Kya mere Nagmey.. Kya meri hasti # 1

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Pyar ki Guftgu main kuch .. diwane lage they,
Kuch Mazak main, kuch harain nazar aane lage they!
Kuch Duur..Kuch Paas.. aane lage they,
Kuch u laga ki hamari ..dehri ..per vo aane lage they!!
Kuch raat main.. kuch din main sapne lene lagey they,
Bedhadak kehne walon ko aaz kehne main Zamane lagey they !!!
 
Uday bhai,
Beautiful Imagination. You are like an open book:

"TERE PYAR KI BAN GAI HOON KAHANI"
"KAHI JAA RAHI HOON, SUNI JAA RAHI HOON"



Uday Dahiya (Jun 11, 2003 07:03 a.m.):
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Pyar ki Guftgu main kuch .. diwane lage they,
Kuch Mazak main, kuch harain nazar aane lage they!
Kuch Duur..Kuch Paas.. aane lage they,
Kuch u laga ki hamari ..dehri ..per vo aane lage they!!
Kuch raat main.. kuch din main sapne lene lagey they,
Bedhadak kehne walon ko aaz kehne main Zamane lagey they !!!
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YagyaVir Singh Gaawar (Jun 11,
"TERE PYAR KI BAN GAI HOON KAHANI"
"KAHI JAA RAHI HOON, SUNI JAA RAHI HOON"
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Wah wah wah...bahut badhiya

Gaawar bhai aap bhi shayar ban gaye. :)
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Dear Yagyavir,
--> Thanx for appreciation...
An affective imagination establishes genuine creativity. Imagination can be picked from any where… can be picked from any source... individual… surroundings..any noun…..

An epitome of motivation can be anything.
-->
rahi baat open book ki..bhai Likha to almost her topic per hai, except politics..Terrorism per bhi likha... per terrorist nahi hoon !!
For writing What we need is … ek defined goal... ek hasti khelti omaang….Imagination ( then creativity) apne aap aa jati hai.

YagyaVir Singh Gaawar (Jun 11, 2003 10:43 a.m.):
Uday bhai,
Beautiful Imagination. You are like an open book:

"TERE PYAR KI BAN GAI HOON KAHANI"
"KAHI JAA RAHI HOON, SUNI JAA RAHI HOON"



Uday Dahiya (Jun 11, 2003 07:03 a.m.):
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Pyar ki Guftgu main kuch .. diwane lage they,
Kuch Mazak main, kuch harain nazar aane lage they!
Kuch Duur..Kuch Paas.. aane lage they,
Kuch u laga ki hamari ..dehri ..per vo aane lage they!!
Kuch raat main.. kuch din main sapne lene lagey they,
Bedhadak kehne walon ko aaz kehne main Zamane lagey they !!!
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Dabas bhai,
Ye tou chori ka saaman hai. Hamme Uday bhai jaisa talent kaha.


Ashok Kumar Dabas (Jun 11, 2003 04:03 p.m.):
YagyaVir Singh Gaawar (Jun 11,
"TERE PYAR KI BAN GAI HOON KAHANI"
"KAHI JAA RAHI HOON, SUNI JAA RAHI HOON"
____________________________________________________________
Wah wah wah...bahut badhiya

Gaawar bhai aap bhi shayar ban gaye. :)
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Uday- well done
Kya maeri hasti- Kya maeri masti
BUray din Abb talany lagay thae
Kuch din mae - kuch raat mae
Abhi bahut Dollar kamany lagay thae
Green card milany ky bhi Rojana
Sapany rat deen aanay lagay thae !!
 
wah....Jats at their best...poet jats...wonderful. High time we open an open plateform where any one can post his/ her poetry. I am sure lots of hidden talent exists among members...here is one;

Jatland par unse milne ki tamanna lekar aata hoon roj.
nahi milte to khwabon me milne ki tamanna lekat jaata hoon roj.
Yahee silsila chal raha hai hafton se,
kab tak katraoge, yah kahkar jata hoon roj.

Rajendra
 
LOL ...rajendra ji ............NiCe



Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jun 12, 2003 11:28 a.m.):
wah....Jats at their best...poet jats...wonderful. High time we open an open plateform where any one can post his/ her poetry. I am sure lots of hidden talent exists among members...here is one;

Jatland par unse milne ki tamanna lekar aata hoon roj.
nahi milte to khwabon me milne ki tamanna lekat jaata hoon roj.
Yahee silsila chal raha hai hafton se,
kab tak katraoge, yah kahkar jata hoon roj.

Rajendra
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Dear Rajender,
Hame to ek chhand likney mai time lagta hai.. but yahan to Dudeeji or aap jaise instant maker bhi hai... :-)

Well written.. I support your idea if one more link can be open for poems/ shayari etc @ this site..


Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jun 12, 2003 11:28 a.m.):
wah....Jats at their best...poet jats...wonderful. High time we open an open plateform where any one can post his/ her poetry. I am sure lots of hidden talent exists among members...here is one;

Jatland par unse milne ki tamanna lekar aata hoon roj.
nahi milte to khwabon me milne ki tamanna lekat jaata hoon roj.
Yahee silsila chal raha hai hafton se,
kab tak katraoge, yah kahkar jata hoon roj.

Rajendra
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Thank you friends....

Shairon ko kia lena, heeron aur sona chaandi se
hosla afjaayee ke do labz hi kaafi hain, unke liye

Rajendra
 
Bagwan Kare Rajendra Ji Ke Tadap Rang Laye
Khawabo ma jo Aate hai, Usey Hakeekat ma bhey Paaye
Bhagwan Jaldi kar, Kahey Dukh ma Rajendra Ji Jatland na Chod Jaye.
Hahahaaaa Lagey Raho

Rinu Singh (Jun 12, 2003 04:54 p.m.):
LOL ...rajendra ji ............NiCe



Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jun 12, 2003 11:28 a.m.):
wah....Jats at their best...poet jats...wonderful. High time we open an open plateform where any one can post his/ her poetry. I am sure lots of hidden talent exists among members...here is one;

Jatland par unse milne ki tamanna lekar aata hoon roj.
nahi milte to khwabon me milne ki tamanna lekat jaata hoon roj.
Yahee silsila chal raha hai hafton se,
kab tak katraoge, yah kahkar jata hoon roj.

Rajendra
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Rajender ji very nice
Aapky liye sewa mae pesh hae
Yah duniya to Rajender bhai- aani-jani hae
Kahi Dharmpal- AAG GHAS FUSH KAHI PANI HAE !!!!!
Isqik- payar mae apani hasti- dhhund ny baley bhaio.
Yah bah manjil hae- jis per chalany bala ladakhada jata hae !!!!!
 
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Jun 13, 2003 01:20 p.m.):
Rajender ji very nice
Aapky liye sewa mae pesh hae
Yah duniya to Rajender bhai- aani-jani hae
Kahi Dharmpal- AAG GHAS FUSH KAHI PANI HAE !!!!!
Isqik- payar mae apani hasti- dhhund ny baley bhaio.
Yah bah manjil hae- jis per chalany bala ladakhada jata hae !!!!!
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Bahut Khoob Dudee sahib...beautiful...... I look at life in following lines Dudee sahib;

Zindgi ko jiya hai humne, sharab samajh kar
ek piala aur pila de saaki, hume es sharab ka

Rajendra
 
Yah duniya to Rajender bhai- aani-jani hae
Kahi Dharmpal- AAG GHAS FUSH KAHI PANI HAE !!!!!

Bahut badhiya Dudee ji.
 
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