Wafa aur mohabbat
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g8 Neelam ji..likhte raho Hum aapke saath hain
Mehkaayenge har Mehfil ko hum yuhi
Jaise Phoolon ki khushboo chaman ko
Tenhaai bhi apna naam badal legi
Jab hansna sikhaayenge hum har gam ko
Mehkaayenge har Mehfil ko hum yuhi
Jaise Phoolon ki khushboo chaman ko
Tenhaai bhi apna naam badal legi
Jab hansna sikhaayenge hum har gam ko
choudharyneelam
Banned
"g8 Neelam ji..likhte raho Hum aapke saath hain"
Dear Monika
you all write very beautifully...thanks for supporting me dear
...and with this sweet support i'm trying at my side also to put some of my feelings in words but still not able to write nicely....lakin shuruwat ki hai to kamiyan to hongi hi...abhi khud baith ke bhi hans leti hun apni likhne ke tareeke pe...hahaha
likhte likhte seekh jaaungi eik din, aur phir aap sab ho naa encourage karne ke liye
with luv
Neelam
Dear Monika
you all write very beautifully...thanks for supporting me dear
...and with this sweet support i'm trying at my side also to put some of my feelings in words but still not able to write nicely....lakin shuruwat ki hai to kamiyan to hongi hi...abhi khud baith ke bhi hans leti hun apni likhne ke tareeke pe...hahaha likhte likhte seekh jaaungi eik din, aur phir aap sab ho naa encourage karne ke liye with luv
Neelam
"g8 Neelam ji..likhte raho Hum aapke saath hain"
Dear Monika
you all write very beautifully...thanks for supporting me dear
with luv
Neelam
Dear Neelam ji
Ya sure we all here to encourage u.....
kammiyaan to sabki shayari me hoti hain,,,, kisi ki kammiyan nazar aati hain to kisi ki nahi.....Practice makes the man/woman perfect
keep it upif i read my own wordings b4 posting...mujhe bhi hansi aati hai or main post nahi karti.......dats y i take toooooooo long time
...(u know)take care
Monika
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choudharyneelam
Banned
Keh keh kar kehlaati jo, wo baat hai
Reh reh kar reh jaati, wo bhi baat hai
Jo jubaan pe aake ruk jaaye, wo baat unkahi
wahi agar dil se kahi jaaye,to wah! kiya baat kahi
Baat to dil main bahaut thi
Lakin aake mann main rah jaati thi
Aankhon ke jariye samjhana chaha to
Sharm se aankhein chup ho jaati thi
Jab tak mann main thi wo baat
Bechaini eik mann main rahti thi
Hothon pe lana chaha to
Ghabrahat si mann main hoti thi
Phir bhi....Ye unkahe shabd rukte nahin
Apna raasta dhund hi lete hain
Kahna tha jo sab kah diya
Sunne waale ne sun bhi liya
Abhi tak baithe hain uske
Ikrar ke intezaar ke liye
Kahin beet na jaaye ye ghadi
Aur hon phir ashkon ko saath liye
Jaane kya hoga, soch ke mann ghabrata hai
lakin mann main eik vishwas aas jagata hai
Ki aayega wo thaamne mera haath
Pyaar ke bandhan main bandhega apne saath
Mahakega ye jahan phir khushiyon se
Hansegi har zindagi humare saath
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prashantacmet
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eee Monika ......... issne thaam tu eibb..............
aansuion ko chhupne se gum kam nahi hota
mehfil main rahne se tanhai ka ahsaas kam nahi hota
mehfilo main gujarne se raatein agar tanhai ka ahsaas hota kam
to iss duniya main koi hum jaissa tanha na hotta.......................
aansuion ko chhupne se gum kam nahi hota
mehfil main rahne se tanhai ka ahsaas kam nahi hota
mehfilo main gujarne se raatein agar tanhai ka ahsaas hota kam
to iss duniya main koi hum jaissa tanha na hotta.......................
prashantacmet
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leelam....had kar di tai to........... tu kissi nawi picture ki story likh ri deekhe aaj kaal....kitt tai liya yu inspiration...
......... aapni picture ki kahani disclose kar di tai to..........................heheheh..hhaaa...............ROOKKA@ INSPIRATION
......... aapni picture ki kahani disclose kar di tai to..........................heheheh..hhaaa...............ROOKKA@ INSPIRATION
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shamshermalik
Banned
Neelam very good...keep it up and vo jaroor aayega....hahaha donot mind just joking.
