My New Book 'The one way street'

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I am glad we think alike, the book does have a large no black and white and some colour pictures also, may be a bit too many, some of them you can see them under B in photo gallery. hanks for the interest shown Brig lakshman:) PS
about the line drawings a lady relation of mine, good in drawing has kindly consented to make a few sketches, especially from my early memories of the life in villages, the villages were different then.
 
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Yes I did manage to be in Delhi, She was rolled in to the holding area and injected with the preanesthai drug, as there was a hold up, in the queue the nurse made her get up and walk towards a chair, which resulted in serious complications and the operation was canceled. Later when I called on the surgeon she exclaimed in a nonchalant manner "Col you nearly lost you wife" BLS
 
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I thought I should also post some item from the book which is in the lighter wane Bls

It was summer time; I was in deep sleep under the mosquito- net with the ceiling fan going full-blast, oblivious of the world. Jeet, possibly after a glass of water was slipping back in to sleep when, being a light sleeper, she was disturbed by a pinpoint green tinted beam of light being directed in our bed room by a man, clearly visible to her in the moonlight, through the glass panes, trying to survey the inside.
In shock, she nudged me, 'Some one is out side' she whispered.
Still groggy with sleep, I took to time collect my senses and get the orientation back. A few more seconds were lost in collecting my sleepers, I needed them to negotiate the gravel outside, by the time I could be effective, the intruder, alerted by the commotion inside the room had scooted the short gravel drive, jumped over the closed gate and vanished from view.
I did come out of the room, opening the rickety door, clad in slippers, having found them at last; I opened the even more rickety gate of the compound and stood alone looking left and right, on the now deserted road, with no sign of the thief.
The search for the slippers, rather than run for the thief, allowing enough time for the intruder to escape, was narrated by my wife with relish, to my obvious discomfort, at the numerous social occasions and became a standard joke.
In response to my call to the police station the man on duty informed me that out of the two of them on duty one had gone on patrol and he was manning the telephone. That was all he help available to me that night. Jokes apart, I often wondered as to what would have been the consequences had I managed to grapple with the intruder.
The next day the local police-chief called at our place to investigate the case. While taking a sip from the glass of water, he asked my wife,

'Madam you saw the man looking in'

'Yes, I saw him clearly' she replied.

'Can you please describe him, how did he look like?' the interrogation continued.

And then she dropped the bombshell.

'Yes, he looked just like you', leaving both of us shell-shocked

That was the end of the interrogation as also the investigation. He now, short of words, took his leave and quickly left.

I did have my revenge a few days later for all the jokes and laughter at my cost.

Once again we woke up to the desperate shouts of "Chor, Chor". Already bitten, this time I was fully alert and prepared. I was out of the bed and on the road in a jiffy, looking left and right, trying to fix the direction from which the shouts had come, only to see a man approaching from the direction of the Mhow town.

“Chor kanha Hai’, Where is the thief?' I asked him.

Continuing to quickly walk past, with speaking he pointed towards Pawar's bungalow, next to Gurdeep's hutment, up the road and had vanished from sight by the time I turned back again towards him.

Walking up the road, there was Pawar, sitting on the steps of his house, head held in his hands, in shock and totally incoherent. It was then that it dawned on me that the man on road was one of the thieves himself, who, on the alarm being raised, had split from others and hid behind the clumps of roadside bushes. Seeing me on the road and fearing possible detection, thought it better to bluff his way out and escape in the guise a local going home. In the confusion at the moment, I easily fell for his ploy, little realising as to where he could have been going, that late in the night, on a deserted road which lead to no where.

