Teri Aas....
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choudharyneelam
Banned
WAH!! WAH!!
kya khoob likhi....Sir aap sacchi mein bahaut bahaut accha likhte ho...bilkul Dev Dahiya Sir jaise...aur ab to aur bhi great great writers dekh rahi hun main yahan...jaise ki RK Sir, Dharmpal Sir, Bharti, Swati, Akanksha, Prashant, Hamendra, Monika, Ritu, Amardeep hooda (Addy), Shamsher, Vijay, Rupi, Yash, Deepak Sejwal, Satender, Mr. Dangi (naam yaad nahin), Deepak choudhry ki bhi ek do baar dekhi hain.....kis kis ka naam likhun yahan main....list kaafi lambhi ho jaayegi aur kuch ke to naam bhi yaad nahin aa rahe....all are great writers....just fabulous ...keep it up you all guys...
Oops i forgot to mention my Bhaiya's name here....Sitaram Jakhar...i love his poetry also...keep writing
kya khoob likhi....Sir aap sacchi mein bahaut bahaut accha likhte ho...bilkul Dev Dahiya Sir jaise...aur ab to aur bhi great great writers dekh rahi hun main yahan...jaise ki RK Sir, Dharmpal Sir, Bharti, Swati, Akanksha, Prashant, Hamendra, Monika, Ritu, Amardeep hooda (Addy), Shamsher, Vijay, Rupi, Yash, Deepak Sejwal, Satender, Mr. Dangi (naam yaad nahin), Deepak choudhry ki bhi ek do baar dekhi hain.....kis kis ka naam likhun yahan main....list kaafi lambhi ho jaayegi aur kuch ke to naam bhi yaad nahin aa rahe....all are great writers....just fabulous ...keep it up you all guys...
Oops i forgot to mention my Bhaiya's name here....Sitaram Jakhar...i love his poetry also...keep writing
Thanks to Neelam..
Neelam..thanks is the appropriate word for your activeness.
Its really a compliment for you that you are such an active member
that you make it a point to visit at least twice a day in the forum,
see new posts and put your posts or encourage other members
for their expressions...
It is said that you need a lot of goodness in one to put your expressions in a
positive manner...you deserve to be the awarded the title of "Nigtingale of the Jatland" rightly. Sometimes people like good thing, they appreciate but dont take pains to expression their feelings, due to various factors. In the crowd of such people who come forward are called great ones! You are such a great person in my eyes.
You know I have written so many poetry in Hindi and English, but I did not expressed my self earlier. Seeing the poems in the forum, I thought of posting my creations here...and your encouragement boosted my morale.
Thanks...again and again to Neelam and others who put their comments....
WAH!! WAH!!
kya khoob likhi....Sir aap sacchi mein bahaut bahaut accha likhte ho...bilkul Dev Dahiya Sir jaise...aur ab to aur bhi great great writers dekh rahi hun main yahan...jaise ki RK Sir, Dharmpal Sir, Bharti, Swati, Akanksha, Prashant,
Oops i forgot to mention my Bhaiya's name here....Sitaram Jakhar...i love his poetry also...keep writing
Neelam..thanks is the appropriate word for your activeness. Its really a compliment for you that you are such an active member
that you make it a point to visit at least twice a day in the forum,
see new posts and put your posts or encourage other members
for their expressions...
It is said that you need a lot of goodness in one to put your expressions in a
positive manner...you deserve to be the awarded the title of "Nigtingale of the Jatland" rightly. Sometimes people like good thing, they appreciate but dont take pains to expression their feelings, due to various factors. In the crowd of such people who come forward are called great ones! You are such a great person in my eyes.
You know I have written so many poetry in Hindi and English, but I did not expressed my self earlier. Seeing the poems in the forum, I thought of posting my creations here...and your encouragement boosted my morale.
Thanks...again and again to Neelam and others who put their comments....
choudharyneelam
Banned
Kisi ki khushboo meri saanson ke liye khaas hai
Doorr rahke bhi kyun lagta wo paas hai
Duniya rangeen bani jab se paya wo ahsaas hai
Kisi ko apna bananeki iss dil ko kitni aas hai
Doorr rahke bhi kyun lagta wo paas hai
Duniya rangeen bani jab se paya wo ahsaas hai
Kisi ko apna bananeki iss dil ko kitni aas hai
choudharyneelam
Banned
Its really a compliment for you that you are such an active member
that you make it a point to visit at least twice a day in the forum,
see new posts and put your posts or encourage other members
for their expressions...
It is said that you need a lot of goodness in one to put your expressions in a
positive manner...you deserve to be the awarded the title of "Nigtingale of the Jatland" rightly. Sometimes people like good thing, they appreciate but dont take pains to expression their feelings, due to various factors. In the crowd of such people who come forward are called great ones! You are such a great person in my eyes.
You know I have written so many poetry in Hindi and English, but I did not expressed my self earlier. Seeing the poems in the forum, I thought of posting my creations here...and your encouragement boosted my morale.
Thanks...again and again to Neelam and others who put their comments....
Sir everyone here is that nice as much as you are considering me...see you too made me feel good by such sweet replies like others do...i find everyone here very sweet and nice and really it is so...many members just read it and appreciate that in their hearts as they are having busy schedules...agar sab meri tarah free ho jaayen to phir dekhna aapko kitne saare members aake appreciate karte hain....so sir consider everyone equal to me....every person here is great in one or the other sense....you yourself are also great for being so nice to express your thankful feeling like this....so this whole Jatland is great
Regards
Neelam
choudharyneelam
Banned
Zindagi ki kuch aisi hi baat hai
Kahin dhoop to kahin barsaat hai
Bichhad ke bhi jab mil jaayen tab
Socho isse khoobsurat kya baat hai
Kahin dhoop to kahin barsaat hai
Bichhad ke bhi jab mil jaayen tab
Socho isse khoobsurat kya baat hai
Ehsaas ke sahare....