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eee Prashant ..tane thaam ke bhaajna ho to bhaaj ja ....koi na rokta tane
Mere Aansoo bahe hain to bhi Khushi ke bankar
Hum hote hain to Mehfil me tenhaai nahi hoti
Khud baithe ho tenhaahi ka daaman pakadkar
Warna tumhaare lafzo ne duniya sataai nahi hoti
Mere Aansoo bahe hain to bhi Khushi ke bankar
Hum hote hain to Mehfil me tenhaai nahi hoti
Khud baithe ho tenhaahi ka daaman pakadkar
Warna tumhaare lafzo ne duniya sataai nahi hoti
leelam....had kar di tai to........... tu kissi nawi picture ki story likh ri deekhe aaj kaal....kitt tai liya yu inspiration...
Jin lafzo ko khud likhte ho
Unpe aaj tumhe hansi aayi
Tumhaare likhe lafzo me
Tumhaari tenhaai nazar aayi
Chnd shabdo me hume
Teri ujadi kahani nazar aayi
Jab dekha gaur se tere lafzo ko
Un lafzo se inki rooh alag nazar aayi
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prashantacmet
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Monika....... main eeeeeeeee Prashant kona.... ......main to ooooooo Prashant huin........heheheh.........hahahaha.......ROOKKA@ OOOOO Prashant....
rahi baat bhaajan ki to mai ke kahi bhaagu tha......... tu bhi katai confuse holi........eibb issne thaam tu.......
aankh ke aansuoin ka kya hai kahi bhi bah jaate hai
dil ke jakhm dikhawo to kuch baat hai......
jee jee ke to sabhi marte hai yaha par
mar mar ke jee ke dikhawo to kuch baat hai....................
....heheheh.........hahahaha.......ROOKKA@ OOOOO Prashant....rahi baat bhaajan ki to mai ke kahi bhaagu tha......... tu bhi katai confuse holi........eibb issne thaam tu.......
aankh ke aansuoin ka kya hai kahi bhi bah jaate hai
dil ke jakhm dikhawo to kuch baat hai......
jee jee ke to sabhi marte hai yaha par
mar mar ke jee ke dikhawo to kuch baat hai....................
eeeeeeeeooooooo Prashant/ooooooooeeeeeee Prashant haaaaaaaaaahaaaa
Bin kahe koi baat samjh jaaye,to kuch baat hai
Dil ke jakhmo ko khud marham lagaye,to kuch baat hai
Hans hans kar to sabhi rote hai yahan
Ro Ro kar hans kar jo jeeta yahan,usme kuch baat hai
Bin kahe koi baat samjh jaaye,to kuch baat hai
Dil ke jakhmo ko khud marham lagaye,to kuch baat hai
Hans hans kar to sabhi rote hai yahan
Ro Ro kar hans kar jo jeeta yahan,usme kuch baat hai
choudharyneelam
Banned
(Afsana likh rahi hun)-2 dile bekarar ka
Aankhon main rang bharke tere intezaar ka
Afasana likh rahi hun......
Jo tu nahin to kuch bhi (nahin hai bahar main)-2
(Jee chahta hai munh hi)-2 naa dekhun bahar ka
Aankhon main rang bharke tere intezaar ka
ab kaise bhi aaye....chaahe meri ye bore shayari jhel ke aaye, ya ye gana sun ke aaye...aayega jaroor
....hahahaha choudharyneelam
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leelam....had kar di tai to........... tu kissi nawi picture ki story likh ri deekhe aaj kaal....kitt tai liya yu inspiration...
ye lo aur.....neelam hadd hi karti hai...