There was a silver lining, from the incident, though still far from being a hero in the eyes of my wife, at least the jokes directed at me suddenly stopped. If this could happen to Pawar, with a much heavier build than mine, it could happen to any one and that no one was
 
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It is heartening to see so many views, even posts, however a few more posts, if quickly made would help in improving the draft Thanks BLs
 
My New BOOK

The synopsis of my book pasted under would give an idea of the theme ans scope of thebook

The One Way Street
The reader enters the one way street, along with the author, some times in 1935-36, witnessing the life in Western UP villages as perceived by a child of five and six, then to Delhi of yore and the small towns across the province. He feels, along with him, the cultural shock of the move to Lucknow, from living in small towns till then, also the pleasure and pain of the freewheeling life in the university, is introduced to the new concept of 'Love at Far Site', soon follows the author to the dread Drill Square and the Obstacle Course at IMA, who passes-out as a proud but shaky 2nd lieutenant to face the pains and pangs of growing and moving upwards in the Army of those days. The reader is soon introduced to the author, now a changed into a 'Babbler' on meeting his 'Love at First Sight', feels his pangs of separation and a bit too soon the uncertainties to life and limb, on entering the 'Valley of Death', during the 1962 Sino Indian Conflict. On the author moving to higher ranks, the reader has a chance to look at the intricacies of Command and Staff in field and at Army HQ also the student establishment relationship. He becomes a party with him in watching the author's trauma of remaining a moot witness to his wife's tenacious fight with Cancer, finally to sympathise with his partly unsuccessful efforts, on her untimely demise, to cope with Pain and Guilt of living without her.
The One Way Street is a love story, written with emotion, passion and a heart wide-open unfolding against the backdrop of some the important events in the life of the Nation during that period ,spanning more than sixty years.
 
I have been to Tawang (Arunachal Pradesh). It is an astoundingly beautiful place. it gets so cold even in the summers, that we used to have extremely dry skin that kept peeling off.

That was way back in 1988. I wish to return there someday.
 
Any one interested in some more extracts. Pl do post BLs

Laxman ji Namaskar,

You have written it superbly ... words stringed into sentences with so much of feeling involved that while I was reading your extracts ... I wes feeling like it was before my eyes and I am with you at that moment ... you have poured all your feelings in such a way that its just like illustrative ..... and for the part of her departure my eyes gone wet with the feel of it only ... this is the inevitable truth and we all have to accept it ...

Sure sir ... please post few more ... and surely will read this one when published. ... Dont feel that who will read it .... you have done a great job ...
 
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Thanks I am encouraged

Another extract from the book at your bidding 'early Memories' BLS


Deeply embedded in the memory are the summer nights, the Grandmother, a AJ Rowling of her day, with her collection of fairy tails, telling stories to the cousins and me lying next to her, all ears in rapt attention, the ink black sky, as the back drop, with myriad of stars, some shining bright others twinkling, bringing the fairies, demons, Rajas and Rains, the ordinary folks, in the stories, like the Dhobi and the Tail, animals like the fox and jackal, all alive in our child's mind, the imagination running riot. The same stories requested and repeated night after night becoming more and more vivid and fascinating as our imagination grew. Slowly her voice would become faint, my periodic response and acknowledgments to the narration, an essential part of story telling and listening, becoming fainter and fainter, as I slipped back in sleep and into the child's dream world ,with the stories becoming real. Later some one would gently lift me and take me to my mother.

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The morning trips to the field with the breakfast, salted ‘Roties’, ‘Gur' white-butter and buttermilk for the uncle working in the field, tied neatly in a clean piece of home spun cloth, the aunt carrying it on her head, the pitcher of butter milk in one hand, the other holding my puny hand, balancing gracefully on those narrow dividers of the fields. He on seeing us approaching would stop whatever activity was on, tilling, irrigating or weeding at that time and approach us with half a smile. We would sit on the side of the well under the shade of the tree or in the sun depending the season, I would also got a share, the second breakfast of the day and it tasted so different, the taste still lingering in the mouth.

Being too young, possibly, I was not aware of the joy the two young souls were sharing, the few private moments, privacy in the village being at a premium, possibly the daily trips to the fields by the young bride was a stratagem designed by the knowing elder ladies, who had themselves passed that stage to provide some private moments to the young
 
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http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=19758WELCOME.
DEAR BRIG. lAXMAN SINGH SAHIB
RAMRAM AND WELCOME.
MANY CONGRATULATIONS FOR YOUR NEW BOOK.LOOK FORWARD TO READ IT SOON.
I HAVE ALSO WRITTEN FEW BOOKS ON JAT HISTORY.
HISTORY OF INDIAN ARMY FRANCE TO KARGIL.
HARYANA SARAVKHAP FREEDOM FIGHTERS& MARTYRS.
WE ALSO STARTED A SMALL WRITERS CLUB IN LONDON.
EX-ARMY OFFICERS AND WRITER LIKE
LT.GEN.KS BAJWA ARE OUR MEMBER.
I AM VERY HAPPY TO INVITE YOU AS OUR FELLOW MEMBER AND GUIDE.
WITH BEST WISHES & KIND REGARDS
DHARMPAL DUDEE
 
