Jo Chala Gya So Chala Gya

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Jo chala gya so chala gya,uske bare mei kya rona
Lakh karo tum jatan magar,jo hona hei wo ga hona

Pachhtane se kya milta,ye duniya aani-jaani hei
Yahan koi nahi rahega hardum,jeewan ajab kahani hei
Jo gandda kar ke baithhe ho,wo sab kuchh tum ko hei dhonna
Lakh....................................

Na dost rhein na matt-pitta,ye rachna uski aissi hei
Jiski seerat ho jaissi,kismat uski waissi hei
Laye thhe kya saath batao,jo padd jayega yahan khona
Lakh...............................

Prem bhre dil apne se,gar bhla kissi ka kar jao
Duniya ke iss jhanjhat se jaldi mukti tum pao
Baki sab kuchh mitti hei,satkaram pavitar hei sona
Lakh............................................
 
sir i think its modified poem on some great poet........................................

devdahiya said:
Jo chala gya so chala gya,uske bare mei kya rona
Lakh karo tum jatan magar,jo hona hei wo ga hona

Pachhtane se kya milta,ye duniya aani-jaani hei
Yahan koi nahi rahega hardum,jeewan ajab kahani hei
Jo gandda kar ke baithhe ho,wo sab kuchh tum ko hei dhonna
Lakh....................................

Na dost rhein na matt-pitta,ye rachna uski aissi hei
Jiski seerat ho jaissi,kismat uski waissi hei
Laye thhe kya saath batao,jo padd jayega yahan khona
Lakh...............................

Prem bhre dil apne se,gar bhla kissi ka kar jao
Duniya ke iss jhanjhat se jaldi mukti tum pao
Baki sab kuchh mitti hei,satkaram pavitar hei sona
Lakh............................................
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handsome_nashier said:
sir i think its modified poem on some great poet........................................
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Na bhai this is pure creation.....i have not read any such poem......I don't have a taste to post copy pastes. May be you have some idea dear.Do let me know.
 
devdahiya said:
Jo chala gya so chala gya,uske bare mei kya rona
Lakh karo tum jatan magar,jo hona hei wo ga hona

Pachhtane se kya milta,ye duniya aani-jaani hei
Yahan koi nahi rahega hardum,jeewan ajab kahani hei
Jo gandda kar ke baithhe ho,wo sab kuchh tum ko hei dhonna
Lakh....................................

Na dost rhein na matt-pitta,ye rachna uski aissi hei
Jiski seerat ho jaissi,kismat uski waissi hei
Laye thhe kya saath batao,jo padd jayega yahan khona
Lakh...............................

Prem bhre dil apne se,gar bhla kissi ka kar jao
Duniya ke iss jhanjhat se jaldi mukti tum pao
Baki sab kuchh mitti hei,satkaram pavitar hei sona
Lakh............................................
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Nice compositon Dev sir,



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Ye Jaane wale Kabhi bhi laut kar nahin aate
Sirf unki yaad hai jo hum kabhi bhula nahi pate
Hum kabhi bhi nahi chahte hai apno ko khona
Lakh karo..............................

Is zindagi ke raaste mein kuchh door unka saath mila
Jo apni kismat mein tha mil gaya ab kisi se kya gila
Kuchh logon ke liye ye dil kuch logon ke liye khilona
Lakh karo................................

Kya kahoge is duniyan mein ye sachchai kahan hai
Har kadam par haar rahi ye achhaai Yahan hai
Beimaani ko pholon ke sez imaan kaanton ka bichhona
Lakh karo..................................

Ek din hum bhi chale jayenge zindagi ke uss akhiri raaste
Jinko hamari kadar hai woh na ansoo bahana hamaare waste
"Vijay" Ki yaad se kahin abaad rahega kisi ke dil ka koi kona
Lakh karo.............................
 
vijay said:
Nice compositon Dev sir,



To continue.............


Ye Jaane wale Kabhi bhi laut kar nahin aate
Sirf unki yaad hai jo hum kabhi bhula nahi pate
Hum kabhi bhi nahi chahte hai apno ko khona
Lakh karo..............................

Is zindagi ke raaste mein kuchh door unka saath mila
Jo apni kismat mein tha mil gaya ab kisi se kya gila
Kuchh logon ke liye ye dil kuch logon ke liye khilona
Lakh karo................................

Kya kahoge is duniyan mein ye sachchai kahan hai
Har kadam par haar rahi ye achhaai Yahan hai
Beimaani ko pholon ke sez imaan kaanton ka bichhona
Lakh karo..................................

Ek din hum bhi chale jayenge zindagi ke uss akhiri raaste
Jinko hamari kadar hai woh na ansoo bahana hamaare waste
"Vijay" Ki yaad se kahin abaad rahega kisi ke dil ka koi kona
Lakh karo.............................
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Bilkul sahi baat kahi Vijay...good one...keep it up!




Aanchal mei maa ke lekar aata hei aansoo 2
Ek pyari si murat hoti,chahe ladka ya laddki ho
Khoon jala kar badda krein,wo unn par hi gurratta hei
Maat-pitta ka shabd ek bhi unke mann nahi bhata hei
Roe aatama maa ki phir bhi,deti hei ashiss hajaron
Lekin hum ko samajh na aaye,Ye jindaggi kuchh aissi hei yarro.
 
no sir i am not saying that it is copy paste i m sure its ur creation but what i am saying is, theme and style is same.....................didn't u read harivansh ray bachan's poem ---
jo bit gye so bat gye
devdahiya said:
Na bhai this is pure creation.....i have not read any such poem......I don't have a taste to post copy pastes. May be you have some idea dear.Do let me know.
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Jeewan ek priksha hei koi fail koi hei pass yahan
Koi andhhiyarre ki galliyon mein koi bandhhe baithha aass yahan
Koi Banna aankh ka tarra hei koi rotta pakkdde ek konna
Lakh karo.......................................


Kuchh aaye kuchh challe gaye kuchh janne ki teyyarri mei
Koi abhi pdharra hei koi fanss gaya duniya daari mei
Chhuppa huwa sab pardde mei,sab kuchh paddta hei tohnna
Lakh karo......................................


Koi royye dollat ko,koi paisse ko bekkar karre
Koi marr jatta hei izzat parr koi banni hui barbaad karre
Jabb khush reh karr ji saktte hein tou bolo hardum kyun ronna
Lakh karo.......................
 
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