...jhelo ek aur....Sab batate hain kahani apni apni
Kisi ki bhi chupaye nahin chupti
Hum bhi eik din sunayenge apni
Humse bhi koi pyaari baat dil main nahin rukti
Main bhi thori shayari seekhna chahti thi
Tum sab shayaron main shaamil hona chahti thi
Aaj koshish kar rahi hun, issliye kamiyaan bahaut milengi
Kal jab seekh jaaungi, to tum sabki taarifain bhi milengi
hahaha...kyun Prashant bhai....bolo ab.....hahaha
keep writin
Kehte hain ki baatein na suno logo ki yahan
Par ye Baatein bhi to yahan ke log hi karte hain
Sau baaton me ek hi baat baar baar kehte hain
Us ek baat ki sau baatein bhi yehi log karte hain
Jawaab janate hain pyaar karne waalo ka
Phir bhi unse sawaal behisaab yehi log karte hain
Hum in lafzo ki baton se himmat dete hain aapko
In baaton ko kamzor bhi isi jahan ke log karte hain
Jubaaan se Wafa ki baatein karte nahi thakte
Us Wafa ke naam pe Bewafaai bhi to log hi karte hain
Kehte hain Mohabbat ki baaton me kiya rakha hai
Par humaari baaton se Mohabbat yahan sab karte hain
Kehte hain ki baatein na suno logo ki yahan
Par ye Baatein bhi to yahan ke log hi karte hain
Sau baaton me ek hi baat baar baar kehte hain
Us ek baat ki sau baatein bhi yehi log karte hain
Jawaab janate hain pyaar karne waalo ka
Phir bhi unse sawaal behisaab yehi log karte hain
Hum in lafzo ki baton se himmat dete hain aapko
In baaton ko kamzor bhi isi jahan ke log karte hain
Jubaaan se Wafa ki baatein karte nahi thakte
Us Wafa ke naam pe Bewafaai bhi to log hi karte hain
Kehte hain Mohabbat ki baaton me kiya rakha hai
Par humaari baaton se Mohabbat yahan sab karte hain
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shamshermalik
Banned
(Afsana likh rahi hun)-2 dile bekarar ka
Aankhon main rang bharke tere intezaar ka
Afasana likh rahi hun......
Jo tu nahin to kuch bhi (nahin hai bahar main)-2
(Jee chahta hai munh hi)-2 naa dekhun bahar ka
Aankhon main rang bharke tere intezaar ka
ab kaise bhi aaye....chaahe meri ye bore shayari jhel ke aaye, ya ye gana sun ke aaye...aayega jaroor
Very good..thats should be the spirit!!!
Sach hoga ek din tera afsanaa
Vo patjhad me bhi bahar layegaa
tera sapna phir sapna na rahega
tere jeevan ki haqiqat ban jayegaa
prashantacmet
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Bohat achha bobbo....ghani suthri shayrai likhi thi...last aali 4 linea main to katai nalka paard saudaa baga diya..................laagi ro.ek din tu mharra naam roshan kareggi..........le ek merri udd tai bhi.....
nakaamyaabiyaa milli to muqaddar se dar gaye
paani ki ek boond the jo samundar se dar gaye
kya milegga un jakhmoen ko kuradne se ab
tere merri ulfat ke afsaane to saaloen pehle gujar gaye....................
........laagi ro.ek din tu mharra naam roshan kareggi..........le ek merri udd tai bhi.....nakaamyaabiyaa milli to muqaddar se dar gaye
paani ki ek boond the jo samundar se dar gaye
kya milegga un jakhmoen ko kuradne se ab
tere merri ulfat ke afsaane to saaloen pehle gujar gaye....................
ye lo aur.....neelam hadd hi karti hai...
Sab batate hain kahani apni apni
Kisi ki bhi chupaye nahin chupti
Hum bhi eik din sunayenge apni
Humse bhi koi pyaari baat dil main nahin rukti
Main bhi thori shayari seekhna chahti thi
Tum sab shayaron main shaamil hona chahti thi
Aaj koshish kar rahi hun, issliye kamiyaan bahaut milengi
Kal jab seekh jaaungi, to tum sabki taarifain bhi milengi
hahaha...kyun Prashant bhai....bolo ab.....hahaha
R
rajeshrathee
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tere chehre se nazar hatta sakta nahi
bekrari is dil ki chupa sakta nahi
kitni hasin hai jawa mohabbat ki hasin majbooria
samne manzil hai par kadam badha sakta nahi
bekrari is dil ki chupa sakta nahi
kitni hasin hai jawa mohabbat ki hasin majbooria
samne manzil hai par kadam badha sakta nahi
Haseen lagte hain wo humari hi Mohabbat ke rang se
Usi Mohabbat ko majboor hum kabhi keh sakte nahi
Har mazil haansil karte aaye hai wo humaare hi dum se
Hum saath hain unke aur wo hume apna keh sakte nahi
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