Zakhm-e-dil

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"तू" तो नफरत भी न कर पाएगा इस शिद्दत के साथ
जिस बला का प्यार "तुझ" से बे-ख़बर मैंने किया है ...
 
Barbaad hamko hona tha barbad ham huye,
Duniya hai sari nek salahon is zindagi !
Kaatil the jitane mere sabhi ho gaye bari,
Aur chup khadi thi chasmdeed gawahon si zindagi....:)

Regards,
Maniisha
 
vivekdh said:
"तू" तो नफरत भी न कर पाएगा इस शिद्दत के साथ
जिस बला का प्यार "तुझ" से बे-ख़बर मैंने किया है ...
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gazab chhorre................... had kar di tai to.................
 
tere jaane ke baad zindagi se rishta na ban saka
dil to dhadka kai baar par woh kissa na ban saka
yu to mile kai hum dum dil mein basne waale
afsooo, koi bhi meri rooh ka hissa na ban saka
 
Zakhm itne gehre hai izhaar kya kare,
hum khud nishana ban gaye vaar kya kare,
mar gaye hum magar khuli rahi aankhe,
ab isse zyaada unka intazar kya kare ....:)
 
Nafrat thi hamse to izhaar kyun kiya?
dena tha zeher to Pyaar kyun kiya?
dekar zeher kehte hain ke peena hi hoga,
aur jab pee gaye zeher, to kehte hain jeena hi hoga
 
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Apni mohabbat ki itni si kahani hai,
tuti hui kashti aur thehra hua pani hai..
ek phool hai jo kitabon me dum tod chuka hai,
magar bhul nahi pate yeh kiski nishani hai.. ...
 
maniisha said:
Apni mohabbat ki itni si kahani hai,
tuti hui kashti aur thehra hua pani hai..
ek phool hai jo kitabon me dum tod chuka hai,
magar bhul nahi pate yeh kiski nishani hai.. ...
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Mane to lage se manisha ji agar bollywood ke gane likhan baith ge to bade bade shayero ki chutee karvadenge.
 
आगाज़ का ऐतबार है ना अंजाम पे यकीन
ऐसे कटे हुए हैं तेरी दास्तान से हम
 
मुहब्ब्त कि बेखुद्दी में कुछ ऐसा बेख़बर था
रास्ता तेरी गली का पूछा , तेरी ही गली में.....
 
इक नाम क्या लिखा तेरे साहिल कि रेत पेर..
फिर तमाम उमर मेरी हवा से दुश्मनी रही!!!!
 
Thank you Ranvir Ji,

Even mujhe bi iss link kii jaroorat thi ... waise aapko kyu aise laga kii meine yahan copy paste kiya hai iss link se...
n y u have pointed on me can u tell me the reason ???
 
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Answer to your Innocent quarry !!!

maniisha said:
Thank you Ranvir Ji,

Even mujhe bi iss link kii jaroorat thi ... waise aapko kyu aise laga kii meine yahan copy paste kiya hai iss link se...
n y u have pointed on me can u tell me the reason ???
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You have better answer than me !!! for your convenience....here is the Explanation to your quarry and creativity both !!!

maniisha said:
Maut Mangte Hai To,Zindagi Khafa Ho Jati Hai,
Jisko Bi Chahte Hai, BEWAFA Ho Jata Hai!!
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full version http://www.freewebs.com/adee135/

maniisha said:
dil main sameta hua hai samundar .......

in tohfon ko daman main samete bas jiye jaa rahe hai hum...
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find here http://www.fropper.com/zones/Unchasable


maniisha said:
Jab teri dhun mein raha karte the,
,

Kal tujhe dekh yaad aaya,
Hum bhi kabhi mohabbat kiya karte the!!!!
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Find it here http://www.funonthenet.in/forums/index.php?topic=46367.0

maniisha said:
Baat Din Ki Nahi, Ab Raat Se Dar Lagta Hai...

Iss Liye UsKi Mulaqaat Se Dar Lagta Hai...
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http://www.karachiplus.com/gupshup/display_topic_threads.asp?ForumID=29&TopicID=2461&PagePosition=1

maniisha said:
Waade bhi dost ne kya khub nibhaye,...

dost kafan le aye...
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http://www.bollywoodheaven.com/forums/showthread.php?p=340973#post340973

maniisha said:
Barbaad hamko hona tha barbad ham huye,

Aur chup khadi thi chasmdeed gawahon si zindagi....

Regards,
Maniisha
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http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=342587

maniisha said:
Zakhm itne gehre hai izhaar kya kare,

ab isse zyaada unka intazar kya kare ....
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http://www.eknazar.com/Shayari/showcategory.php?&cid=1&tl=868&pg=6



Hope it's not an over attempt but satisfactory!!!
 
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abhimanyuverma said:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=50270&TPN=3
grewal bhai's composition also available here!!!!! Is there anyone actually 'original' here? It is a total plagiarism..and admin should take it into account.
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वो कहते हैं दुनिया चोर है वो अपना गिरेबान देखते तो ना कहते,
वो कहते हैं कि उनको गम नही वो आँख बंद कर लेते तो ना कहते,
गुरूर है ऐ दोस्त हमे अपनी कोशिशों पे,
वो कहते हैं तुम कुछ नही कर सकते वो ख़ुद कुछ करते तो ना कहते.

this one is actually 'original'

भाई यहाँ कोई ये कहने कि कोशिश नही कर रहा कि कोई ग़ालिब पैदा हो गया यहाँ लोग अपनी collection share कर रहे हैं कुछ ख़ुद के हैं कुछ वो हैं जो उन्हें बहुत अच्छे लगते हैं
 
Good Ranvir ji,
Iss R & D ke liye jitna time waste kiyaa utna kahin or lagate tho kuch extra knowledge mil jaati aapko...n so wht u wanna prove here ..... well again thank u for this links...:D

Conclusion : Vivek's shaaryari is suitable on U ....:p
 
maniisha said:
Good Ranvir ji,
Iss R & D ke liye jitna time waste kiyaa utna kahin or lagate tho kuch extra knowledge mil jaati aapko...n so wht u wanna prove here ..... well again thank u for this links...:D

Conclusion : Vivek's shaaryari is suitable on U ....:p
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Hehehe..he

Did I waste more time than you? i could atleast read the whole stuff.

Dnot worry about my time...take care of yourself
 
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