Khush- Hal Kaum Ko Rakhna Hai To......?

[panwar_arya]

very nice and inspiring poem.keep it up

Khush-hal kaum ko rakhna hai to, tayyar raho balidano ko
Swarth rahit insan kabhi bhi, samjhe na insano ko

Bhagat Singh ka khoon baha to, nam huwa sardaron ka
Izzat pe marne walo ne, Socha nahin kinaron ka
Rakhkhi thi talwar haath mein, dekha nahin mayano ko
SWARTH RAHIT..............................................

Surajmal ne Angrezon se har kabhi na mani thi
Intt ka Badla pathar se de, Rachdi ek kahani thi
Shan se marne wale log kabhi bhi,jhelen hans kar tanno ko
SWARTH RAHIT......................................................

Jat kaum mein kami nahin hai, Disha isse nahi kabhi mil pai
Padhhe likhe kuchh gaddaron ne, inke ghar mein aag lagai
Samay aa gaya gar samjho to, kar lo poore armano ko
SWARTH RAHIT......................................................

Khoon jat ka desh bhagat he, itihass sunaye rojh kahani
Bhatak gai hai kaum hamari, karo nahin tum ab mann-manni
Devender ye samay soch ka,chhoddo sabhi bahano ko
SWARTH RAHIT...................................................

 

[devdahiya]

Thanx

Niraj bhai thank you.

 

[devdahiya]

dev sir ; .andherey sey roshan karna hai kaum koo
jo gharr jala key roshani kar sakey hamarey saath challey



keep it up .

Jab tak aap jaisse logg maujood hein tab tak sab thheek hi hoga. Thanks bhai.

 

[sunitahooda]

Very True

Dev Sir...Bohot saade shabdon mein kahi gayi ye kavita bohot hi achi lagi....aur mere bhi romte se khade hoge...give us more please!

 

[vijay]

Khush-hal kaum ko rakhna hai to, tayyar raho balidano ko
Swarth rahit insan kabhi bhi, samjhe na insano ko

Bhagat Singh ka khoon baha to, nam huwa sardaron ka
Izzat pe marne walo ne, Socha nahin kinaron ka
Rakhkhi thi talwar haath mein, dekha nahin mayano ko
SWARTH RAHIT..............................................

Surajmal ne Angrezon se har kabhi na mani thi
Intt ka Badla pathar se de, Rachdi ek kahani thi
Shan se marne wale log kabhi bhi,jhelen hans kar tanno ko
SWARTH RAHIT......................................................

Jat kaum mein kami nahin hai, Disha isse nahi kabhi mil pai
Padhhe likhe kuchh gaddaron ne, inke ghar mein aag lagai
Samay aa gaya gar samjho to, kar lo poore armano ko
SWARTH RAHIT......................................................

Khoon jat ka desh bhagat he, itihass sunaye rojh kahani
Bhatak gai hai kaum hamari, karo nahin tum ab mann-manni
Devender ye samay soch ka,chhoddo sabhi bahano ko
SWARTH RAHIT...................................................

Excellent Dev Sir,


Kareeb desh ke aao to koi baat bane
Mashal phir se jalao to koi baat bane
Lahoo ji sookh gaya hai shaheedon ka
Kuchh apna khoon milaao to koi baat bane

 

[devdahiya]

Excellent Dev Sir,


Kareeb desh ke aao to koi baat bane
Mashal phir se jalao to koi baat bane
Lahoo ji sookh gaya hai shaheedon ka
Kuchh apna khoon milaao to koi baat bane

Great prose this Vijay.......Keep it up!

 

[devdahiya]

Jat kaum aaj beech chorahe,sankatt ki ye ghaddi hei aai
Kuchh namakharammon nei mil kar ke,iss kei shaan pe kari chadhhai

Apne ghar ka bhalla kare na,dharamnirpekshta ki de di duhai
Jatland ka naam baddal deo,Aissi badboo khuub uthhai
Char shabd ye padhh ke dekho kyukkar lagge karran anghai
Kuchh.......................................

Dushman kaum ke anddar hi hein,bahar se koi nahin jaroorat
Pal mei tolla pal mei massa,nahin dikhatte apnni surrat
Gaddarron ki kya pribhasha,wo khoon karein bhai ka bhai.


To be contd.............

 

[vijay]

Jat kaum aaj beech chorahe,sankatt ki ye ghaddi hei aai
Kuchh namakharammon nei mil kar ke,iss kei shaan pe kari chadhhai

Apne ghar ka bhalla kare na,dharamnirpekshta ki de di duhai
Jatland ka naam baddal deo,Aissi badboo khuub uthhai
Char shabd ye padhh ke dekho kyukkar lagge karran anghai
Kuchh.......................................

Dushman kaum ke anddar hi hein,bahar se koi nahin jaroorat
Pal mei tolla pal mei massa,nahin dikhatte apnni surrat
Gaddarron ki kya pribhasha,wo khoon karein bhai ka bhai.


To be contd.............

Right said Dev Sir,


They are coming here again and again...



