Sundu Ki Gindoo

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devdahiya

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Sundu ne ek geind [ball] banai
Dekhe thi unne dhyan te TAI
Ghar ke sarre kapde padde
kattar kar ke nyare-2

GINDOO [Ball made of cloth] ban gi bhote AANDY
Pher wo lyaya tod ke dandi
Dandi thi aage te aadi
Nyu bolya KHULIYA [stick] se Dadi

Dost kar liye saare kathhe
Karan lag gya hansi-thathhe
Gindoo dhar ke marya torr [hit]
Hudde mach gya bhoonda shor

Sabne Sundu kandhhe thhaya
Ground ka poora chakkar lagya
Nyu boley kya Gindoo banai
Rang-birangi Kattar lai...mhare te ya dil ne bhaai.
 
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devdahiya said:
GINDOO ban gi bhote AANDY
Pher wo lyaya tod ke dandi
Dandi thi aage te aadi
Nyu bolya KHULIYA se Dadi
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Very nice! specially the stanza above... I guess, similarly the Nursery rhymes in Jattu can be made.

vinod
 
Vinod thanx

vinodks said:
Very nice! specially the stanza above... I guess, similarly the Nursery rhymes in Jattu can be made.

vinod
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Thanx Vinod, i will create smething special in jattu shortly.
 
Gindoo uski paat gi

Gindoo uski paat gi, Sundu huya udaas
Sare bachche kehan lage, bhai khel ka hogya naas
Khel ka hogya naas, Gindoo ibb kuun banawe
Saree bole ek surr,gindoo tei Sundu-e lyawe.


Udass balkan ne dekh ke, Sundu pohncha ghar
Maa ki chundari paad di, Kar ke jhar-e jhar
Kar ke jhar-e jhar Gindoo une ek aur banai
Tagyan te thee gathh wa,puri majboot channai


Tawla sa ja pohonch gya, pher maar diya Torr
Le-2, Le-2 ho gai, bhoonda machya shor
Bhoonda machya shor, khel pher huya todd ka
SUNDU bhai chhora tha yo JATT KHODD ka.
 
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devdahiya said:
Gindoo uski paat gi, Sundu huya udaas
Sare bachche kehan lage, bhai khel ka hogya naas
Khel ka hogya naas, Gindoo ibb kuun banawe
Saree bole ek bei,gindoo tei Sundu-e lyawe.


Udass balkan ne dekh ke, Sundu pohncha ghar
Maa ki chundari paad di, Kar ke jhar-e jhar
Kar ke jhar-e jhar Gindoo une ek aur banai
Tagyan te thee gathh wa,puri majboot channai


Tawla sa ja pohonch gya, pher maar diya Torr
Le-2, Le-2 ho gai, bhoonda machya shor
Bhoonda machya shor, khel pher huya todd ka
SUNDU bhai chhora tha yo JATT KHODD ka.
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Dahiya saab, bahut hee sundar kavita hai...aapki kalpna ka jawab nahi...

Lekin ye Sundu hai kya bala? Is it a very common Jat name in Haryana?
 
Sundala

arun_shamli said:
Dahiya saab, bahut hee sundar kavita hai...aapki kalpna ka jawab nahi...

Lekin ye Sundu hai kya bala? Is it a very common Jat name in Haryana?
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Bhai pyar mei bachhe nei SUNDALA {sundu ]keh diya karte purane jammane mei. Infact Navel ko SUUND bolte hein aur pehle kaffi bachhon ke SUUND badde huya karte[may be due to improper pruning of the navel at the time of birth. Issliye bachhon ko SUNDU/Sundala bol diya karte.
 
Maa ne dekhi chundaddi

Jib maa ne dekhi chundaddi, patti paddi ek aur
Nyu boli re Sunddale, hade-e chalya jorr
Nass karne ne kar giri,chundaddi jhiram-jhir
Kissa Sundalla jann diya,phoot gai takdeer.

Sundu sarri sune tha, bolya sunn meri maa
Galti hogi mere te,tu chho mei matna aa
Chho mei matna aa, chundaddi nai mei lyaun
Gindoo bina balka ne,Kyukar khilaoon

Suun Sundu ki baat,galle wo maa ne laya
Bhar ke bakhora ek, ekdum doodh pilaya
Nyu boli tu beshak padd chundari saari
Par banni rhe ya pakki thari sabki yaari.
 
devdahiya said:
Nyu boley kya Gindoo banai
Rang-birangi Kattar lai
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What a feeling Dev bhai!!

Hope these 'Jattu' poems could be included in studies somehow!!

