Maa ka laddla chhorra

[vinodks]

बहुत बढीया देव जी....... और जमा अप-टु-डेट सै....

Saanjh ke tu Disco mei jawei sei...Par teddkehein tei mheishyan nei nhwawei sei

Beshakk tu Chinese khawei sei....parr ussnei CHURRAN kha ke pachawei sei

Beshakk tu Agrezzi mei battllawei sei... parr Raggniyan tein mann behlawei sei

Beshakk tu Jullie geilyan dhakke khawei se...par sappna tei tanne Nirmla ka-e aawei sei

Beshakk tu hottllan mein pee ke aawei sei...parr aawntehein bella seet ka bharwawei se

Beshakk tu modren gym mei jawei sei... parr dharrann tei terri terra babbu-e thhawei sei

Beshak tu HAYABUSA challawei sei....parr tanne majja tei jhotta-baggi pe-e aawei se

Beshakk tu Amrika jawei se...parr terra kaljja merra marya paat-2 jawei sei

 

[sandeepsomu]

Beshakk tu ghanne lott kammawei sei.....parr jibb bi aawei se...bathuwe ka rayta bannwawei se


Dev sir kathi todd ki baat keh di yo to

 

[devdahiya]

Dahiya saaab likhya se bhai. aap ne dekh ke mahaara bhi kavita likhan ne g kare se.
2 - 3 din me tyaar karke post kar dunga bhaiyo.

Virender bhai aapki kavita ka intezzar hei.....jaldi post karro.

 

[mpsdelhi]

Deva, aur bhi socch...

Deva, tanne idea suthra pa gya sai. Ib iss kavita nai aur aage badha. Aur ghanne aspects sai desi-turned-moddan ke. Sabke kaaley chasme taran ki darkaar sai...

Saanjh ke tu Disco mei jawei sei...Par teddkehein tei mheishyan nei nhwawei sei

Beshakk tu Chinese khawei sei....parr ussnei CHURRAN kha ke pachawei sei

Beshakk tu Agrezzi mei battllawei sei... parr Raggniyan tein mann behlawei sei

Beshakk tu Jullie geilyan dhakke khawei se...par sappna tei tanne Nirmla ka-e aawei sei

Beshakk tu hottllan mein pee ke aawei sei...parr aawntehein bella seet ka bharwawei se

Beshakk tu modren gym mei jawei sei... parr dharrann tei terri terra babbu-e thhawei sei

Beshak tu HAYABUSA challawei sei....parr tanne majja tei jhotta-baggi pe-e aawei se

Beshakk tu Amrika jawei se...parr terra kaljja merra marya paat-2 jawei sei

 

[mothsara1st]

Ek line aapni bhi:-
Beshak tu foreign main Mr.Dev sai... par gaam main to tu Debu a kuhaawe sa
Bahut badhiya dahiya sahab .....ya kaveeta to ekdum gajab kee hai yaar .....jai maine bhi kaveeta likhnee aandee to main bhi aapkee tareef ek kaveeta tai a karta .................

 

[sandeepsolanki]

HILLAROUS.......BHAI SAB KUM HILA DIYA TANNE TE, BOHT HI AACHA LIKHA SE

 

[anooplather]

kamal ka joke