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Dost hei jo aapko sachchi disha mei le chale
Aap baithhe dhhoop mei, aapko palkon talle

Aap ko rokke nahin par saathh mei chalta rahe
Harr dum mangge wo dua par shabdd koi na kahe
Saye jaissa chippak kar,hardum dekho wo chale
Aap.........................

Na koi shikva na shikayat,baat hitt ki wo kare
Satya kitna ho jo kaddwa,kehne se wo na darre
Kammi har ek aapki dil mei uske ja khale
Aap......................

Jaan ek ruup 2,dost aissa maniye
Garr mille bass ek bhi,kismat wala janiye
Jaan de kar muskurayein,dost hotte ye bhalle.
Aap......................
 
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sachaa dost

ek dost to vo- jo jib mhaari jail ho jaa, te nuu khve akk, eeb k karuu teri taai:(
arr sachaa dost vo, jib jail ho jyaa te mhaari gail lock-up me beth ke khve- arre eeb hadey te kyuukar likdein:D :D
devdahiya said:
Dost hei jo aapko sachchi disha mei le chale
Aap baithhe dhhoop mei, aapko palkon talle

Aap ko rokke nahin par saathh mei chalta rahe
Harr dum mangge wo dua par shabdd koi na kahe
Saye jaissa chippak kar,hardum dekho wo chale
Aap.........................

Na koi shikva na shikayat,baat hitt ki wo kare
Satya kitna ho jo kaddwa,kehne se wo na darre
Kammi har ek aapki dil mei uske ja khale
Aap......................

Jaan ek ruup 2,dost aissa maniye
Garr mille bass ek bhi,kismat wala janiye
Jaan de kar muskurayein,dost hotte ye bhalle.
Aap......................
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deepshika said:
ek dost to vo- jo jib mhaari jail ho jaa, te nuu khve akk, eeb k karuu teri taai:(
arr sachaa dost vo, jib jail ho jyaa te mhaari gail lock-up me beth ke khve- arre eeb hadey te kyuukar likdein:D :D
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Ow kar diya Pyancharr meri cycle mei............Mera motta-2 kaljja kha liya iss chhorri nei......Manddi reh nywein. Server te gaya samjho.....Shhhhh....shhhhhh!
 
pincharr??

kaka- nuu batao- teenu terra me te koon se tair me huya?:D ;) :p
devdahiya said:
Ow kar diya Pyancharr meri cycle mei............Mera motta-2 kaljja kha liya iss chhorri nei......Manddi reh nywein. Server te gaya samjho.....Shhhhh....shhhhhh!
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deepshika said:
kaka- nuu batao- teenu terra me te koon se tair me huya?:D ;) :p
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Bebe teessare terr ki baat na karrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Ha...ha...ha....Ya chhori iss server ka Pattakka bajwa ke manneggi...ha..ha..ha.
 
dekhyaa nee

fer issi tawlii bhaaj bi liye kaka,,,bhadaakke k darr te:D
kOye naa, ham se hadey -bumb deactivating SQUAD!
arr apkaa yu pichkyaa tair bi hadde e reh gya haawal-taawal mein:p
devdahiya said:
Bebe teessare terr ki baat na karrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Ha...ha...ha....Ya chhori iss server ka Pattakka bajwa ke manneggi...ha..ha..ha.
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devdahiya said:
Dost hei jo aapko sachchi disha mei le chale
Aap baithhe dhhoop mei, aapko palkon talle

Aap ko rokke nahin par saathh mei chalta rahe
Harr dum mangge wo dua par shabdd koi na kahe
Saye jaissa chippak kar,hardum dekho wo chale
Aap.........................

Na koi shikva na shikayat,baat hitt ki wo kare
Satya kitna ho jo kaddwa,kehne se wo na darre
Kammi har ek aapki dil mei uske ja khale
Aap......................

Jaan ek ruup 2,dost aissa maniye
Garr mille bass ek bhi,kismat wala janiye
Jaan de kar muskurayein,dost hotte ye bhalle.
Aap......................
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great kakaji ur poetry is awesome
i wont repeat again all that what i said before but
ur every composition is admirable


aaar iiinnn balakka te kimmme sikhkha do naaa ye nu ee khoon peevenge



ek dost to vo- jo jib mhaari jail ho jaa, te nuu khve akk, eeb k karuu teri taai:(
arr sachaa dost vo, jib jail ho jyaa te mhaari gail lock-up me beth ke khve- arre eeb hadey te kyuukar likdein
 
devdahiya said:
Dost hei jo aapko sachchi disha mei le chale
Aap baithhe dhhoop mei, aapko palkon talle

Aap ko rokke nahin par saathh mei chalta rahe
Harr dum mangge wo dua par shabdd koi na kahe
Saye jaissa chippak kar,hardum dekho wo chale
Aap.........................

