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yado k is safar me bahut tanha h hum
dil poochta h kaha h vo kaha h hum
jalti h aas ban ke bati bin diye ki
kyonki h ummedo k jhonke
ban ke h hava oske sang
jee rahi hu jaise m intzaar m tere
gin gin k din
koi aur hoti to mar jaati ab tak
kab ki bin aas umeed bin
tum ban gaye ho mrigtrishna meri
na jaane kab hogi is hirni ki bhaga daudi poori
 
Yaadon ka hai jhurmutt fir bhi tanha hum
Bheedd bhare shaher me akele aur tanha hum

kaddve ateet ki smritiyan hain kitni madhur
honslaa nahi toota chahe the tanha hum

Saath le liya chalna chaha jisne sath
bana liya karwan aur gubar raha tanha

Khushi me the saath hasney wale bohot
ansoo jabb bahe to they hum tanha

kah-kahon ki goonj me dab gayi khamoshi
jindagi ka falsafa tanhai aur hum bhi tanha


 
Bheed me bhi rehta hun veeraon ke sahare,
Jaise koi mandir kisi gaon ke kinare

patjhad sa ban baitha hun yahan....
Ab nahi aas bhi ki aayengi baharein.....
 
Smiles out my heart with an intensity it has never known​
touching my hand is every flower, fallen or budding, crushed or broken..​
kissing are these lips now every sweet kid that passes by​
loving Is this heart the nature of my lord completely​
knowing this life is of love n happiness is this girl in me​
blessed is she to have your love so unworldly​
mysterious is this feeling of being in love​
when it seems like you can never get enough​
didn’t knew that my prayers were ever this strong​
but​
oh boy​
this gifted love has to be you…​
​


Seeing you.. feeling you.. while walking thus I in every possible expression of love​
Always feeling even more loved while pursuing those lovely words of your love​
Wonder do I always when i think of you..how is you. and.made only of love​
Excited this heart then moves on smiling somewhere hiding in front of the teachers​
Somewhere among the group of friends​
Somewhere still in my soul..staying as a lovely secret…​
Oh boy​
This joyful n secret love has to you…​
​
akanksha..​
​
ritu said:
yado k is safar me bahut tanha h hum
dil poochta h kaha h vo kaha h hum
jalti h aas ban ke bati bin diye ki
kyonki h ummedo k jhonke
ban ke h hava oske sang
jee rahi hu jaise m intzaar m tere
gin gin k din
koi aur hoti to mar jaati ab tak
kab ki bin aas umeed bin
tum ban gaye ho mrigtrishna meri
na jaane kab hogi is hirni ki bhaga daudi poori
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akanksha said:
Smiles out my heart with an intensity it has never known

touching my hand is This joyful n secret love has to you…​


akanksha..​

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very nice akanksha bebe.too good:)
 
good ritu !!!

ritu said:
yado k is safar me bahut tanha h hum
dil poochta h kaha h vo kaha h hum
jalti h aas ban ke bati bin diye ki
kyonki h ummedo k jhonke
ban ke h hava oske sang
jee rahi hu jaise m intzaar m tere
gin gin k din
koi aur hoti to mar jaati ab tak
kab ki bin aas umeed bin
tum ban gaye ho mrigtrishna meri
na jaane kab hogi is hirni ki bhaga daudi poori
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kaabil-ey-taarif,,,,,,keep it up ritu,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

aur in dusryaan ney nu kahuu su,,,,,,, kisey kavita,, ghazal ,, nazm ney sunn key daad diya karein,,,,,, naa ki aapni bakwaas baasi bore,,pakau shayari chepya kardey,,,,,:cool: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: ,,,, people learn to react in the expected way ..........:mad: :mad: :rolleyes: :p
 
Din jaldi jaldi dhalta hai....
Yeh dekh thaka din ka panthi bhi...
Jaldi jaldi chalta hai....
Mujhse milne ko kaun vikal???
Main hun kiske hit chanchal??
Yeh bhaav shitil karta pag ko....
Bharta ur me vihvalta hai.....
Din jaldi jaldi dhalta hai.......
 
Nice thread and some nice postings too.


Bahaarein aai aur hansa kar wapas chali gai
Ab veeran sa ye gulshan hai aur tanha hum

Beech raah mein humsafar ne saath chhoda
Bahut door hamari manzil hai aur tanha hum

Din dhal raha hai ab shaam hone wali hai
Fir se wahi lambi kaali raat aur tanha hum

Pukar rahen kai phool lekin humen woh kanta chahiye
Hazaaro chehron ki is bheed mein tanha hum

Dekhen kismat ab aur kya rang dikhaati hai
Ye zindagi abaad hogi ya rahenge tanha hum
 
Here is a beautiful song by only australian singer i like ...Pete Murray
Its in a bit different context but its worth reading......

And so it goes another lonely day
Your savin time but your miles away
Your fly was drownin in some bitter tea
For seeing lost opportunity

Find your mirror go and look inside
And see the talent you always hide
Don't go kidd yourself well not today
Satisfaction's not to far away

Hold on now your exits here
It's waiting just for you
Don't pause too long
It's fading now
It's ending all too soon you'll see
Soon you'll see
Your coffee's warm but your milk is sour
Life is short but your here to flower
Dream yourself along another day
Never miss opportunity
Don't be scared of what you cannot see
Your only fear is possibility
Never wonder what the hell went wrong
Your second chance may never come along
Hold on now your exits here
It's waiting just for you
Don't pause too long
It's fading now
It's ending all too soon you'll see
Soon you'll see
Hold on now your exits here
It's waiting just for you
Don't pause too long
It's fading now
It's ending all too soon you'll see
Soon you'll see ..........
 
ritu said:
yado k is safar me bahut tanha h hum
dil poochta h kaha h vo kaha h hum
jalti h aas ban ke bati bin diye ki
kyonki h ummedo k jhonke
ban ke h hava oske sang
jee rahi hu jaise m intzaar m tere
gin gin k din
koi aur hoti to mar jaati ab tak
kab ki bin aas umeed bin
tum ban gaye ho mrigtrishna meri
na jaane kab hogi is hirni ki bhaga daudi poori
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very good composition,,,, ritu di
 
is tanhai k maare h bahut yaha
bheed kya mahfil kya ye sab jagah ake satati h
dukhbhre attet ki yaado me kuch to sukhad hoga
jisko yaad karke jeena ab sahaj hoga
saathi to milte rahte h is safar
par is tanhai ko todne wale virale hote h
haste h lab par ye tanhai bhitar se rulati h
hasi ke kilkio me chupana chao phir bhi aake
ye chupke se aankhe nam kar jaati h

sunitahooda said:
Yaadon ka hai jhurmutt fir bhi tanha hum
Bheedd bhare shaher me akele aur tanha hum

kaddve ateet ki smritiyan hain kitni madhur
honslaa nahi toota chahe the tanha hum

Saath le liya chalna chaha jisne sath
bana liya karwan aur gubar raha tanha

Khushi me the saath hasney wale bohot
ansoo jabb bahe to they hum tanha

kah-kahon ki goonj me dab gayi khamoshi
jindagi ka falsafa tanhai aur hum bhi tanha
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