pehchaan - inspiration

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Dear friends,
i stopped writing poems long back but today i just sat down and felt like penning this poem which had been running in my mind for long.

Pehchaan

Pathar pade paani me lehar usme uthaae,
aag bujhane hawaa chale aur use bhadkaay,
Jaat mara tab jaaniye jab terahvi ho jaay

Vivek ko apni shakti banaa, sanyamm ko kar prabal
Vikat sthiti me rah apne usoolon par tu adig achal
Jo dagmaga gaya apni karmbhumi par wo insaan hi kya kahlaayega
Jo chalta raha toofanon me, apni manzil ko ant me wo hi to paayega

Sankat jiski shakti bane, aandhi na jisko hilaay
Jaat mara tab jaaniye jab terahvi ho jaay

Jazba, josh, junoon, jatan, ye jo teri pahchaan hai
Wo insaan kya jise apne hone par nahin abhimaan hai
Char din aage, char din peechhe, har koi mitti me mil jaayega
Char din me jo kar gaya kuchh, wo hi to mahaan kahlaayega


Na Karen vichalit, mushkilen na jisko jhukaay
Haar jis se haar gayi soche bahut upaay
Jaat mara tab jaaniye jab terahvi ho jaay
 
(This post is in Devanagari script. If there is difficulty in reading the text, there is need to install ‘Mangal’ font.)

यह लघु कविता अति सुंदर है - इसको देवनागरी में लिख रहा हूं । छंद प्रयोग के कारण थोड़े से परिवर्तन किये गये हैं ।

पत्थर पड़े पानी में, लहर उसमें उठाये
आग बुझाने हवा चले, और उसे भड़काये
जाट मरा तब जानिये जब तेरहवीं हो जाये

विवेक को अपनी शक्ति बना, संयम को कर प्रबल
विराट स्थिति में रह, अपने उसूलों पर तू अडिग-अचल
जो डगमगा गया कर्मभूमि पर, इंसान वो क्या कहलायेगा
चलता रहा जो तूफानों में, बस वही तो मंजिल को पायेगा

संकट जिसकी शक्ति बने, आंधी ना जिसको हिलाये,
जाट मरा तब जानिये जब तेरहवीं हो जाये

जजबा, जोश, जुनून, जतन ये तो तेरी पहचान है
वो इंसान क्या जिसे अपने होने पर नहीं अभिमान है
चार दिन आगे चार दिन पीछे हर कोई मिट्टी में मिल जायेगा
चार दिन में जो कर गया कुछ, वो ही तो महान कहलायेगा

ना करें विचलित, मुश्किलें ना जिसको झुकाये
हार जिससे हार गई, सोचे थे बहुत उपाय
जाट मरा तब जानिये जब तेरहवीं हो जाये
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Navin Bhaisaab
kudos to u
ur poem is 100% joshili & inspirin hai aapki jaisi, keep it up!

special thanks to DND uncle for convertin it in Hindi, apni bhasa mein padne ka maja hi kuch aur hai, thanks uncleji!

Rock on
Jit
 
really nice and inspiring thoughts .....
speacially this line
vivek ko apni shakti banaa, sanyamm ko kar prabal
Vikat sthiti me rah apne usoolon par tu adig achal
.............sahi kaha ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,chahe aap ke samane kaise bhi sthithi aa jaye paar jaab taak aap ka sayam aap ke saath hai ,,,koi cheeze naamumkin nahin
 
really superb

Navin bhai very inspiring poem, and nice translation by Deswal ji, in fact all ur posts are motivating.
 
Very Good and Excellent Navin Bhai, Don't stop writting, keep writting, hope to have many more poems like it from you sooooooooooooon
 
Awesome Poem!! Uncle :)
I dont know much hindi, learnt a bit recently, when I was in India on vacation. Nyways, I find it really engergetic!

thank u uncle!

Chao..
 
Nice...

However, at least the first three lines seem to be borrowed.
I first heard them in Kamal Hasan's movie Ahbay. I believe they
exist in our literature somewhere.
 
yes, the first three lines are taken from the film 'abhay'. Ever since i heard those lines i wanted to write a poem on it.
The line 'Jat mara tab jaaniye jab terahvi ho jaay' is a very old kahaavat.
I think every one would be aware about it else i would ve declared it at the begining of the thread.
It was just a thought about being proud about oneself which i wanted to share with everyone.
The remaining lines are written by me and i have no problems if they are claimed by anyone else.
Regards
thanks every one for the appreciation too. the thoughts should be communicated, thats all
 
Yes Navin, you are right.
It is a very old saying and it was said by najaf(in the court of delhi) when he got the news that Maharaja Surajmal has sacrificed his life in a battle then he said "Don't believe a Jat to be dead untill his thirteen day ceremony is over"

and nice composition
 
Inspirational and thought provoking..............
Waiting to hear more .........


regards,
 
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