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Arr Bhai Deswal sahab jisey sudhey maanas ki shyamat aagi ibb akk JIT ka ROLE batavein akk JEETU(JItender Hooda) ka par humney tai bera sai na akk iss role nai koun JIVANT kar sake sai....ibb maar khull kai killki....

keshavdahiya said:
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sunita its never enough I can go on and on.......talliyan......er killkkki e killkki
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for the kind info of Jatlanders
I wud like to tell that I did enquire with DND uncleji about it,
I asked'em is that Jitu is me or Jitu Hooda!
he told me that it was u :)
if anyone of u have any doubt better consult with Uncleji himself!

Rock on
Jit
 
sunitahoodaDeswal sahab mere khayal mai to aap Jeetu Hooda ki baat karo so iss natika mai????

sunitahoodaArr Bhai Deswal sahab jisey sudhey maanas ki shyamat aagi ibb akk JIT ka ROLE batavein akk JEETU(JItender Hooda) ka par humney tai bera sai na akk iss role nai koun JIVANT kar sake sai....ibb maar khull kai killki....

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keshavdahiyasunita its never enough I can go on and on.......talliyan......er killkkki e killkki



cooljat said:
for the kind info of Jatlanders
if anyone of u have any doubt better consult with Uncleji himself!

Rock on
Jit
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हा हा हा - डाक्कियो, मारते रहो धूल में लठ ! मैंने तो पहले ही स्पष्ट कर दिया था कि सभी पात्र काल्पनिक हैं और यदि किसी का नाम मिलता-जुलता हो तो लेखक इसका जिम्मेवार नहीं होगा ! तुम सारे तो 1991 में चड्ढी में घूम रहे होंगे !

ठीक है जीत, कभी इस नाटक को अभिनीत कराने का मौका मिला तो रोल आपको ही मिलेगा ।
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ha ha ha uncle ji inke te aap bhi ek baanger bitha dyo.....yeh ghanne shanne paake sein.......mein bhi isse baat pe hasuntha SUNITA ki kitt hawa mein tiiirr chalawen sein.........:D :p
challe padd diye kasaiyan ne....killkki....hahahaha
 
killki....killki....killki....hahahahahahahahahahahahaha....hihihihihihihihihihihihih....hohohohohohohohohohohohohoho....:) Jisko pata hai ki kiska naam hai USNEY to CONFIRM KIYA HI NAHI:eek: ....hahahahahahahahahahahahaha....OVERSELFESTIMATION:cool: ....hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha....Deswal Sahab apki iss thread me gustakhi ke liye maafi....ibb aap aagey kuch matna kahiyo hum samjhgey akk apki gail KAKA JI KE TOTTEY aali bannri sai....TOTTA GUGA....:D
 
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sunitahoodaDeswal sahab mere khayal mai to aap Jeetu Hooda ki baat karo so iss natika mai????

sunitahoodaArr Bhai Deswal sahab jisey sudhey maanas ki shyamat aagi ibb akk JIT ka ROLE batavein akk JEETU(JItender Hooda) ka par humney tai bera sai na akk iss role nai koun JIVANT kar sake sai....ibb maar khull kai killki....

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keshavdahiyasunita its never enough I can go on and on.......talliyan......er killkkki e killkki





हा हा हा - डाक्कियो, मारते रहो धूल में लठ ! मैंने तो पहले ही स्पष्ट कर दिया था कि सभी पात्र काल्पनिक हैं और यदि किसी का नाम मिलता-जुलता हो तो लेखक इसका जिम्मेवार नहीं होगा ! तुम सारे तो 1991 में चड्ढी में घूम रहे होंगे !