Really relates to our culture :)

Try to get it published through 'Haryana Education Board'.
 
Bahooot khob Dahiya Sahab!
Aapne bachpan ki yaad diladi!

Aur dashare ke aas pass to Gindoo Khulia khoob khelte the.
Kabhi2 iske chakar mai pitai bhi hoti thi. khelte 2 bhool jate ki bhains bhi paani pilani thi aur pher pitai hoti.

Keep it up and cheers!
 
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lya---jawaab is ka..

DAHIYA ji ya to sachhiye la jawaab hai, itni kasooti banauee ak bas K bataoon.

keep it going (TITLE "SUNDU ki GINDOOO") dis is multi ******............

CHEERS
 
Highly Grateful To All Members

I am really moved by the kind gesture of all members who bothered to comment out here. It will inspire me to improve further. Let me take this poem further and i am sanguine that you all will enjoy it.



Sundu ne pher ek din, Chun dalli ek teem
Ground napp diya hockey ka, rach di ek scheme.
Rach di ek scheme team unne 2 banwa di
aachhi-2 gindoo aur khuliya tudwa di.


Gaam padoshi mei ja ke, kar diya ek elan
2 mhine mei aa jyaio, je dehi mei ho jyan
Je dehi mei ho jyan,Khel hoga Gindoo ka
Jo harrega wohe,haqdaar hoga lindoo ka.


Kar ke ne challenge,Sundu gaam apne mei aaya
Sare khiladdi kathhe kar ke,Sab kim samjhaya
Samjhaya ak jan laga ke karo practice
Na te hojyange hum,tayen-2 fiss.


Raldhu pohnchya team ne le Sundu ke gaam
Hogya khel Gindoo ka,hui pher Bhadaam-2
Bajji khuliya tagddi,Talli khoob thi Bajji
Team Sundu ki jeet gai, sab hogye rajji.
 
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Oye Hoye re.... ND Taaga daaba reh gya tha....Dhayavaad Maneet....

K Likha sei Dev sir aap ne... Ghee sa ghaal diya.. Bhot e badhiya....


GInDDOOO... KILKII........... Ha ha ha ha ha hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
 
LE BHAI TUM NEI YA SUNDDU AALI KAVITA FERR JINDDA KARDI SEI TEI MEI BHI ISS NEI DABBAN NA DYUN IBB......Ya Kavita merre jigar ke ghanni najdeek bhi sei. Ibb tahin aap nei dekhya akk Sunddu nei kyukkar Gindoo banai arr gaam ke ballak saare khelan laye arr ussnei kyukkar ghar aalyan ke latte padd diye par SUNDDU ki TEAM SPIRITS,COMRADSHIP,ORGANISING SKILLS,HELPING AND KIND ATTITUDE AND OFCOURSE LEADERSHIP TRAITS KHUBB UBHAR KE AAYE.Ibb Jib SUNDDU KI TEAM GINDOO[HOCKEY] ke game mei dussre gaam ki team[jiska captain Raldhhu tha] tein jeet gi tei pher ke huya suno:


Team jeet ki Sunddu ki,gaam nei khushi mannai
Badde-chhotte denn lagge Sunddu nei badhhai


Sunddu bolya Raldhhu tein,tum aaj mharre mehmaan
Tum aaye ginddo khelan hadde,bohot karya ehsaan
Bohot krya ehsaan,aaj tharri mauj karaun
Halwa-puri,doodhh,santtre tamnei khawauun
Bajwawan ke dholl,ragnni ibb sunnai
Aakhir tum sau mharre gwahnddi bhai
Badde......................


Raldhhu rajji ho gya,pohonch gaye choppadd
Nai ke nei dholl kai bandhh dai rafftar
Bandhh dai raftaar,prantt halwe ki aai
Sarya nei Halwa-arr purri chhikk-2 khai
Pher raggni sarru hui,unchchi thhai tekk
Pachchhe tein koe kehen lagya...bhai tatti-2 sekk
Samma kassutta bandhh gaya,jannu badda ho tyohar
Sarpanch gaam ka nyu bolya, bhai khello barram-baar
Khello barram-baar aachhi ya aadatt lai
Nyu bolya re Sunddle kya team bannai

Badde.................
 
Wah wah kaka tod kar diya sundu ne bi

wah kaka aapki tareef ke liye mere pass na koi kavita hai na koi shabd

lekin aapke naam ka ruka mein bhi guhand mein maar ke aaun soon

ek kise mein jor ho to kaka gel shabdo ki kushti kar lyo aaj nahi to agle mahine aa jaiye

BRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
 
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