Na koi shikva na shikayat,baat hitt ki wo kare
Satya kitna ho jo kaddwa,kehne se wo na darre
Kammi har ek aapki dil mei uske ja khale
Aap......................

Jaan ek ruup 2,dost aissa maniye
Garr mille bass ek bhi,kismat wala janiye
Jaan de kar muskurayein,dost hotte ye bhalle.
Aap......................
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ek nyu bhi hai

Good friend woh hota hai jo aapko kahta hai bhai padh le

ar very good friend woh jo ki exam hall ke bahar se bolta hai ki "abe kitna likhega ,chal bahar nikal" ;)

anyways very sweet words Dev sir.

~Abhi
 
deepshika said:
ek dost to vo- jo jib mhaari jail ho jaa, te nuu khve akk, eeb k karuu teri taai:(
arr sachaa dost vo, jib jail ho jyaa te mhaari gail lock-up me beth ke khve- arre eeb hadey te kyuukar likdein:D :D
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aaaaaaeee deepikaa padd aayi "times of india" alla joke arr translate saa karr diya appne alli mein, arr chep diyaa, gud going

nice stuff,
keep it up,
good one,
funny one,

hahhahahaahh

ibb inn "one liner" likhaan allyan ne kimme bhi na pavve likhan nee, sarre manne ee likh diye
 
re yaa to joke ki yatya kar ....di..original to nu se....

good friend who gets you bailed....
and true friend..sitting beside you and saying....Khasam beedi le rya se ke...


Keep going but not without smiling....
 
TO have a true friend...

don't try to find any reason......because rational stuff always results you in a deal........- said by Amir Bhai(My batch mate in MNNIT)

Life is too small for things to happen....

bindaas jeeo...aur teeter maro....( I hope you know the joke)
 
Thoda hat ke

Hua Kuch Yoon K !
Main kal ja raha tha
Ke meri chappal toot gai

Ab chappal to moochi seeta hai
Seeta to darzi bhi hai

Darzi to kapray seeta hai
Kapray to rangeen hotay hain

Rangeen to lota bhi hota hai
Lota to bathroom main hota hai

Bathroom main to nal bhi hota hai
Nal to lohay ka hota hai

Lohay ki to istiri bi hoti hai
Istri to garam hoti hai

Garam to Custard bhi hota hai
Custard to peela hota hai

Peela to chooza bhi hota hai
Chooza to anday main se nikalta hai

Anda to safaid hota hai
Safaid to doodh bhi hota hai

Doodh to bhains daity hai
Bhains to kaali hoti hai

Kaala to bangali bhi hota hai
Bangali to paan khata hai

Paan to laal hota hai
Laal to gulab bhi hota hai

Gulaab main to kantay hotay hain
Kantain to machli main bhi hotay hain

Machli to achchi hoti hai
Achcha to Dost bhi hota hai

Dost to Dost hota hai
jo parh kar apna time waste karta hai..



Don't mind it... friends
Let's enjoy
 
sampuran said:
Hua Kuch Yoon K !
Main kal ja raha tha
Ke meri chappal toot gai

Ab chappal to moochi seeta hai
Seeta to darzi bhi hai

Darzi to kapray seeta hai
Kapray to rangeen hotay hain

Rangeen to lota bhi hota hai
Lota to bathroom main hota hai

Bathroom main to nal bhi hota hai
Nal to lohay ka hota hai

Lohay ki to istiri bi hoti hai
Istri to garam hoti hai

Garam to Custard bhi hota hai
Custard to peela hota hai

Peela to chooza bhi hota hai
Chooza to anday main se nikalta hai

Anda to safaid hota hai
Safaid to doodh bhi hota hai

Doodh to bhains daity hai
Bhains to kaali hoti hai

Kaala to bangali bhi hota hai
Bangali to paan khata hai

Paan to laal hota hai
Laal to gulab bhi hota hai

Gulaab main to kantay hotay hain
Kantain to machli main bhi hotay hain

Machli to achchi hoti hai
Achcha to Dost bhi hota hai

Dost to Dost hota hai
jo parh kar apna time waste karta hai..



