Kuchh Thodda Romantic Ho Jaye

[devdahiya]

Sunddu ke ek chhori ghanni mann mei bha gi .Wa chhori kadde-2 kalla chashma la liya karti. Ek din mahra Sunddu thodda romantic hoke ganna gaan lagya: All in a lighter vain.



Tere kalla chasma gadde sei, Tu kis college mei paddhhe sei
Meri neend uchat gi sari re, mere ghanna nassa sa chadhhe se


Cycle teri ATLAS sei, ya ghani kasutti bhajje se
Ghantti teri tarran-2 ya dil mere ne kadhhe se
Kala julmi suit tera yo, ghanna kasutta gadde se
Meri.............................................


Mei beshak guthha chhap dhikhe, manne sab battan ka bera se
Chhotti tere dhhungge pe, jannu sanpa ka yo dera se
Marr gira mei tere kajal ne, Yo nunni ghi sa kadhhe se
Meri...........................


Chappal teri bata ki,yo nakk mei koka khille se
Chapar-2 karti challe, dhikhe mera kalja hille se
Mei kaam chhodd kei aa jyan suun, bina mile ke sadhhe se.
Meri.....................................

 

[ashishsangwan]

Sunddu ke ek chhori ghanni mann mei bha gi .Wa chhori kadde-2 kalla chashma la liya karti. Ek din mahra Sunddu thodda romantic hoke ganna gaan lagya: All in a lighter vain.



Tere kalla chasma gadde sei, Tu kis college mei paddhhe sei
Meri neend uchat gi sari re, mere ghanna nassa sa chadhhe se


Cycle teri ATLAS sei, ya ghani kasutti bhajje se
Ghantti teri tarran-2 ya dil mere ne kadhhe se
Kala julmi sutt kasutta, ghanna kasutta gadde se
Meri.............................................


Mei beshak guthha chhap dhikhe, manne sab battan ka bera se
Chhotti tere dhhungge pe, jannu sanpa ka ypo dera se
Marr gira mei tere kajal ne, Yo nunni ghi sa kadhhe se
Meri...........................


Chappal teri bata ki,yo nakk mei koka khille se
Chapar-2 karti challe, dhikhe mera kalja hille se
Mei kaam chhodd kei aa jyan suun, bina mile ke sadhhe se.
Meri.....................................

Sir aap Anil Bhai ki baat maan hi lo,aur ek kitab likh hi daalo

 

[devdahiya]

Sir aap Anil Bhai ki baat maan hi lo,aur ek kitab likh hi daalo

I am just putting my thoughts together to see how people like it. I will think of putting these thoughts together some times in future for sure for my future generation's readings atleast. Thanx for the appreciation ashish.

 

[neerajgodara]

hello sir,
i talk about this to my friend and they praised its vey much
sir a anuual progrem in my college plz a compose poem for this and
mail me my e-mail id neerajgodara@yahoo.com
plz sir .
from godara

 

[mukendrasingh]

way of writing is also a "Great ART"

Sir, your way of writing haryanvi language is excellent n i like it. please, carry on. We want more...

 

[nd-chora]

devji lakhmi ka avtaar le liya

very good ristedaar, i m adding one more stanza.
dedicated to dev sir

jee karre mei byah ker lun per mera babu natte sei
teri meethi-meethi baatan mein mera jee mor jun nachhe sei
Devji KIDDOLI( dev ji ka gaam) mein payaan dharti kaate sei
likh te dun bahut kutch per mera babu issne paddhe sei
Meri neend uchat gi sari re, mere ghanna nassa sa chadhhe se


dev sir u r really new era lakhmichand......keep it on

with regards
dangi

 

[nd-chora]

ar ristedaar photu lagya raann diya karo. tyara na karo
badhiya laago so

 

[anilsangwan]

Ha ha ha

Bahoot Badhiya Dev Ji,

Laage Raho aap..Aar Kitaab jaroor likhna..Poori Jatland aapke saath hai tan mann dhan te...Ghana nahi te 2-4 chutkalan ka Yogdaan mein bhi dyunga..

Aar Davender Sir ki baat bhi maan lyo eb...Photu na hataya karo....menne laage sei...Aunty Ji ke ghar te bahar jaate hi aap fotu ne taar lyo so.....aar pher jab woh Dhamki deti hain to fir aap fotu laga dyo so....Ha ha ha Kidding..

Cheers!

ar ristedaar photu lagya raann diya karo. tyara na karo
badhiya laago so

 

[sanjaysiwach]

Excellent Sir,

it is encouraging to us for creativity ..

 

[devdahiya]

very good ristedaar, i m adding one more stanza.
dedicated to dev sir

Devji KIDDOLI( dev ji ka gaam) mein payaan dharti kaate sei





with regards
dangi

Ha..ha...ha...........LOL, bhai ristedar mei te kitte na dharti kaat rhya....wei te dinn-e gaye.