Tu nahi aayega kabhi........

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Wah ! Bahut pyara ! Aapko to shayari aati hai, mai to bas kabi kabi kuch tod mod deti hu ! Ek baat batayengi aap, kya aap apne 'unko' bi apni likhi shayari sunaati hai, jo aapne unke liye likhi ho ?

inke 'wo' ghanne busy rahte hai tame kona 'unke' dhoorre.........;).arr mharri ritu bobbo dhorre bhi tame kona 'untai' sunana ka..yeh to chaa-party main busy rah karre.........:p:)
 
nice ones Shweta ji and Ritu ji :)


and best one by vivek dhankar :D

kilkiiii @ yo ban gaya uske baalkaan ka kaka :D
 
Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................
gotta remember a fantastic song frm black n white era "aayega, aayega, aayega aane waala aayega...aayega..."
 
Jine k liye kisi ek kami ki to talash kar

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................

..Ae Shweta..very touching lines.......Umeed ki shama jalae rahkho....aur agar phir bhi nahi aata uske intjaar ko apne jine ki vajah bana lo..I have read some lines, somewhere..and writing those line here..
Rehne de aasma zamin ki talash kar,
Sab kuch yahi hai na kahi aur talash kar,

Har arzu puri ho to jine ka kya maza,
Jine k liye kisi ek kami ki to talash karan

Rajni Bamel
 
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Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................
..Ae shweta..very touching lines....if this is real..I mean related to your life then i want to write some lines..
aap bhi keyboard aajma lyo lage haatho fir to
 
Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................

..Ae Shweta..very touching lines.......Umeed ki shama jalae rahkho....aur agar phir bhi nahi aata uske intjaar ko apne jine ki vajah bana lo..I have read some lines, somewhere..and writing those line here..
Rehne de aasma zamin ki talash kar,
Sab kuch yahi hai na kahi aur talash kar,
Har arzu puri ho to jine ka kya maza,
Jine k liye kisi ek kami ki to talash karan
Rajni Bamel

Hahaaaaaaa ! thanx for the concerned message ji!

Anyways, these lines r nice!
 
Walking past,
thou had dreams that crashed;
the broken crumble into mud,
smiles shining above the lost;
let the pain be washed

Let the faith be rekindled
:)
 
thanks shweta.ye to meri shyari se darr jaate hai .jab bhi humari ladai hoti hai to oska juwab ek kavita hoti hai.ab to ye alam hai ki kavita ke darr te ladai bhi nahi kartae.:p
Wah ! Bahut pyara ! Aapko to shayari aati hai, mai to bas kabi kabi kuch tod mod deti hu ! Ek baat batayengi aap, kya aap apne 'unko' bi apni likhi shayari sunaati hai, jo aapne unke liye likhi ho ?
 
ha tanne te ghana bera se ki me kitt buzy rahu su.is chaaa party ne te nirre rolle kar diyye .eb dinner party karni padegi.
inke 'wo' ghanne busy rahte hai tame kona 'unke' dhoorre.........;).arr mharri ritu bobbo dhorre bhi tame kona 'untai' sunana ka..yeh to chaa-party main busy rah karre.........:p:)
 
thanks shweta.ye to meri shyari se darr jaate hai .jab bhi humari ladai hoti hai to oska juwab ek kavita hoti hai.ab to ye alam hai ki kavita ke darr te ladai bhi nahi kartae.:p

Hahaaaaaaaaa ! kya baat hai ! par mujhe lagta hai mujhe to aapse ladai karni padi aise to, ab kavita ke liye yehi sahi !:)
 
Hahaaaaaaaaa ! kya baat hai ! par mujhe lagta hai mujhe to aapse ladai karni padi aise to, ab kavita ke liye yehi sahi !:)

thaam donnu aapas main ladai mat kar baithyo..............donnu merri laadli bobbo ho...................ladai ki baat bhi na kar diyo ..simjhi donnu..................
 
mujhe aisa kyo lag raha hi ki aisa kuch Sri Ram Centre ki library mae padha ho?

hey seema..kahin se bhi le lo pur likhi to sahi...dear,ab shweta jaise touching poem to mein likh nahi sakti ......to kahin aur se padke to likhni hi thi....
 
Mere dil ki zameen se guzarte hain jab teri yaadon ke silsile,

To bujhe sapno ki aankhon me ik harkat si hoti hai

Keh nahi sakti kitni sadiyon se jaanti hu tujhe,

Par isi mod se guzarte hue kai umar hain dekhi maine.
 
bahut khubsurat lines :)


Mere dil ki zameen se guzarte hain jab teri yaadon ke silsile,

To bujhe sapno ki aankhon me ik harkat si hoti hai

Keh nahi sakti kitni sadiyon se jaanti hu tujhe,

Par isi mod se guzarte hue kai umar hain dekhi maine.
 
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