pyar ke sabad

[mukeshkumar007]

"
humnae kuda se ek duwa mangi jismae hamne maut mangi.
kuda ne keha maut to maie tumae de sakta hoo lakin uska kya karoo jisne duwa maie tumari lambi umar mangi hai.
"

"
kal jiske hath maie hum fool dekar aye the
aaj usike hath ka pathar humae talash reha hai.
"

ek bar humae apne app per yeh soch kar bhut afsos huwa ki hum kisi jan anzan ka pyar nai paa sake.
lakin agle hi pal humae yeh sochte huwe garv huwa ki wo kitne unlucky hai jo humara pyar nai paa sake.

 

[rkumar]

mukesh kumar (Sep 23, 2004 05:57 a.m.):
"
humnae kuda se ek duwa mangi jismae hamne maut mangi.
kuda ne keha maut to maie tumae de sakta hoo lakin uska kya karoo jisne duwa maie tumari lambi umar mangi hai.
"

"
kal jiske hath maie hum fool dekar aye the
aaj usike hath ka pathar humae talash reha hai.
"

ek bar humae apne app per yeh soch kar bhut afsos huwa ki hum kisi jan anzan ka pyar nai paa sake.
lakin agle hi pal humae yeh sochte huwe garv huwa ki wo kitne unlucky hai jo humara pyar nai paa sake.

wah Mukesh Bhai...bahut khoob..masa-allah acha khasa likh lete ho..

There is one from my side which i just wrote last evening;

Haseenon ki dua mai bahut asar hai yaaro
mere dekhte dekhte, mera sanam toot gaya
saath rehne ka umar bhar jinse kiya thaa waida,
pal bhar me haathon se, unka daman choot gaya.

Rajendra

 

[mukeshkumar007]

but khoob rajendrji
keep it up
i am waiting for more

 

[rksehrawat]

Kissi dil jale ne kaha hai :

"kho gaye hai kuch is kadar tere pyaar main,
saansein hi naa ruk jaye kahin intezaar main,
jo bas gaye hum ruh main teri to chahat ki kasam,
aahein bharte phirenge dil-e-bekarar main"


Mausam kuchh bhari lag raha hai is liya another one in a lighter vain:

jab jab hawa chali, tum yaad aaye
jab jab dhoop khili tum yaad aaye
jab jab barkha huyi tum yaad aaye
arre yaar ab to mera chhata louta do...

chandani raat mein furqat se sharmana
chandani raat mein furqat se sharmana
chandani raat mein furqat se sharmana
iska matlab samajh aaye to humko bhi samjhana...

Rajendra Kumar Kalkhande (Oct 13, 2004 05:04 a.m.):

mukesh kumar (Sep 23, 2004 05:57 a.m.):
"
humnae kuda se ek duwa mangi jismae hamne maut mangi.
kuda ne keha maut to maie tumae de sakta hoo lakin uska kya karoo jisne duwa maie tumari lambi umar mangi hai.
"

"
kal jiske hath maie hum fool dekar aye the
aaj usike hath ka pathar humae talash reha hai.
"

ek bar humae apne app per yeh soch kar bhut afsos huwa ki hum kisi jan anzan ka pyar nai paa sake.
lakin agle hi pal humae yeh sochte huwe garv huwa ki wo kitne unlucky hai jo humara pyar nai paa sake.

wah Mukesh Bhai...bahut khoob..masa-allah acha khasa likh lete ho..

There is one from my side which i just wrote last evening;

Haseenon ki dua mai bahut asar hai yaaro
mere dekhte dekhte, mera sanam toot gaya
saath rehne ka umar bhar jinse kiya thaa waida,
pal bhar me haathon se, unka daman choot gaya.

Rajendra

 

[pjat_007]

Wah bhai...wah.
Jat bhi ab to shaayari karne lage hain...
masa allah....

Bachpan se hi shayar the , ya kisi ki bewafa ne bana diya???
Lagta hain damn kisi ka tumne bhi thama tha magar haath se voh chhoot gaya....

P jat

 

[pjat_007]

Wah bhai...wah.
Jat bhi ab to shaayari karne lage hain...
masa allah....

Bachpan se hi shayar the , ya kisi ki bewafa ne bana diya???
Lagta hain damn kisi ka tumne bhi thama tha magar haath se voh chhoot gaya....

P jat

 

[uday]

Bahuut achhey ...

One question Mukeshji.

Kya ye aapke aapney likhey hue hai yaa fir copy post wala masala hai..

mukesh kumar (Sep 23, 2004 05:57 a.m.):
"
humnae kuda se ek duwa mangi jismae hamne maut mangi.
kuda ne keha maut to maie tumae de sakta hoo lakin uska kya karoo jisne duwa maie tumari lambi umar mangi hai.
"

"
kal jiske hath maie hum fool dekar aye the
aaj usike hath ka pathar humae talash reha hai.
"

ek bar humae apne app per yeh soch kar bhut afsos huwa ki hum kisi jan anzan ka pyar nai paa sake.
lakin agle hi pal humae yeh sochte huwe garv huwa ki wo kitne unlucky hai jo humara pyar nai paa sake.

 

[mukeshkumar007]

one and third is my own and second is copy paste.