My Tears

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devdahiya

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MY tears are precious
They are the reservoir cum bank of my sorrows and joy
They are the wonderful treasure of my past
As a child,i could use them to call my mother instantly
And to scare my friends and to fool my brothers and sisters

As an adult,i was told that they should not come out
Because it is bad to show them up in that age

As a grown up man,they were subdued under my maturity
Because i was suppose to hold up the emotions

I wait for my old age now,when again these lovely drops
will get better of me and will flow freely as they did when
i was a child......uncontrolled and uncompromising.




Aanssu kehte sab kuchh lekin,samajhh nahin hum paate hein
Daya dikhate aanssu par hum,uska mann behlate hein
Aanssu motti mann mandir ka,tap-2 behta jata hei
Dukhh ho sukhh ho,beh-2 kar ye dil ko khuub sehlate hein.
 
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Aanssu ek girre aurat ka,hilne lagge singhassan
Ek bechara tapp-2 karta,logg de rahe bhassan

Koi isse hathhiyar banna kar,karwa leta mann ki
Koi inko pee-2 kar,bhukhh mitta le tann ki

Kissi ke aanssu nahin sukhte,Niyati aissi paai
Koi inko dhhal banna kar,khaye khub mallai.
 
eeb aap nai do line likh di sain tai do line tai mai bhi likhunga nahin to mere andar ke kavi ke aatamsamman ko thes lagegi

hamne unki yaad me ro ro ke baaltiyaan bhar di
hamne unki yaad me ro ro ke baaltiyaan bhar di
wo aae aur nahaa dho kar chal diye
 
Really nice one Dev Sir.....here's :) a smiley to wash out the salty tears.

n Naveen ji ,, urs to toooo gud hai ji... :D:p


vaise kya likha hai likhne wale ne.....

Un Aankhon ka Hansna Bhi Kya, Jin Aankhon Mein Paani Na Ho....
 
Dil ke samandar main,
Bhavanaon ka Jwarbhata hai
Kabhi sukh toh kabhi dukh
Iski vajah bun jata hai!

Aaj phir ek tanhayi
Mere mana karney pe bhi
Us Jwarbhatey ke sung
Khud-b-khud chali aayi

Khud ko samjhata hun
Bhavanaon ke hiloron se
Khud ko bachata hun
Kabhi kabhi tair ke
Kinarey bhi pahuch jata hun
Lekin is koshish main aksar
Khud ko akela hi pata hun!

Bhavanayien uffaan pe hon
Kuch samajh nahi aata hai
Shabd bhi gair ho jaaye gar
Aansoo hi saath nibhata hai!
Paraye se kya lena mujey
Jab Mera koi apna hi
In aansoonon ko, Pad nahi pata hai!
 
navingulia said:
un aankhon ka hansna bhi kya jin aankhon me paani na ho

Dev Sir, royen aapke dushman.
aap tai hansaya e karo sab nai.
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Bhai saab gustaakhi maaf ho par kehna chata hoon... jab tak aankh mein aansoon nahi tab tak hasne mein bhi majja nahi... failure ke baad success , haar ke baad jeet, dukh ke baad sukh ka majja hi alag hai... aur waise bhi aansoo hamesha dukh hi thodi na vyakt kartein hai, woh toh khushi mein bhi moti bankar chalak jaatein hai... lagta hai kuch jyada ho gaya ... hahaha:p
 
Dear Dev ji

Beautiful creation. ek aanshu ye hain aur ek vo garhiyali aanshu. samaj sakta hoon inn anshuon ki fitrat ayr takat .

R.S.Dahiya
 
Good one Dev ji...:)

adding 2 lines to ur thread from jagjit singhs gajal...

जो आके रुके दामन पे सदा वो अश्क नहीं है पानी है,
जो अश्क न छलके आंखों से उस अश्क की कीमत होती है
 
mere aankho me hi rahe ye ashak to behtar hai malik
jo tere aankho se ye nikale to hum sah paayege nahi

onko maaf haimere har ashak ka gunah mere malik
par jo onke ashak ka me sabab banu to saja e maut ho meri
 
Walaah

ritu said:
mere aankho me hi rahe ye ashak to behtar hai malik
jo tere aankho se ye nikale to hum sah paayege nahi

onko maaf haimere har ashak ka gunah mere malik
par jo onke ashak ka me sabab banu to saja e maut ho meri
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Subhan Alah .. Wah Wah
 
...

Mujhko toh tere chehre pe yeh ghum nahin janchta
Jaayiz nahin lagta mujhe ghum se tera rishta
Sun meri ghuzarish ise chehre se hataa se
Sun meri ghuzarish ise chehre se hataa se
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de

Source: "Kuch is tarah" (Album: Doorie) by Atif Aslam.
 
Har ek muskarahat muskaan nahi hoti
Nafrat ho ya muhabbat aasan nahi hoti
Aansoo khushi k gham k hotay hain aik jaisay
Inn aansuoon ki koi pehchaan nahi hoti
 
msingh said:
Har ek muskarahat muskaan nahi hoti
Nafrat ho ya muhabbat aasan nahi hoti
Aansoo khushi k gham k hotay hain aik jaisay
Inn aansuoon ki koi pehchaan nahi hoti
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Gham aur khussi ke aanssu ek jaisse nahin hote
Kya kabhi dekha hei kissi ka dil khhussi mein rotte
Gham ka aanssu sailaab hota hei
Aur khushi ka aanssu dariya-e chenaaab hota hei.


Gham ke aanssu taddaff ko aur badhhate hein
Khushi ke aanssu dil ko chup-chap sehlate hein

Kehne ko tou behta hua pani hein ye aanssu
Par ye jinda hone ka ehsaass dilattehein
 
Really nice and good composition,,,, dil ko hi nahi rooh ko bhi chu jaaye,,,

Aaj khushiyon ko koi badaahi dega..
Niklegaa chand toh dikhaai dega,
E-Mohabbhat karne waale..
zara sambhal kar pyar karnaa,
Agar e AANSHU bhi gira toh sunaai dega.......


devdahiya said:
MY tears are precious
They are the reservoir cum bank of my sorrows and joy
They are the wonderful treasure of my past
As a child,i could use them to call my mother instantly
And to scare my friends and to fool my brothers and sisters

As an adult,i was told that they should not come out
Because it is bad to show them up in that age

As a grown up man,they were subdued under my maturity
Because i was suppose to hold up the emotions

I wait for my old age now,when again these lovely drops
will get better of me and will flow freely as they did when
i was a child......uncontrolled and uncompromising.




Aanssu kehte sab kuchh lekin,samajhh nahin hum paate hein
Daya dikhate aanssu par hum,uska mann behlate hein
Aanssu motti mann mandir ka,tap-2 behta jata hei
Dukhh ho sukhh ho,beh-2 kar ye dil ko khuub sehlate hein.
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