Teri julfo se hawa ab bhi to chalti hogi

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teri julfo se hawa ab bhi chalti hogi
kisi na kisi ki tabiyat to machalti hogi

baharo me mera jikr to hota hoga
khusbuo ko meri kami to khalti hogi

chhod aaye ham jis jahan ko tanhai me
us jahan me ab bhid to nikalti hogi

tere samne hai kai rasty tu kidhar bhi jaye
tod kar wada tu girkar sabhalti to hogi

main kar luinga khudkhushi 'Benaam'
jab tere ghar se teri doli nikalti hogi



Santosh Benaam
 
कब तक बाँहें फैलायेगे ये अंधेरों के मौसम
काली रात के बाद सुबह निकलती तो होगी ||

ये वक्त कब रुकता है यहाँ किसी के भी लिए
प्यार के बिना भी ये ज़िंदगी चलती तो होगी ||

क्या उम्र भर हम रास्तों पर ही भटकते रहेंगे
मंजिल को पाने की चाहत मचलती तो होगी ||

माना हमें नहीं आई प्यार जताने की अदाये
मगर दिल में कोई ख्वाइश पलती तो होगी ||

तुम चाहे लाख कोशिश करो मुझे भूल जाने की
मेरी याद तेरी गलियों से निकलती तो होगी ||

मेरा नाम यहाँ जब भी जुडा तेरे नाम के साथ
"विजय" के नाम से ये दुनिया जलती तो होगी ||
 
Dear Santosh,

Halanki shero shayari ka zyada shauk nahi hae mujhe, lekin yeh aapse zaroor kehna chahoonga ki likha aapne bahut khoob hae.

Kalam se aapne apni bikhrayein hain moti
jitna sameto utne hee kam hain

Benaam hone ke badle shayad apna naam likha hota toh us naam ko bhi naya aayam mil jaata.

Once again, Bahut khoob. Aise hee likhte rahiye....
 
santoshbenaam said:
teri julfo se hawa ab bhi chalti hogi
kisi na kisi ki tabiyat to machalti hogi

baharo me mera jikr to hota hoga
khusbuo ko meri kami to khalti hogi

chhod aaye ham jis jahan ko tanhai me
us jahan me ab bhid to nikalti hogi

tere samne hai kai rasty tu kidhar bhi jaye
tod kar wada tu girkar sabhalti to hogi

main kar luinga khudkhushi 'Benaam'
jab tere ghar se teri doli nikalti hogi



Santosh Benaam
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Bhai mere gajab ka likhya hai ... er yo Vijay bhai to se ee evergreen ... matta baat si dekhe ja hai ek koe likhe er usae jod bhidaon. Bahut badhiya ...aur aan dyo...
 
Mere khat tere haatho ko jab choote honge,
Meri aankho ki nami tujhme utarti to hogi.......

Meri yaadon ki dor jab tuje khinchti hogi,
Tere chehre pe kuch lakire ubharti to hongi......

Sapno ke raste jab mai tujh tak pahuchta honga,
Mere sparsh ki mithas teri neendo me ghoolti to hogi......

Chalti hogi jab tu taaro ka haath thaame,
Raat ke andhere me tujhe meri parchaai dikhti to hogi......
 
santoshbenaam said:
teri julfo se hawa ab bhi chalti hogi
kisi na kisi ki tabiyat to machalti hogi

baharo me mera jikr to hota hoga
khusbuo ko meri kami to khalti hogi

chhod aaye ham jis jahan ko tanhai me
us jahan me ab bhid to nikalti hogi

tere samne hai kai rasty tu kidhar bhi jaye
tod kar wada tu girkar sabhalti to hogi

main kar luinga khudkhushi 'Benaam'
jab tere ghar se teri doli nikalti hogi



Santosh Benaam
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wah janab...mudduton ke bad fir hawa ka jhonka aayaa...arrey mian zamana badal gaye hai aapke jaane ke baad...

hawa to ub bhi chali hai, magar hain zulfen hizab me
ishq me rahee na wo tadphan, ne wo shola shabab me
kiya batayen, badi mushkil me je rahe hain hum janab,
aajkal bana hua sara zamana, haddi kabab me.

RK^2
 
vaada kiya tha unhone paanchwe din milne ka...
shayad unko kisi ne bataya tha ki jindagi 4 dino ki hai
 
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coolengineer said:
vaada kiya tha unhone paanchwe din milne ka...
shayad unko kisi ne bataya tha ki jindagi 4 dino ki hai
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Nice one dear[height of EITBAAR]


Jab aanssu niklte thhe unke, takuleeff mujhhe bhi hoti thi
Aankhein uski bharti thi,idhhar meri aatamaa roti thi

Ab unka rona baddal gya,kuchh aissa hamein jattate hein
Apne ek thhahakke se wo Dil mein teer chalate hei.
 
Nice One Kaku

devdahiya said:
Jab aanssu niklte thhe unke, takuleeff mujhhe bhi hoti thi
Aankhein uski bharti thi,idhhar meri aatamaa roti thi
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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehte ho Tum.."
 
maniisha said:
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehte ho Tum.."
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Manisha..Thank you so much Bittiya.God bless you.You are a wonderful Person...remain like this only.People like you are rare in our community.....Wish you all the good what my heart possibly can pray to God for.
 
vijay said:
कब तक बाँहें फैलायेगे ये अंधेरों के मौसम
काली रात के बाद सुबह निकलती तो होगी ||

ये वक्त कब रुकता है यहाँ किसी के भी लिए
प्यार के बिना भी ये ज़िंदगी चलती तो होगी ||

क्या उम्र भर हम रास्तों पर ही भटकते रहेंगे
मंजिल को पाने की चाहत मचलती तो होगी ||

माना हमें नहीं आई प्यार जताने की अदाये
मगर दिल में कोई ख्वाइश पलती तो होगी ||
badli sah nahi sakti inta panni ka bhaar
yaha nahi to kahi ne kahi barsati ho hogi

pi jate han aap der raat tak sayari likhte -2
subhah 9-10 baje baad uterti to ho
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bhatera talent lukh raya sai .... sare ke sare kime lukho ke baithe sain....par gajab likha hai sabne.....

"Jab bhi chaha to rone ko ik aansoon na mila"
Bin maange-a-badal kayoon tum baraste hi rahe"
Chand sikoon ki khankhnahat daman main tere"
Or hum ta-umar-a-Tabassum teri aawaz ko taraste hi rahe"
 
devdahiya said:
Manisha..Thank you so much Bittiya.God bless you.You are a wonderful Person...remain like this only.People like you are rare in our community.....Wish you all the good what my heart possibly can pray to God for.
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Thnx for your encouragements Kaka Ji.
I have always strived to perform my best and will do the same in future....:)
 
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