Writing a Strange Story

[vijay]

I am not a maven in the field of understanding the meaning of words as you are . So i at times do have to refer to dictionary for meanings.
another reason i look for help from the written text is to look for another sense or interpretation of the word in the context i wish to see.
Anyways , that my personal way of doing things .

Anil, that was in lighter note and you can say my way of doing things. Now plz don't look into dictionary for the meaning of 'lighter" ....

Again i am not as genius as you are to interpret things at such a rapid pace . I hate using BIG words such as loyalty and commitment because to me these words do not have a single or a narrow interpretation and the context in which they are used and the range of areas , emotions , feelings in which they are ascribed to by writers is vast.
If u happen to read my posts carefully , i through the course of my posts and infact in the very neginning did make it clear that normal course of events cannot be moulded in this way.

Neither do i use these words so often or everytime because these words are not just words but a phenomenon that is strongly attached to a person and these words includes the whole character of a person.

But, normal or specific course of events, these words have the same meaning everytime and that doesn't change with situations or circumstances.

I was up for a exception and that is why i dealt it with care far greater than i should have ( at least after your remarks i feel so now).

Every situation is an exceptional case for someone. Agree or not ?

But i have not started doubting my convition as yet so i would like comment on the committment part and would say that instead of pouncing on the husband and humiliating him , we should be a little more spectical about the whole issue and should go for a closer look at things.

Anil, i am not accusing only husband for the whole situation. The girl is playing bigger role than the husband.

And Sir , committment as you say cannot be measured on the scale of just not doing the course of actions like not going further with the relationship with his sister in law.
Committment was utterly broken even when the slightest of the feelings came for another girl .
If we are up here for committment then it has to be present at all four levels of human faculty ( physical , mental , emotional and spiritual ).
If any person ( be it husband or wife in the marriage relationship) even thinks about having a relationship other than the marriage one and thus degreades the very sanctity of the "sacred marriage" , either he is not being a human or if it is , then there must be some very strong forces or causes behind it.
And for sure we are not talking about non humans ( as i believe for persons who break the ties for no reasons and for petty satisfaction , there cannot be any advices [] )here !

Yes, committment is broken for sure.

How can you be so sure that if committment is broken than there must be strong forces or causes behind that as the story only tell us that husband feels 'love' for that girl and the wife is somewhat doubtful about her husband.
Why she has doubts on her husband ? WHY ? Who knows except that wife, maybe the husband is a flirt by nature, or have extra-marital affairs and so on. Maybe husband is not faithful to wife and wife feels insecure. Or maybe the whole case is manipulated to achieve something.

Why to jump into conclusion that husband is not satisfied with her wife and he deserve satisfaction. In your opinion why only husband is getting sympathy. ( Who knows maybe he really deserve it but situation is still not clear untill ) If we want to dig out that why husband is doing so then we must know what is the reason behind wife's behaviour ..... maybe we come across some strange new facts about this STRANGE story.

Now let me ask you this one :
Suppose the man in question is not satisfied ( physically , mentally , emotionally , spiritually , a combination of all or some of these ) and i tell you that he is totally right and committed at his end , does he have to suffer throughout his life ??
IS his satiation of his soul nothing ! Just for the sake of pleasing the society , a soul remains in disarray for some 40 odd years.

You are right here, if the man is not satisfied, all of these( as u say ), he must not suffer throughout his life. But how can you distinguish that he is really satisfied or not. Is that any measure for this. Suppose a person is married for few years and get distracted from his wife, finds someone else and then say that he is not satisfied with his wife and needs someone else in his life.

The qusetion is what is real satisfaction ? Husband demands something from his wife ( maybe right or wrong .... ) and wife can't fulfill that for any reason ..... husband is not satisfied now and need someone else .... right ? because he must not suffer ........ what is suffering according to him ? Not to get his heart's desires ( reachable or unreachable .... right or wrong ..... ) Again who gonna decide that a person is suffering in real or trying to jeopradize things for the sake of selfishness ....

Think it again

 

[manishajhangu]

The character of the husband is someone who has never had affairs in his life but has always wished to get out the situation between his wife and him but never got the courage to due to society and their principles. But by chance this girl comes across (As in roop of bhagwan) and comes into his life to bring happiness back... who knows? How it happens and how others percieve this... but thank u i'm getting to my climax pretty quick with ur discussions which is great... thank u very much! x

 

[ritu]

uff....... if this is just a story then I would say..a very sick imagination.

