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Sunddu 11 saal ka hogya ar ghar kyan nei school nahin bhejya.Dehi ka lamba-tagdda sunddu ek din khet mah tei ulta aawe tha tei apne hann-diwaal balkan nei school mei te aata dekh ke DUKHEE hogya aur sidhha apne BABBU dhore rownta pohonch gya aur ke bolya:


Babbu re mera naam likha de, mei bhi padhhan janga
Ghee dharwa ke rotti lejyan, taffree ke mah khanga

Sathhi mere sare padhh ge,mei hai pachhe reh gya
Padhhe bina ke jindgi babbu ya LAKHMI bahmann keh gya
Kayda lyade, Takhti lyade,Tadke pakka janga.
Ghee dharwa ke......................................

Teri mheshya nei maar gira mei, chhalle hathan mei padge
Nhae-dhoe bina dekh mere, sare latte bi sidd gye
Bhar ke balti pittal aali, tatte panni tei nhanga.
Ghee dharwa ke............................

Angrezi bi sikhunga mei, JATLAND pei aana se
Padhhe likhyan tei maroon gappe, duur gaam te jana se
Aachhi si mei karoon nokkari, beithh jhajh mei janga
Ghee dharwa ke.
 
Very inspiring Dahiyaji!

Ghi dharwa ke roti leyjna....
Vapas anne tak malai bhi to kadawani mai upar milegi tayar!

Dahiya sahab bachpan ki yad diladi.
School mai lejate rotiyno mai nuni ghi aur vapas akar khand- malai.

Aasman mai udte jahaj ne dekh ke sundu kahta hoga wo ja mere bhiyani aale tau ka chhora vinod, mai bhi emrika ja-unga pad likh ke.
 
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Dear Dahiya ji:
this poem can bring social change; you are very original and real.
Please continue your good work.
Best and regards,
Anmol.
 
accha likha hai jee! It is good and inspiring!

Abhimanyu Phougat
 
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devdahiya said:
Sunddu 11 saal ka hogya ar ghar kyan nei school nahin bhejya.Dehi ka lamba-tagdda sunddu ek din khet mah tei ulta aawe tha tei apne hann-diwaal balkan nei school mei te aata dekh ke DUKHEE hogya aur sidhha apne BABBU dhore rownta pohonch gya aur ke bolya:


Babbu re mera naam likha de, mei bhi padhhan janga
Ghee dharwa ke rotti lejyan, taffree ke mah khanga

Sathhi mere sare padhh ge,mei hai pachhe reh gya
Padhhe bina ke jindgi babbu ya LAKHMI bahmann keh gya
Kayda lyade, Takhti lyade,Tadke pakka janga.
Ghee dharwa ke......................................

Teri mheshya nei maar gira mei, chhalle hathan mei padge
Nhae-dhoe bina dekh mere, sare latte bi sidd gye
Bhar ke balti pittal aali, tatte panni tei nhanga.
Ghee dharwa ke............................

Angrezi bi sikhunga mei, JATLAND pei aana se
Padhhe likhyan tei maroon gappe, duur gaam te jana se
Aachhi si mei karoon nokkari, beithh jhajh mei janga
Ghee dharwa ke.
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bhai sundu,,,,,,wsh u luk. u mst trvl by A,plane 1 day.
 
Thanx To All

ratananmol said:
Dear Dahiya ji:
this poem can bring social change; you are very original and real.
Please continue your good work.
Best and regards,
Anmol.
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thank you so much to all of you. However it happens to be a first public appreciation from bhai Ratan Anmol and hence a special hearty thanx for him. There is no words like appreciation. Thanx Ratan once again.
 
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