ठीक है जीत, कभी इस नाटक को अभिनीत कराने का मौका मिला तो रोल आपको ही मिलेगा ।
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Deswal Ji,

Appte badhiya hindi manne kiye Jat ke moohn te nahin suni, kai baar to sir ke uppar te likad jaa hai. Par iss bahane mhare jaisa ki hindi badhiya ho jaa hai :)

Cheers,
 
wah wah wah..............

wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah................auurr aachhee shabad konii deswal ji mere dhoree.........bus nu keh doo dundaa paadd saudaa likh diyaa....kattii nuu laagee thaa jannu main , rupi arr jitu hooda the reporter uddee ee bethhee hon.........

arr wo rupii kaa CHALLAM bhar ke lana...arr woo keshuu kaa VIDESH main ja kar TAALLEEMM LENEE ka sapnaa......arr woo jituu hoodaa ki badmaashii.......arr woo kanjooss boodhaa jo kaddee apna tamakoo naa laataa......jus a reall THINKER cud do this.........nd u did it extremely well......

thanks bt no thanks 4 ur so much time u give for this jat village...........

regards
vikas rathee
 
Deserve Appreciation!!

Bhai Sahab,

Given the number of responses your thread attracted (despite the fact that a lot of time and attention are required to go through it) it can be safely presumed that you are bound to become a successful folk playwright. I know about the time constraints but keep these things up!!

I particularly liked the setting of the scene of this short play. You may like to add some more stuff to draw attention to other faces of rural Haryanavi day to day life like playing cards, a scene at the 'bus adda' or 'sharab ka theka'. That will make it lengthy enough for audio/video recording but non-suitable enough to be posted at jatland. Any idea of getting audio/video recorded?
 
deswal said:
Bhai Sahab,

Given the number of responses your thread attracted (despite the fact that a lot of time and attention are required to go through it) it can be safely presumed that you are bound to become a successful folk playwright. I know about the time constraints but keep these things up!!

I particularly liked the setting of the scene of this short play. You may like to add some more stuff to draw attention to other faces of rural Haryanavi day to day life like playing cards, a scene at the 'bus adda' or 'sharab ka theka'. That will make it lengthy enough for audio/video recording but non-suitable enough to be posted at jatland. Any idea of getting audio/video recorded?
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On the contrary, Ramphal Bhai, frankly speaking, I am not very happy with the responses or the viewership. Any member clicks the thread, reads it for half-a-minutes or so and then leaves – and the numerical figure in the relevant column shows it having read by --- persons ! In my view, hardly 100 members must have read it fully. The only satisfying fact is that many non-members read the material as 'guests' - I have myself seen 'guests' reading this thread when I am watching the page 'Who's online'. Many members have a poor record in so far as reading Devanagari script is concerned – this is very true of our technocrats and Convent–educated graduates who actually hate written form of Hindi. Compare it with the viewership of threads like Loves me Loves me not in this very forum. Human psychology is similar – be they Jats or non-Jats and everyone clicks any thread which is named attractive. Another glaring example is thread Your Say: To kiss or not to kiss – see the results ! I would rather compliment Deepak Sejwal to have started this thread – at least members are visiting the site to see such masalaa on the site – be it a Jat taste or looking like a Western one.

Regarding second paragraph, I am not interested in writing themes like ‘Sharab ka thekka’. These kind of scenes can be seen in Bollywood films and elsewhere. Jatland site should contain Jat culture. There is no dearth of websites where one can find stuff like ‘love’, Valentine Day’ or so on. And very truly pointed out - audio/ video recording. Today’s generation likes only audio or video, no written form of literature– and I am not at all interested in audio or video. This should better be left to those who have the art of commercialization of a site through ads etc. I would rather be happy to donate such a material to a newspaper in India where some villagers can read it. S.C. Sheorayan had once hinted a idea of getting the material from this site printed and distributing in villages where Internet is not accessible. See his post That is an excellent Idea.

Frankly, I do not see much ‘Jat’ material on the site, except Jat members - and am giving a second thought of saying good-bye to this site after completing my task of updating the Haryanavi Dictionary !


