nahi dekhey jaatey

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ye ,chand lamhey hain jo ek waqt se zehan mein poshida theyy,,


wo ghusatey they kashti tufaano mein quvvat sey
aaj tinko ke saharey nahi dekhey jaatey

wo khankatey theyy saatrangi churiyaan haath sey
aaj mehndi ke hathhon se mattam nahi dekhey jattey

wo banatey they mohobat-ey- Taj ishrat sey
aaj badaltey khandder nahi dekhey jatey

wo rottey theyy,girteyy they ashq iss aankh sey
aaj rottey wo tanha nahi deekhey jattey

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hehehe good composition
kahan se udaya chorre!

ups n downs r part of life :)
dook sukh, din raat, dhoop chaon aate hein jaate hein!

live life lively


rock on
Jit
 
cooljat said:
hehehe good composition
kahan se udaya chorre!

ups n downs r part of life :)
dook sukh, din raat, dhoop chaon aate hein jaate hein!

live life lively


rock on
Jit
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thanx bro....ek bey yaa bhi likh di thee;)
 
downtoearth said:
ye ,chand lamhey hain jo ek waqt se zehan mein poshida theyy,,


wo ghusatey they kashti tufaano mein quvvat sey
aaj tinko ke saharey nahi dekhey jaatey

wo khankatey theyy saatrangi churiyaan haath sey
aaj mehndi ke hathhon se mattam nahi dekhey jattey

wo banatey they mohobat-ey- Taj ishrat sey
aaj badaltey khandder nahi dekhey jatey

wo rottey theyy,girteyy they ashq iss aankh sey
aaj rottey wo tanha nahi deekhey jattey

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Rupendera bro... jab tane 'dard' post karii... mane nu sochii.. ak majak karda hogaaa... paar yaar.. tu to senti eee ho gaya see!!! compositioin to... ultimate seee... par bhai terepe yee.. kaam aache kon laagde..:D !!.. nu laage se janu... amol palekar.. ke padoss mai ghar le liyaa..ho!
 
hahahah kamal ley pher taal karni paregi,,, heheeheh,,, agey tey koni likhu bhai ,,, hehehhe,, aur likhuga to tanney puuch key .. theek se?
 
wah dada

downtoearth said:
hahahah kamal ley pher taal karni paregi,,, heheeheh,,, agey tey koni likhu bhai ,,, hehehhe,, aur likhuga to tanney puuch key .. theek se?
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wah rupi dada yo kasuta chaala paadya ........

manne itni samajh te koni issi baatan ki naa e manne gyaan aaya karda inme :( par ya paddhi te aachi laagi ..........

kamal ne bhai ne theek kahi ak yo kaam koni jachda jaat tere........ar apni chutkulaan ki rehri sambhaal le bhai kit is shero shairi ki duniya me badde sai ...:D:D
 
downtoearth said:
hahahah kamal ley pher taal karni paregi,,, heheeheh,,, agey tey koni likhu bhai ,,, hehehhe,, aur likhuga to tanney puuch key .. theek se?
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naa bhai rupenderaa... isa julmm na kareeaaa mere pe!! manee beera see je mai nait gaya ...pher bhi tu kon maane... :D
maane nu laage see.. tare dhoore ib vee kavitaa.. khatam ho rahi see...he he... ak nai ? ... bindaas avan de bro.... life mai sab kim try karna chaiyee... aar kuch apne rathee bhai ne bhi sekhaaa deee.... :D
 
fool4love said:
bindaas avan de bro.... life mai sab kim try karna chaiyee... aar kuch apne rathee bhai ne bhi sekhaaa deee.... :D
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thanx kamal bro,,, ar rathi ne aapan key sikhaawan gey ,, yu to chandya hoya tingar sey.... :p :D ;) arrey raathi... wa kamal bhai ki gappi aali thread mein tera contribution chahiyey thaa.. ikbey jja key aa urrey ,,, aur apni gapp baga,,,:p ;) :D
 
downtoearth said:
thanx kamal bro,,, ar rathi ne aapan key sikhaawan gey ,, yu to chandya hoya tingar sey.... :p :D ;) arrey raathi... wa kamal bhai ki gappi aali thread mein tera contribution chahiyey thaa.. ikbey jja key aa urrey ,,, aur apni gapp baga,,,:p ;) :D
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han mereyaaar.. kaal ka .. gala patannn ne ho rehaaa seee... ib to kimme poth de ureeee...:D
 
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