Dear Sir thanks Brig lakshman

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Our first introduction to Regimental duties was an assignment as orderly officer of the day. Pran, the senior most, had the honour of being the first; he borrowed the motor cycle, the only one with the course, from Anand and roared off in the tea -break to the office of Capt Rawat, the Adjutant to collect the form and instructions for the day. He zoomed in and stopped with a flourish in front of the Commandants office. Col ID Verma, the Comdt probably had never heard of a motor cycle roaring in to the HQ compound, the holiest of the holy spot in School of Signals. He did come out in amazement to investigate the strange phenomena. Pran, even though must have given him the smartest ‘Under Officer’ salute, returned down-cast with seven extra duties to his credit.

Our glee for Pran’s discomfort was rather short lived. For missing the games parade a few days later all of us were also rewarded with seven extra duties each, thankfully relieving the permanent staff from this boring duty for the next six months of our stay in the School. In addition we were also ‘Gated’ till further orders, despite this on the very first evening itself we were all sitting in the Dress Circle of the Orpheum for the late night show. Lo and behold, when the lights came on during the interval there was Capt George Paisley, our Group Office with a few others with their girlfriends, sitting in a class lower than where they should have been.

The consequence of our outing was that after dinner nights we were now required to be doing private study in the Low Power Lab under supervision of a permanent staff. First night in the lab, we asked permission of Capt Seth to smoke, promptly came out Cigars in everyone’s hands including Cheema the only Sikh on the course, the smoke screen thrown by our combined effort failed to hide the annoyance on the face of Capt Seth.

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We were required to call on the permanent staff, as per the army traditions, leaving our calling cards, one for the lady of the house and one for the unmarried daughter in addition to the one we were supposed to leave in any case. Being unsure of ourselves we were avoiding this onerous duty till we were reminded of the same rather forcefully. On the designated calling day, dressed in our best summer suits and with a fist -full of calling cards all 21 of us mounted our cycles and came on the road. Going round and round, circling the bungalows of the Comdt and other permanent staff, in smaller and larger groups crossing and re-crossing each other while exchanging sheepish grins. Not being able to muster courage enough to enter the Comdt’s House, No 2 the Middlesex Road, as also not being sure as to from where to start the calling process, after some more futile cycling we were back in our room; mission unaccomplished.

This was not the end of the story, next day we were once again in the Wing Commanders office, this time with an entreaty to be kind to the staff and not to keep them on tenterhooks.

It so happened that my room located at the extreme end of the barrack where-in we the YO’s were lodged, faced the Church across the road.





The Church that Came to’ Life’ on Sundays

Sundays mornings the spectacle of the, pretty Mhow girls, dressed in their finery streaming in for the Service and later emerging, at times even lingering at the entrance gate acted as a magnet to the course-mates.

With easy chairs pulled up, they would take vantage positions, with me as the unwilling host, Manikam, my bearer, serving Tea and Pakoras to the excited and chattering young fellows.

Was the lingering of the girls, at the gate, deliberate, intentional and naturally irresistible, with so many admirers opposite, is a question I still ponder upon?
 
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Dear Friends

I have once again changed the Title of my book to 'A Journey through Life' from 'A One Way Street', Hope to have a few photo copies made from the CD to circulate to friends for comments before it goes for print BLS
 
Old title is more appealing ...

Dear Friends

I have once again changed the Title of my book to 'A Journey through Life' from 'A One Way Street', Hope to have a few photo copies made from the CD to circulate to friends for comments before it goes for print BLS

Sir, I dont know much about the writing or books .... but to me the title 'A One Way Street' is more appealing than the new one.
 