प्रसिद्ध आर्यसमाजी प्रचारक दादा बस्तीराम और हरयाणा के कवि लखमीचन्द समकालीन थे । एक बार दोनों में वार्तालाप हुआ । बस्तीराम ने लखमीचन्द से कहा " भाई लखमी, तू कवि तो बहुत अच्छा है, पर तेरा औरतों का भेष भरकर सांग करना मुझे कतई ठीक नहीं लगता । इस पर लखमीचन्द बोला : दादा, मेरे सांग को देखने हजारों लोग आते हैं, तेरा प्रचार सुनने तो 50-60 आदमियों से ज्यादा नहीं आते ।

दादा बस्तीराम ने उत्तर दिया - भाई, थोड़ा चुग्गा डाल दो तो दो-चार चिड़िया और कबूतर ही आते हैं और कुछ मांस के टुकड़े फेंक दो तो हजारों चील-कव्वे इक्ट्ठे हो जाते हैं !

यकीन नहीं आता तो मेरी थ्रैड पढ लो - दादा बस्तीराम की जुबान से
 
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Bahut badhiya likh diya aapne Deswal sir, aap badhai ke paatr ho.

Abhimanyu Phougat
 
dndeswal said:
On the contrary, Ramphal Bhai, frankly speaking, I am not very happy with the responses or the viewership. Any member clicks the thread, reads it for half-a-minutes or so and then leaves – and the numerical figure in the relevant column shows it having read by --- persons ! In my view, hardly 100 members must have read it fully. The only satisfying fact is that many non-members read the material as 'guests' - I have myself seen 'guests' reading this thread when I am watching the page 'Who's online'. Many members have a poor record in so far as reading Devanagari script is concerned – this is very true of our technocrats and Convent–educated graduates who actually hate written form of Hindi. Compare it with the viewership of threads like Loves me Loves me not in this very forum. Human psychology is similar – be they Jats or non-Jats and everyone clicks any thread which is named attractive. Another glaring example is thread Your Say: To kiss or not to kiss – see the results ! I would rather compliment Deepak Sejwal to have started this thread – at least members are visiting the site to see such masalaa on the site – be it a Jat taste or looking like a Western one.

Regarding second paragraph, I am not interested in writing themes like ‘Sharab ka thekka’. These kind of scenes can be seen in Bollywood films and elsewhere. Jatland site should contain Jat culture. There is no dearth of websites where one can find stuff like ‘love’, Valentine Day’ or so on. And very truly pointed out - audio/ video recording. Today’s generation likes only audio or video, no written form of literature– and I am not at all interested in audio or video. This should better be left to those who have the art of commercialization of a site through ads etc. I would rather be happy to donate such a material to a newspaper in India where some villagers can read it. S.C. Sheorayan had once hinted a idea of getting the material from this site printed and distributing in villages where Internet is not accessible. See his post That is an excellent Idea.

Frankly, I do not see much ‘Jat’ material on the site, except Jat members - and am giving a second thought of saying good-bye to this site after completing my task of updating the Haryanavi Dictionary !


प्रसिद्ध आर्यसमाजी प्रचारक दादा बस्तीराम और हरयाणा के कवि लखमीचन्द समकालीन थे । एक बार दोनों में वार्तालाप हुआ । बस्तीराम ने लखमीचन्द से कहा " भाई लखमी, तू कवि तो बहुत अच्छा है, पर तेरा औरतों का भेष भरकर सांग करना मुझे कतई ठीक नहीं लगता । इस पर लखमीचन्द बोला : दादा, मेरे सांग को देखने हजारों लोग आते हैं, तेरा प्रचार सुनने तो 50-60 आदमियों से ज्यादा नहीं आते ।

दादा बस्तीराम ने उत्तर दिया - भाई, थोड़ा चुग्गा डाल दो तो दो-चार चिड़िया और कबूतर ही आते हैं और कुछ मांस के टुकड़े फेंक दो तो हजारों चील-कव्वे इक्ट्ठे हो जाते हैं !

