Ye Dil Udaas Hai.....................

[reenakhatri]

Ye Dil Udaas Hai..

Jaane Kya Baat Hai,
Dil Tannha hai Udaas hai,
Kucch pal yaad aaya,
Yo dhundhla sa saaya,
Saaye se nazar mili ,
To khud ko rok na paya,
Yo aansu-yo aansu chalak hi aaya.

Tannhai ke is aalam main,
Khud ko dekha to kaha paaya,
Na is paar aur na us paar,
Jahan dekha khud hi ko tanhaa paya.

In nazro ko talash hai,
jane kis ki talash hai,
Jisko chahha yo na mila,
Ab kahai na koi aas hai,
Tabhi to ye dil udaas hai.​

 

[bahadur1]

marvellous poem

Thanks Reena ji, What's a marvellous poem you have written !

Are you going to write somethin on happiness in place of sorrow?

Warms regards,

 

[sunitahooda]

Reena...its amazing the way you expressed your happiness and pain in few lines

 

[yashmalik]

genuinely impressing !

 

[ritu]

very nice .keep writing reena

Ye Dil Udaas Hai..​

Jaane Kya Baat Hai,
Dil Tannha hai Udaas hai,
Kucch pal yaad aaya,
Yo dhundhla sa saaya,
Saaye se nazar mili ,
To khud ko rok na paya,
Yo aansu-yo aansu chalak hi aaya.​

Tannhai ke is aalam main,
Khud ko dekha to kaha paaya,
Na is paar aur na us paar,
Jahan dekha khud hi ko tanhaa paya.​

In nazro ko talash hai,
jane kis ki talash hai,
Jisko chahha yo na mila,
Ab kahai na koi aas hai,

Tabhi to ye dil udaas hai.​

 

[deepakchoudhry]

Reena...its amazing the way you expressed your happiness and pain in few lines

Sunita Ji...Happiness toh door door nahin hai is poem main


Reenaji ...keep writing...aur arz kiya hai.

Jab Udas ho Dil...aur Koi ho naa pass
Jab ansoon aa jaye aksasmak...Aur kuch na ho baat

Tab Sochna ki hai kuch humraaz...Jo baatengay hansi aur muskharat aap kay saath.

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