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Thanks for the suggestion. I have changed quiet a few I may still take a U turn and go back yo One Way Street. Earlier it was a double barrel title 'One Way Street -A Journey Through Life' where street referred to life . It is a story Covering the period from 1935 from where my memory begins to 2006 that was my 48th wedding anniversary the last of those calibrated alone fro 2000 onwards. There is nothing to writing a book , you can write one , but it takes effort and can be painful too regards brig lakshman:)
 
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Let me put another extract BLS

It was a bitterly cold night of 31 January 1994; I was in deep sleep in our first-floor bed room 1066/37 a duplex in Noida when Jeet prodded me awake. Our Doberman bitch which always slept under our bed was whining and possibly wanted to be taken out which was rather unusual as she was well trained and had regular habits. Groggy from sleep I reluctantly slipped out of the warm bed draped a shawl around my shoulders a woolen Balaclava on my fast balding head and sleep walked down the stares with Dona on the leash to the drawing room without switching on many lights so as not to disturb my son and his wife who had their room on the ground floor. Slowly without making much noise I slid open the main door and came out in the open.

The cold hit me with a vengeance; anyhow I opened the main gate and let Dona do her trick. It was pitch dark out side with stars shining brightly in the sky but I was in no mood to enjoy the silence and the beauty of the night with the single thought of slipping in to the bed as early as possible upper most in my mind. I wasted no time and as soon Dona has finished was in the bedroom this time in double quick time with Dona leading as she also wanted to be away from the outside cold.



I thought Jeet would have slipped back into sleep soon after sending me out. However I was surprised to see her sitting doubled up in the bed speechless holding her stomach with both hands in acute pain. Whatever illusions I had of falling back into sleep vanished instantaneously.

Lately Jeet had been having problems with her stomach for some time and would get relief by taking tablets of Zinctac (rani It was a bitterly cold night of31 January 1994; I was in deep sleep in our first-floor bed room 1066/37 a duplex in Noida when Jeet prodded me awake. Our Doberman bitch which always slept under our bed was whining and possibly wanted to be taken out which was rather unusual as she was well trained and had regular habits. Groggy from sleep I reluctantly slipped out of the warm bed draped a shawl around my shoulders a woollen Balaklava on my fast balding head and sleep walked down the stares with Dona on the leash to the drawing room without switching on many lights so as not to disturb my son and his wife who had their room on the ground floor. Slowly without making much noise I slid open the main door and came out in the open.

The cold hit me with a vengeance; anyhow I opened the main gate and let Dona do her trick. It was pitch dark out side with stars shining brightly in the sky but I was in no mood to enjoy the silence and the beauty of the night with the single thought of slipping in to the bed as early as possible upper most in my mind. I wasted no time and as soon Dona has finished was in the bedroom this time in double quick time with Dona leading as she also wanted to be away from the outside cold.


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I thought Jeet would have slipped back into sleep soon after sending me out. However I was surprised to see her sitting doubled up in the bed speechless holding her stomach with both hands in acute pain. Whatever illusions I had of falling back into sleep vanished instantaneously.

Lately Jeet had been having problems with her stomach for some time and would get relief by taking tablets of Zinctac (ranitidine).
( She did have a history of gastric problems which to my knowledge went way back to 60’s in Puna when she had taken a glass of sugarcane juice from a way side vender also when I was in Kalimpong I received a signal from the Dehra Dun Hospital informing me that she had been placed on ‘Seriously Ill’ List ) I quickly made her swallow two of the same-confident that all would be well soon. However she had no relief as a matter of fact the discomfort increased. Jeet always had a low threshold of pain with very little capacity to bear it I could see that she was about to collapse. I walked her to the toilet and back with no letup in her problem. I had some NuxVom 30 in the bedside table (a homeopathic medicine). I forced her to take two doses of the same one after other but nothing seemed to work she was asking me to call a doctor but I knew that no one would come at this time and would take his own time if at all one came. My best bet was to take her to the Armed Forces Clinic as soon as she was in position to take the steps down.