यकीन नहीं आता तो मेरी थ्रैड पढ लो - दादा बस्तीराम की जुबान से
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Kyun chho mei aa ge Deswal ji....sab chalta rehga nyu hein...lagge raho.
 
Deswal Ji....aap to ghaney sentimental hogey kimme. Its a reader's choice what to pick and read and we cant impose our threads on readers. Jyada kahaney ki jarut na jibb balkan nai haryanvi Bolni na aati tai Padhni kyukar aavegi....sab kimme Modern honn mai laag rya sai. Jyadatar members nai membership to leli par janu shyan sa tek diya iss site pai baat karein sain....To kiss or Not to Kiss at public places ki....Iss mai aap ki ke galti....iss me kum comments aaney ki wajah se jo log aap ke koshish ko sarhatey hain wo kyun mehroom rahein? Ye to aap theek nyaye na karogey mere jissey pai jisney 2 baar padh liya yo Kissa-e-Mahem Chaubissi....Jo log apni Jat Sanskriti ke firm ground se judey huay hain wo jarur padheingey aisi post ko aur jo Adhar mai uthrey sain wey na to dharti ke na akash ke....:)
 
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I agree with Sunita's post - I have already commented that most of the members have actually lost grip on our mother-tongue, what to speak of writing ! And accessibility of Internet in our areas is not so widespread. It is the question of readership which matters, not number of comments received. My point is that this site should contain exclusive material relating to Jat culture, not just Jat membership. If it is in my control, I would like to delete all material relating to Valentine Day etc. One good factor is that this site is open to all, so far as reading is concerned. Many 'guests' read the material without logging in.

A similar piece named "Dharti ke Laal" would appear after some time.
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Next play

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Please see my post above wherein I had stated that I would post my next play shortly. I have today received two e-mails about my new play. Some of us do not go through the entire page and send mails. This is just to inform that my play Dharti ke Lal has been posted two days back and is available in this very forum ('General Talk').
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bahut hi badhiya.........

BHAI SAHAB bahut hi badhiya.. baat.. likhi hain aapne........... swad sa aagya... issa lagya ak ek puri novel padh li........ ar wa bhi jaatu me .....bahut badhiya baatein... lagi.........keep its up.......... as sunita said not many members know harnavi language..........but those who know must like it.............
mujhe bahut aachi laggi...........
keep it up...........
with regards.
Ram
 
Bhai Dayanand, aapke haath main fazal sai. Bahut chupke se sandesh sarka dete ho hamare man mein, jyukar darwaje talle chithee. Jaisa ke maine pehle bhi likha hai, aap jaise prabudh haryanvi hi matrbhumi ki laaj bachaoge...baaki andi-shandi to bechan mein lag rahe sain ya mauj masti mein behosh hain.

Prabhu aapki kalam aur kalaam ko shakti pradan kare!
 
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Dear Deswal Sahab,
Thank a lot for coming to AJA's NJ Chapter's Diwali celebration function yesterday. We really appreciate you taking time out of your busy schedule and making to the function. We also thank Chanderbhan Arya sahab for the same.
It is a pleasure reading these short plays. They reflect true picture of our villages and reminds me of my time in the village, when as a student, I was the favorite of all older people for lighting their HUKKA. I remember I used to change the water as also to shine the Brass pot that is used. This was a little extra than what other kids used to do and probably that made me their favorite.
It was a lot of knowledge about the life that they discussed. Some times their talks looked a bit, indifferent, but they did discuss almost every thing on earth.
Probably this website has now become a Chaupal of the past, after all it is the technological advancement and we do have a chaupal on the net.
Once again thanks a lot for posting such nice playes. We look forward for some more.
 
Deshwal Ji,

Bahoot badhiya jankari dee hai aapne isme. Ye saare instances, words etc. bilkul real laage sain.

I found these thread so much interested that I have got this thread reopened. Please add some more stuff.

Thanks,
Satpal
 
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