Kya mere Nagmey.. Kya meri hasti # 2

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Gud ki bheli ke tarah ekdam Garam or Tazaa likha hai ( self written).....



Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;
Dekhkar muskurana shayad yun hi tera ek andaaz hai!
Teri 'Enhi' addaoon ka hr koi yu hi nahi Mureed-a-nawaaz hai;
Per khuda jaane,yeh Husn-a-noor kiski humraaz hai !!
 
Oh My GoD..........u WrOTe It???

DIS IZ AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG.......REALLY BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL


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Uday Dahiya (Jun 16, 2003 05:11 a.m.):
Gud ki bheli ke tarah ekdam Garam or Tazaa likha hai ( self written).....



Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;
Dekhkar muskurana shayad yun hi tera ek andaaz hai!
Teri 'Enhi' addaoon ka hr koi yu hi nahi Mureed-a-nawaaz hai;
Per khuda jaane,yeh Husn-a-noor kiski humraaz hai !!
 
Ashok Kumar Dabas (Jun 16, 2003 08:48 a.m.):
Bhai Dahiya Sahab,

Aapne bhee kati lath sa gad diya :)

Thanx Dabas Sahib
Thanx Rinu ji..

Stay Tuned :-)
 
Rajenderji,

Thanx !!

Aaj to time laga nahi...kal Zaroor aayengey Musaairaa me... Logon ko protsahit karo jab kuch likhan hai to kuch original hi likhe

Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jun 17, 2003 01:53 a.m.):
Bahut sundar Dahiya ji. Dahiya ji Musaairaa me aao naa..khoob jamegee....

Rajendra
 
Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;


Bahut acche Uday bhai.
 
Thanx Yagyavirji..
YagyaVir Singh Gaawar (Jun 17, 2003 09:42 a.m.):
Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;


Bahut acche Uday bhai.
 
Uday Dahiya (Jun 16, 2003 05:11 a.m.):
Gud ki bheli ke tarah ekdam Garam or Tazaa likha hai ( self written).....


Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;
Dekhkar muskurana shayad yun hi tera ek andaaz hai!
Teri 'Enhi' addaoon ka hr koi yu hi nahi Mureed-a-nawaaz hai;
Per khuda jaane,yeh Husn-a-noor kiski humraaz hai !!

this is too good ....
 
Wah.....
Kya baat hai, lagta hai zuban per dil ki baat hai
jaane kab tak aap apna yeh hunar chhupate, yeh to jatland ki inyaat hai varna aisa shayraina andaz kahan paate...

Very well done , ap to chupe Rustam nikle...
Keep it up.
 
bus ji ye to aap jason ka Aashirwad or saath hai.... :-) :-)
Naveena Dalal (Jun 20, 2003 04:10 p.m.):
Wah.....
Kya baat hai, lagta hai zuban per dil ki baat hai
jaane kab tak aap apna yeh hunar chhupate, yeh to jatland ki inyaat hai varna aisa shayraina andaz kahan paate...

Very well done , ap to chupe Rustam nikle...
Keep it up.
 
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