Don't mind it... friends
Let's enjoy
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Bohot achchhe Sampuran bhai.
 
devdahiya said:
Dost hei jo aapko sachchi disha mei le chale
Aap baithhe dhhoop mei, aapko palkon talle

Aap ko rokke nahin par saathh mei chalta rahe
Harr dum mangge wo dua par shabdd koi na kahe
Saye jaissa chippak kar,hardum dekho wo chale
Aap.........................

Na koi shikva na shikayat,baat hitt ki wo kare
Satya kitna ho jo kaddwa,kehne se wo na darre
Kammi har ek aapki dil mei uske ja khale
Aap......................

Jaan ek ruup 2,dost aissa maniye
Garr mille bass ek bhi,kismat wala janiye
Jaan de kar muskurayein,dost hotte ye bhalle.
Aap......................
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Nice composition Dev sir,

Asd usual my comments in my style.

To continue......................

Asli dost woh jo hamaari khushi pe muskuraye
Hamaare gumm mein jo apne dil ko bhi dubaaye
Har gumm har khushi mein woh saath chale
Aap.................................................................

Bina swarth ka pyar aur apnepan ki chahat ho
Woh dost jo hamaari zindagi ki mukurahat ho
Bina us dost ke ye zindagi khaali sa ghar lage
Aap...................................................................

Waqt ki har dhoop mein woh hamaari chhhaya bane
Jab koi bhi saath naa de woh hamaara saaya bane
Aise dost par hum apni zindagi kurbaan kar chale
Aap.......................................................................
 
Mind to karna hi padega Sampooran bhai, otherwise how we can feel the essence of your composition! i mean issme chhipi sadhbhawna ya durbhawna ka patta to mind karne ke baad hi realise hoga , otherwise sir ke upar se jayega.

Dahiyaji aap ne aur Vijay bhai ne jis dost ki kalpana ki hai wo to dahiyaji aapki jiwan sangini, yani patni hi ho sakti hein. Is it not true? If that is the truth then i am yet to see a post from this great lady Darshana Dahiyaji. Bashrte kisi aur naam se na likhti hon, aur kaka Hathrashi ki patni ki tarah aapko iss site par kakji hi address karti hon!
 
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spdeshwal said:
Mind to karna hi padega Sampooran bhai, otherwise how we can feel the essence of your composition! i mean issme chhipi sadhbhawna ya durbhawna ka patta to mind karne ke baad hi realise hoga , otherwise sir ke upar se jayega.

Dahiyaji aap ne aur Vijay bhai ne jis dost ki kalpana ki hai wo to dahiyaji aapki jiwan sangini, yani patni hi ho sakti hein. Is it not true? If that is the truth then i am yet to see a post from this great lady Darshana Dahiyaji. Bashrte kisi aur naam se na likhti hon, aur kaka Hathrashi ki patni ki tarah aapko iss site par kakji hi address karti hon!
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Ristedaar,baat ye hei ki she just don't like to write here as she is a reserve sort of person.I wish she could in any manner....Kaka keh kei ya kuchh aur....she is different...ha..ha..ha.She is my critic for sure......What is there in your THIS jatland.....is her popular quote........She really hates people using stupid language at times.....other day some nice fellow had wrtten some nice abuses about my whole family and about her too and she was so upset that she almost issued a FATWA for me......Thats how these people behave..and call themselves JAT....SHAME was thus the buzz.It took me a lots of convincing that some people are born and brought up like this and they can not improve as they are beyond economical and social repairs.....and hence one should have a GENDDA skin while being a part of Jatland.

Anyway i will request her to say a few words sometimes in future.Thanks any way.
 
vijay said:
Nice composition Dev sir,

Asd usual my comments in my style.

To continue......................

Asli dost woh jo hamaari khushi pe muskuraye
Hamaare gumm mein jo apne dil ko bhi dubaaye
Har gumm har khushi mein woh saath chale
Aap.................................................................

Bina swarth ka pyar aur apnepan ki chahat ho
Woh dost jo hamaari zindagi ki mukurahat ho
Bina us dost ke ye zindagi khaali sa ghar lage
Aap...................................................................

Waqt ki har dhoop mein woh hamaari chhhaya bane
Jab koi bhi saath naa de woh hamaara saaya bane
Aise dost par hum apni zindagi kurbaan kar chale
Aap.......................................................................
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ATTI SUNDDER VIJAY.
 
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