragni-- participate please

Resp Sunita jee

Thank you very much for your additions. few more lines further

R.S.Dahiya
 
Kuun bachawei izzat merri ghar-2 huye luttere
Merra bhai bhi dhundhhata handde kai chhoriyan ke dhherre

Kis kei bandhhu batta mein pohnchhi,kis ki karuun baddai
Kis ke dum pei bahar mei likkaddun,kitte kuwa kitte khai
Mandirran mei bhi bharre lunggadde,nakkali saarre chehre
Merra......................

Jitt ke likkaddun sitti bajjein,pachha karlein gundde
Puryan ki tei baat chhodd de,hero bann rhe tundde
Sarre gidhh ki dhhall lakhawein,ye handdein bagh-bhaggerre
Merra.........................

Yo matt pehrre,ow matt pehrre,sarre rukke marrein
Pahar lyo beshak,motti khhaddi,akhhyan tein ye tarrein
Le kei janam manne laddki ka kar li jinddagi reh-2
Merra..............................




Lyo ji Dr saheb humnei bhi aapki bhawana mei appni bhawana milla di sei.
 
Sir....thanks for acknowledging my addition and may i request you not to address me as Respected or Ji as i am much younger than you and regard your humble way to address ladies.
dahiyars said:
Resp Sunita jee

Thank you very much for your additions. few more lines further

R.S.Dahiya
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devdahiya said:
Jitt ke likkaddun sitti bajjein,pachha karlein gundde
Puryan ki tei baat chhodd de,hero bann rhe tundde
Sarre gidhh ki dhhall lakhawein,ye handdein bagh-bhaggerre
Merra.........................
sei.
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Yo baat theek nhi sai kaka ji... Bagh shareef hoya karein sain kati!!!! Bagh ne te koi ho ched de, fer bhi chup rehve sai!!!!
 
Rey Sattey tu kyu goddey todd rya sai....teri baat na hori....aadey maanasrupi bagh ki baat hori sai....joki maanas kum arr maanaskhaney ghaney lagein sain....:) :p
satyeshwar said:
Yo baat theek nhi sai kaka ji... Bagh shareef hoya karein sain kati!!!! Bagh ne te koi ho ched de, fer bhi chup rehve sai!!!!
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