Naam badal badal kar aa rahe hai woh yahan par
Jatland ki aan baan aur shaan khatren main hai
Jaton ki izzat ke liye imtihaan ki ghadi hai yeh
Luta denge apnaa khon jo katre katre main hai

 

[devdahiya]

Ram Arya se logon nei,gulsan mei hein phool khilaye
Navin,Shailender jaisse bhai,Bahranne takk Ghumm aaye
Saath chalo tum inn bandon kerehne doo beiganno ko
Swarth Rahit........................

Registhan ko seenchne wale,hein birle hein bazaron mei
Balidanno sei hi mil saktta,hissa tumhein baharon mei
Chalo-chalein sab mil kar kar lein purre sab armano ko
Swarth...............................

 

[manu14]

Khush-hal kaum ko rakhna hai to, tayyar raho balidano ko
Swarth rahit insan kabhi bhi, samjhe na insano ko

Bhagat Singh ka khoon baha to, nam huwa sardaron ka
Izzat pe marne walo ne, Socha nahin kinaron ka
Rakhkhi thi talwar haath mein, dekha nahin mayano ko
SWARTH RAHIT..............................................

Surajmal ne Angrezon se har kabhi na mani thi
Intt ka Badla pathar se de, Rachdi ek kahani thi
Shan se marne wale log kabhi bhi,jhelen hans kar tanno ko
SWARTH RAHIT......................................................

Jat kaum mein kami nahin hai, Disha isse nahi kabhi mil pai
Padhhe likhe kuchh gaddaron ne, inke ghar mein aag lagai
Samay aa gaya gar samjho to, kar lo poore armano ko
SWARTH RAHIT......................................................

Khoon jat ka desh bhagat he, itihass sunaye rojh kahani
Bhatak gai hai kaum hamari, karo nahin tum ab mann-manni
Devender ye samay soch ka,chhoddo sabhi bahano ko
SWARTH RAHIT...................................................

kakaji simply great
aaapkee poetry philosphy is always appreciable
this composition is marvellous
& keep writing an giving all us jats this great stuff
aaj jaat sahi me disha heen ho rakhe hai , bhatak gaye hai
may be lack of education guidence & finances whichever is the cause
aaj jaato ko aap jaise visionary kee sakht jaroorat hai na ki politicians ki
thanks for sharing ur views

 

[devdahiya]

kakaji simply great
aaapkee poetry philosphy is always appreciable
this composition is marvellous
& keep writing an giving all us jats this great stuff
aaj jaat sahi me disha heen ho rakhe hai , bhatak gaye hai
may be lack of education guidence & finances whichever is the cause
aaj jaato ko aap jaise visionary kee sakht jaroorat hai na ki politicians ki
thanks for sharing ur views

Bhai thank you so much.......Bhai visionary-fisinary ka te mei ke manggun par jaroor jitna iss jinddagi mei achha kar sakungga...jaroor karoonga.....yo tei katti maksadd banna liya jinddagi ka.Thanks again bhai.

 

[deswal]

Aap itna jyada aur is speed se kaise likh pate ho? Mujhe to samajhane mein bhi bahot time lag jata hai. Is liye appreciate bhi kabhi kabhi kar pata hun! Pur padhta jarur hun!

2. Tek ki dusri line tai ibb tak bhi samajh nahi aai! Swarth rahit insan kabhi bhi samjhe na insano ko! Main to sochta tha swarth rahit hi dusron ko samajh sakta hai! Ho sake to clear karo! Meri samajh ka farak lagta hai!

Regards

 

[devdahiya]

Aap itna jyada aur is speed se kaise likh pate ho? Mujhe to samajhane mein bhi bahot time lag jata hai. Is liye appreciate bhi kabhi kabhi kar pata hun! Pur padhta jarur hun!

2. Tek ki dusri line tai ibb tak bhi samajh nahi aai! Swarth rahit insan kabhi bhi samjhe na insano ko! Main to sochta tha swarth rahit hi dusron ko samajh sakta hai! Ho sake to clear karo! Meri samajh ka farak lagta hai!

Regards

You are right.....i am sorry...thanks for pointing it out......instead it should be.....................SWARTHLIPT...thanks a ton...i stand corrected bhai.

 

[vijay]

Ram Arya se logon nei,gulsan mei hein phool khilaye
Navin,Shailender jaisse bhai,Bahranne takk Ghumm aaye
Saath chalo tum inn bandon kerehne doo beiganno ko
Swarth Rahit........................

Registhan ko seenchne wale,hein birle hein bazaron mei
Balidanno sei hi mil saktta,hissa tumhein baharon mei
Chalo-chalein sab mil kar kar lein purre sab armano ko
Swarth...............................

Good one Dev Sir,

To continue..........

Dhanya hai woh kaum jisme aise log jaise paida hue
Dusron ki zindagi sanwarne mein jinke jeevan seida hue
Kya inse koi seekh milegi yahan swaarthi insaano ko
Swarth Rahit.................................................


Is banjar registaan ko humne apne lahoo se senchna hai
Pichhde hue humare apne logon ko apne saath kheenchna hai
Jab sab baraabar honge sakoon milegaa dil ke aarmano ko
Swarth Rahit......................................................