I was getting desperate and at my wits end the clock had been ticking all this time and I could sense the beginning of dawn with lightening of the sky out side. Slowly and mercifully the pain started subsiding possibly due to the effect of the various capsules and pill I had made her swallow or perhaps due to nature’s kindness or the body's own reaction. Now at last on that cold winter morning I could wipe the perspiration from her face and head and see her falling back in a deep sleep of total exhaustion. Slowly my own faculties to think coherently and logically started to return which had been lost due to my inability to do any thing to alleviate the extreme pain and suffering of my wife. I was scared stiff with the fear of the unknown. It was not an auspicious beginning of the New Year 1994.
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( She did have a history of gastric problems which to my knowledge went way back to 60’s in Poona when she had taken a glass of sugarcane juice from a way side vender also when I was in Kalimpong I received a signal from the Dehra Dun Hospital informing me that she had been placed on ‘Seriously Ill’ List ) I quickly made her swallow two of the same-confident that all would be well soon. However she had no relief as a matter of fact the discomfort increased. Jeet always had a low threshold of pain with very little capacity to bear it I could see that she was about to collapse. I walked her to the toilet and back with no letup in her problem. I had some NuxVom 30 in the bedside table (a homeopathic medicine). I forced her to take two doses of the same one after other but nothing seemed to work she was asking me to call a doctor but I knew that no one would come at this time and would take his own time if at all one came. My best bet was to take her to the Armed Forces Clinic as soon as she was in position to take the steps down.

I was getting desperate and at my wits end the clock had been ticking all this time and I could sense the beginning of dawn with lightening of the sky out side. Slowly and mercifully the pain started subsiding possibly due to the effect of the various capsules and pill I had made her swallow or perhaps due to nature’s kindness or the body's own reaction. Now at last on that cold winter morning I could wipe the perspiration from her face and head and see her falling back in a deep sleep of total exhaustion. Slowly my own faculties to think coherently and logically started to return which had been lost due to my inability to do any thing to alleviate the extreme pain and suffering of my wife. I was scared stiff with the fear of the unknown. It was not an auspicious beginning of the New Year 1994.



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What is the book about BLS

[FONT=&quot]A Journey Trough [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Life[/FONT]
The reader joins the author in his ‘Journey through Life’ some times in 1935-36, following him through the simple ways of life in Western UP villages as perceived by a child of five and six, then to Delhi of yore and the small towns of the province. He feels, just as the author, the cultural shock of the move to Lucknow in the 50’s and the freewheeling life in the university, is introduced to the new concept of 'Love at Far Site. Next on to Indian Military Academy in the foothills of Shiwaliks with its dread Drill Square and the Obstacle Course, passing-out with the proud but shaky 2nd lieutenant to face the pains of growing up in the post independence Army, a blend of the British traditions and the Indian value system . Soon the reader is introduced with the new 'Babbler', post facing the young officer’s 'Love at First Sight', feels the pangs of separation in married life, resulting from combat service and soon the uncertainties to life and limb, during the 1962 Sino Indian Conflict, on entering the 'Valley of Death'. As the author climbs his career ladder, the reader has a chance to look at the intricacies of Command and Staff at Army HQ and the student – instructor relationship in a service environment, so different from traditional institutions. The reader is saddened watching the author's trauma on being a helpless witness to his wife's tenacious fight with cancer, with his, only, partly successful efforts, to minimise the her pains through the long struggle, culminating in her untimely demise, finally to sympathise with his efforts to cope with Pain and Guilt of living without her.
 
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Another amusing incident from the book BLS


Unexpectedly Rosy and I found the two of us alone in one of the rooms away from the main portion of the house possibly by chance or more probably by design. There was no talk no words exchanged between us taken aback by the unfamiliar situation that I found myself in. I was tongue-tied inexperienced and nervous she expectant but uncomfortable possibly aware of the conspiracy hatched by some one possibly Ruby. The room now full of and crackling with nervous energy. With pregnant silence sitting between the two of us and the separation though not too close yet still close enough to make me nervous and uncomfortable. I found myself totally clueless and inadequate to handle the unfamiliar situation. What was going through in Rosy’s mind can only be a conjectured. Mercifully and to my utter relief the spell soon broke; some discrete coughing or a knock on the door coming to our mutual help. The chance meeting became a non-event. Rosy had once again to face the ignominy of confessing to her sister of the wasted chance and still remaining un-kissed virgin.
 
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