love and hope

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hello everybody
i am posting few lines and would like to know what u feel



i saw that light ,that made darkness loose sight
i saw that tear that made it all clear
i saw that rainbow that made hope through
what am i
and where am i looking at
my eyes are closed the best they are at
strangely enough
i can still see
what i couldn't with the open eyes
coz it was love that made me see
 
Really a good one Manisha..

Dear All,

This lines r really good n full of inspiration. This is very good creation by Manisha. Keep it up Manisha. Here is some lines 4 u :

Just because something is
Difficult
doesn't mean you shouldn't
Try
It means you should just try
Harder.
 
manisha786 said:
hello everybody
i am posting few lines and would like to know what u feel



i saw that light ,that made darkness loose sight
i saw that tear that made it all clear
i saw that rainbow that made hope through
what am i
and where am i looking at
my eyes are closed the best they are at
strangely enough
i can still see
what i couldn't with the open eyes
coz it was love that made me see
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Nice composition, Manisha



I closed my eyes
Saw a dream, beautiful one
Love blossommed, happiness prevailed
Light, rainblow, flowers....
So good and heppening life.
Suddenly awaken
No love, no happiness
Darkness as ever
Colors of rainbow were blurr
Flowers without smell
No love, no feelings
Total deception
Hard realities
One should not close eyes
To feel the love
As love is blind
But lovers can see
How true is the love
Love makes us feel great
But dreams are deception
Reality is the life
Maybe hard, but true forever
 
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I can't be with you right now
responsibilities bind me today;
Yet there is a hope in my heart
that always floats your way.

There's only you and me
on my island of hope;
It is the dream I will one day be with you
that keeps my hope afloat.

I hope someday in the future
on an ocean of blue;
I will open my eyes and see you there
My hope floated straight to you.

Hope floats...My Love
one day you will truly be mine;
Hope floats...My Love
I will cling to that hope until the end of time.

by Judy Burnette
 
kya baat he........straight from heart.good one keshav.keep hope and definately your dream......will come true:)



keshavdahiya said:
I can't be with you right now
responsibilities bind me today;
Yet there is a hope in my heart
that always floats your way.

There's only you and me
on my island of hope;
It is the dream I will one day be with you
that keeps my hope afloat.

I hope someday in the future
on an ocean of blue;
I will open my eyes and see you there
My hope floated straight to you.

Hope floats...My Love
one day you will truly be mine;
Hope floats...My Love
I will cling to that hope until the end of time.

by Judy Burnette
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very nice

very very nice.:)

manisha786 said:
hello everybody
i am posting few lines and would like to know what u feel



i saw that light ,that made darkness loose sight
i saw that tear that made it all clear
i saw that rainbow that made hope through
what am i
and where am i looking at
my eyes are closed the best they are at
strangely enough
i can still see
what i couldn't with the open eyes
coz it was love that made me see
Click to expand...
 
Nice composition !

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By looking at this short poem, I remember the scene of dawn, described by Kalidasa - the short translation has been attempted by myself. I am repeating it here, though it has been written in this forum earlier also.


Scene: A full-moon night is almost over and the dawn upsurges. A Rishi rises up in the morning and goes for prayer. Then, he sees a strange phenomenon of nature – at the dawn, the moon is setting and the red sun is slowly rising – a beautiful scene indeed. Then, these lines suddenly come out of his lips:

यात्येकतो अस्तशिखरम् पतिरोषधीना-
माविष्कृतो अरुणपुरःसर एकतो अर्कः ।
तेजो द्वयस्य युगपद् व्यसनोदयाभ्याम्
लोको नियम्यत इवात्मदशान्तरेषु ॥

शब्दों के अर्थ :

यात्येकतो = याति + एकतो : (याति = जा रहा है, एकतो = एक तरफ)
अस्तशिखरम् = अस्त होने के शिखर की ओर
आविष्कृतो = आविष्कार, अर्थात् उदय
पतिरोषधीनाम् = औषधियों का पति (स्वामी) अर्थात् चन्द्रमा
अर्कः = सूर्य
अरुणपुरःसर = अरुण को आगे कर के (अरुण = सूर्य का सारथि)
द्वयस्य = दोनों का
युगपद् = एक साथ
व्यसनोदयाभ्याम् = व्यसन (समाप्ति) और उदय के द्वारा
लोको = संसार
नियम्यत = नियमित किया जा रहा है
इव = जैसे कि
आत्मदशान्तरेषु = अपनी-अपनी दशाओं का अन्तर

Meaning: At the one end of sky, the moon is setting – and on the other, the sun is slowly appearing on the horizon, along with his chariot-driver ‘Arun’. With the simultaneous rise and fall of two great powers (sun and the moon) it reminds us of hard realities of this world – the downfall of one and the rise of another.

[A thought - Will today’s so-called superpower will end soon and India will re-emerge as a super-power?]
 
इतिहास लिखेंगे..iiii

सच्चे शब्दों में सच के अहसास लिखेंगे ..ii
वक्त पढे जिसको कुछ इतना खास लिखेंगे ..ii
गीत गजल हम पर लिखेंगे लिखने वाले ,,,,
हमने कलम उठाइ तो इतिहास लिखेंगे..iiii


दिल में ह्जारों अर्मा लिये कुछ कर गुजरने के लिये..ii
चल पडi मैं इक जवां दुनिया बदलने के लिये ..ii
यूं तो अकेला भी फ़तह का ताज ला सकता हूं मैं ,,ii
कदम कुछ तेज होंगे जो आप भी हों साथ, चलने के लिये ..
 
rakeshsehrawat said:
सच्चे शब्दों में सच के अहसास लिखेंगे ..ii
वक्त पढे जिसको कुछ इतना खास लिखेंगे ..ii
गीत गजल हम पर लिखेंगे लिखने वाले ,,,,
हमने कलम उठाइ तो इतिहास लिखेंगे..iiii


दिल में ह्जारों अर्मा लिये कुछ कर गुजरने के लिये..ii
चल पडi मैं इक जवां दुनिया बदलने के लिये ..ii
यूं तो अकेला भी फ़तह का ताज ला सकता हूं मैं ,,ii
कदम कुछ तेज होंगे जो आप भी हों साथ, चलने के लिये ..
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Good and inspiring lines Rakesh
 
manisha786 said:
hello everybody
i am posting few lines and would like to know what u feel



i saw that light ,that made darkness loose sight
i saw that tear that made it all clear
i saw that rainbow that made hope through
what am i
and where am i looking at
my eyes are closed the best they are at
strangely enough
i can still see
what i couldn't with the open eyes
coz it was love that made me see
Click to expand...


gud one.....U can be a gud poet if u try.....only if this is your own composition.

cheers
 
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