Kisne jana hai zindagi ke ajab khelon ko,
Kahin dhoop aur barsaat ke jhamelon ko,
Bichudte hain vo jo dil se door hote hain,
Ham to bas ehsaas ke sahare hi jeete hain!
Kisne jana hai zindagi ke ajab khelon ko,
Kahin dhoop aur barsaat ke jhamelon ko,
Bichudte hain vo jo dil se door hote hain,
Ham to bas ehsaas ke sahare hi jeete hain!
choudharyneelam
Banned
Zindagi to aakhiri saans tak
Kuch na kuch sikhati hai
Kisi ke liye ye ehsaas
Ek din zindagi ban jaati hai
Kuch na kuch sikhati hai
Kisi ke liye ye ehsaas
Ek din zindagi ban jaati hai
Jo nasha hai...
Zindagi ki baat kya lamhon ko bhi jeete hain,
Jyada nahin to kam sahi thodi see pee lete hain,
Peena meri fitrat rahai thi yun to nahin kabhi,
Jo nasha hai in aankhon main vo tha kab kahin!
Zindagi ki baat kya lamhon ko bhi jeete hain,
Jyada nahin to kam sahi thodi see pee lete hain,
Peena meri fitrat rahai thi yun to nahin kabhi,
Jo nasha hai in aankhon main vo tha kab kahin!
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choudharyneelam
Banned
good going Sir...keep writing!!
..Vo shaam bhi
Thi vo shaam bhi tere hi naam,
Hai yeh sama bhi tera ghulam,
Raat ke andhere bhi tujhse hain,
Ujalon mai bhi tujhe khojte hain!
Chand taron ki chandni tere naam,
Din raat ki nazdikiyan tere naam,
Kamyabi ki har manzil naam tere,
Zindagi ka har mukam ho paas tere!
Zindagi ki baat kya lamhon ko bhi jeete hain,
Jyada nahin to kam sahi thodi see pee lete hain,
Peena meri fitrat rahai thi yun to nahin kabhi,
Jo nasha hai in aankhon main vo tha kab kahin!
Thi vo shaam bhi tere hi naam,
Hai yeh sama bhi tera ghulam,
Raat ke andhere bhi tujhse hain,
Ujalon mai bhi tujhe khojte hain!
Chand taron ki chandni tere naam,
Din raat ki nazdikiyan tere naam,
Kamyabi ki har manzil naam tere,
Zindagi ka har mukam ho paas tere!
choudharyneelam
Banned
Thi vo shaam bhi tere hi naam,
Hai yeh sama bhi tera ghulam,
Raat ke andhere bhi tujhse hain,
Ujalon mai bhi tujhe khojte hain!
Chand taron ki chandni tere naam,
Din raat ki nazdikiyan tere naam,
Kamyabi ki har manzil naam tere,
Zindagi ka har mukam ho paas tere!
well written Kanu
Is talash main
Originally Posted by kanu01
Thi vo shaam bhi tere hi naam,
Hai yeh sama bhi tera ghulam,
Raat ke andhere bhi tujhse hain,
Ujalon mai bhi tujhe khojte hain!
Chand taron ki chandni tere naam,
Din raat ki nazdikiyan tere naam,
Kamyabi ki har manzil naam tere,
Zindagi ka har mukam ho paas tere!
Har shaam ka hai alag vajood yahan
Koi kisi ka ghulam nahin hai yahan,
Andhere hote gar bhul jaane ke liye,
Ujale yaad aate na muskurate huay!
Chand taron ko yun hi chhaya rahne do,
Apni khoobsurati ko naya naam dene do,
Kamyabi vo jo mile apne karam se yadi
Is talash main thera hun mukam pe abhi!
well written Kanu
Originally Posted by kanu01
Thi vo shaam bhi tere hi naam,
Hai yeh sama bhi tera ghulam,
Raat ke andhere bhi tujhse hain,
Ujalon mai bhi tujhe khojte hain!
Chand taron ki chandni tere naam,
Din raat ki nazdikiyan tere naam,
Kamyabi ki har manzil naam tere,
Zindagi ka har mukam ho paas tere!
Har shaam ka hai alag vajood yahan
Koi kisi ka ghulam nahin hai yahan,
Andhere hote gar bhul jaane ke liye,
Ujale yaad aate na muskurate huay!
Chand taron ko yun hi chhaya rahne do,
Apni khoobsurati ko naya naam dene do,
Kamyabi vo jo mile apne karam se yadi
Is talash main thera hun mukam pe abhi!
choudharyneelam
Banned
Originally Posted by kanu01
Thi vo shaam bhi tere hi naam,
Hai yeh sama bhi tera ghulam,
...........................
Kamyabi ki har manzil naam tere,
Zindagi ka har mukam ho paas tere!
Har shaam ka hai alag vajood yahan
Koi kisi ka ghulam nahin hai yahan,
Andhere hote gar bhul jaane ke liye,
Ujale yaad aate na muskurate huay!
Chand taron ko yun hi chhaya rahne do,
Apni khoobsurati ko naya naam dene do,
Kamyabi vo jo mile apne karam se yadi
Is talash main thera hun mukam pe abhi!
Good reply to her post
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