I am writing a story which is pretty strange but is different... I don't want anyone to take it the wrong way as it is only a story and would like other's views and options...
The story is...

There is a girl who falls in love with her Cousin's husband.. this cousin is long related... But that girl does not say anything to the boy but the boy then tells her how he feels about her in some way and they both end up loving each other... this is true love and somehow shows that this was meant to be but they both don't know what to do??

Is there any ideas that what they could do ?? and what would the climax be??
It has to be a happy ending...

If there are any questions pls do ask i will answer them...

Once again pls don't take this personal its just a story i am trying to write for someone and need views and opinions on what could actually be done to make it better....

 

[ritu]

now i can say 4 sure that this is not just a story.if this guy really unhappy with her wife irrespective of the fact whether this girl rupi bhagwan is there aur not .he should give divorce to her wife first then should go for happiness hunting.

The character of the husband is someone who has never had affairs in his life but has always wished to get out the situation between his wife and him but never got the courage to due to society and their principles. But by chance this girl comes across (As in roop of bhagwan) and comes into his life to bring happiness back... who knows? How it happens and how others percieve this... but thank u i'm getting to my climax pretty quick with ur discussions which is great... thank u very much! x

 

[vijay]

now i can say 4 sure that this is not just a story.

Ab pata chala tumhe ..... itne din baad.... heheheheh

 

[ravileo]

I do not what you want to bring in this story
but before going ahead . You must start another theard
like for ALL JLS WHO FALL IN LOVE ONCE IN LIFE
May be they provide some best ideas

 

[manishajhangu]

now i can say 4 sure that this is not just a story.if this guy really unhappy with her wife irrespective of the fact whether this girl rupi bhagwan is there aur not .he should give divorce to her wife first then should go for happiness hunting.

Hi Ritu ji,
I would like to make this very clear as i did in the beginning of this thread as this is not a real life scenario. It is simply a story which i've set off for people in this forum to give me ideas to finish it off.
I am a student who studies psychology and also working for a bollywood entertainment company. I was asked to write a story on a different type of affair. I had the whole scene and characters ready for it just thought if your ideas or opinions could change my story or give it a new twist.
Once again i recall this is just a story...

Thank you for your time and concern for all the people that thought this was not a story ...

 

[drprax]

Hi Manisha

I read this uncomplete love story two times and came to this point.
This is a kind of blind love or in some way it can be male female attraction.
But as u have informed us that this was a true love there must be true happy ending as well. People talk lots of stuff in their view. So here is my view.


In the end girl must share with the hubby of her cousin sister and discusss all why she felt so and this guy must explain her as hubby have lots promises and responsibilities towards wife. And hopefully these two married people are happy with eachother. Than this blind lover girl should understand and accept it and move away with a happy end with positive gesture. If she still do not accept this view than just for a few while, let her keep herself in place of her cousin sister.

This was a one sided love and blind as well so having no bright future.

This is my own view. Do not take it personally.
Regards

 

[manishajhangu]

Hi there,
I would now like to thank everyone who helped discover and imagine different scenes and viewpoints which many people percieve. I am pretty happy that you all were pretty much happy to share and disscuss your views with me which helped me gain my knowlegde and a better understanding to give my story a positive structure.
This was just a thoery that i was looking at but now i finish this here as it is going on to a different topic... but i will now take this in practical and capture all the moments and reces of these scenes and see where this would take me... i'm just doing my job pls ... i hope u don't mind but once again i would like to thank all you very very very much for contrubuting your options and views ...

Manisha Jhangu

 

[manishajhangu]

I read this uncomplete love story two times and came to this point.
This is a kind of blind love or in some way it can be male female attraction.
But as u have informed us that this was a true love there must be true happy ending as well. People talk lots of stuff in their view. So here is my view.


In the end girl must share with the hubby of her cousin sister and discusss all why she felt so and this guy must explain her as hubby have lots promises and responsibilities towards wife. And hopefully these two married people are happy with eachother. Than this blind lover girl should understand and accept it and move away with a happy end with positive gesture. If she still do not accept this view than just for a few while, let her keep herself in place of her cousin sister.

This was a one sided love and blind as well so having no bright future.

This is my own view. Do not take it personally.
Regards

Thnk u very much, n dnt wri i wnt take it personally

atfer all its just a story

thank u n take cre x

 

[sunitahooda]

Hum ke nuay thook billo rey the Ritu?

now i can say 4 sure that this is not just a story.if this guy really unhappy with her wife irrespective of the fact whether this girl rupi bhagwan is there aur not .he should give divorce to her wife first then should go for happiness hunting.

 

[sunitahooda]

Mai mehsoos kar saku su akk teri jaddi bheenchri sain....par tere jissyan nai standard kaye matlab na bera tai mai single/double/tripple/multi ki definition de kai apna tame na barbaad karna chahti....THIS IS NOT MY STANDARD PROBLEM....ITS YOUR PERCEPTION PROBLEM which differ from PERSON TO PERSON....arr ya post delete hovegi...padh liye tawla sa

you mentioned a word SOCIETY ok! ab apki us double standard multi standard single standard etc etc theories ka ke hoya sunnitta maddamm ji!

 

[ritu]

hahahahhah.

Hum ke nuay thook billo rey the Ritu?

 

[anilsinghd]

uff....... if this is just a story then I would say..a very sick imagination.

What is so sick - ish about the imagination Ritu ?

The more u run away , the more things keep haunting you , facing the hard realities is not sick-ish ness at least !

 

[anilsinghd]

Anil, that was in lighter note and you can say my way of doing things. Now plz don't look into dictionary for the meaning of 'lighter" ....



No i m not looking


Neither do i use these words so often or everytime because these words are not just words but a phenomenon that is strongly attached to a person and these words includes the whole character of a person.

But, normal or specific course of events, these words have the same meaning everytime and that doesn't change with situations or circumstances.

Hmmm......



Every situation is an exceptional case for someone. Agree or not ?


Agree , and that is why every situation at least needs some attention at least , it should not be disposed off so easily.


Anil, i am not accusing only husband for the whole situation. The girl is playing bigger role than the husband.


I know the girl u r referring to , my point was that may be the wife itself has some or may be big role as well !



Yes, committment is broken for sure.

How can you be so sure that if committment is broken than there must be strong forces or causes behind that as the story only tell us that husband feels 'love' for that girl and the wife is somewhat doubtful about her husband.
Why she has doubts on her husband ? WHY ? Who knows except that wife, maybe the husband is a flirt by nature, or have extra-marital affairs and so on. Maybe husband is not faithful to wife and wife feels insecure. Or maybe the whole case is manipulated to achieve something.

Why to jump into conclusion that husband is not satisfied with her wife and he deserve satisfaction. In your opinion why only husband is getting sympathy. ( Who knows maybe he really deserve it but situation is still not clear untill ) If we want to dig out that why husband is doing so then we must know what is the reason behind wife's behaviour ..... maybe we come across some strange new facts about this STRANGE story.


how ! why ?why ? who ! may be ! why ? why ? if ! may be !
These are the words u used in above para , now we ( both of us are so unsure about things , then dont u think that to be inquisitive and to learn and know more about the situation or problem is the better way to go ?
I did not jump into the conclusion at all , infact i was treating all ( to the best of my knowledge and abilities ) possibilities rather than most of the people who responded who just disposed off the matter in a ziffy ! GENIUS's i must say
Being inquisitive is a nice trait i guess !

You are right here, if the man is not satisfied, all of these( as u say ), he must not suffer throughout his life. But how can you distinguish that he is really satisfied or not. Is that any measure for this. Suppose a person is married for few years and get distracted from his wife, finds someone else and then say that he is not satisfied with his wife and needs someone else in his life.

The qusetion is what is real satisfaction ? Husband demands something from his wife ( maybe right or wrong .... ) and wife can't fulfill that for any reason ..... husband is not satisfied now and need someone else .... right ? because he must not suffer ........ what is suffering according to him ? Not to get his heart's desires ( reachable or unreachable .... right or wrong ..... ) Again who gonna decide that a person is suffering in real or trying to jeopradize things for the sake of selfishness ....

Think it again

Again lots of " ? " and no big conclusions , i am still up for adiscussion and learning of facts regarding the story ! No conclusions still , let the discussion be ON if anyone wants to ! I am all ears !