Kuch Qalaam Mohobbat Ke Naam

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Ruk si jati hain dhadkane tamaam huzum ki,
Sarakti hain julfein jab tere shano se.

Jhuk si jati hain ye palkein aapki,
Jikr sunte ho bhari bajm jab apne deewano se.
 
Dhanbad..

Neelam mere tei thara dukh dekhya na gaya.. is mare yo dhaga piro diya mohobbat ke phool mein.:)

Dekho ibb kis kis terah ke khubsurat phool aaweinge is dhage mein.:)

Ek aur phool dun...

Badalna nahi aata hame mausam ki terah,
Har ik rut mein tera intezaar karte hain.

Na sameit sakoge jise Qayamat tak,
Kasam se tumhe itna pyar karte hain.
 
Thankyou!! Deepak

Deepak ab to maine Rajendra Sir aur Karmveer dono ko bol diya...hope ki wo bhi jaroor kuch likhenge...aur bahaut bahaut shukriya aapka itni concerns dikhane ke liye apne members ke liye:) ...ab maja to tab aayega jab Dev Sir, Vijay, Shamsher, Monika, aur jitne bhi acche shayar hain sab aa jaayen to....waiting for them also to be here to make it glamorous:) :)
 
wah wah...

hume unkee hansee ne mara
hume unkee berukhi ne mara
kiya kiya ginayen ub yaaro
unke labon ki surkhi ne mara

unki subah ki muskurahat shaam tak khilkar hansee ban gayee
unki subah ki ungdaiyan, shaam tak ubharkar bebasee ban gayee
hum din bahr takte rahe unke mehndi bahre haathon ko
wo hamare dekhte dekhte, shaam tak kisi ki zindgi ban gayee

RK^2
 
rkumar said:
wah wah...

hume unkee hansee ne mara
hume unkee berukhi ne mara
kiya kiya ginayen ub yaaro
unke labon ki surkhi ne mara

unki subah ki muskurahat shaam tak khilkar hansee ban gayee
unki subah ki ungdaiyan, shaam tak ubharkar bebasee ban gayee
hum din bahr takte rahe unke mehndi bahre haathon ko
wo hamare dekhte dekhte, shaam tak kisi ki zindgi ban gayee

RK^2
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Extremely Good Sir....now i can see the happy and smiling faces of everyone writing such beautiful shayaris...keep it going like that:)
 
Bhaut Khoob Sejwal Bhai
Sukria RK Sir,
Thanks Neelam Ji,

Aap sab ne jee Rajji ker diya,

Arey Jatland walo sab khub hanso,
Tum nahi hasogey to hum kanhi or chaley jayegey.

Jivan key dukho say logo ko bachaya jai,
aao milker kisi rotey ko hansaya jaaya.

Karmveer

choudharyneelam said:
Extremely Good Sir....now i can see the happy and smiling faces of everyone writing such beautiful shayaris...keep it going like that:)
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Deepak you are great...ek aur khush kar diya tumne..see how happy is Karmveer feeling now...;) :D


one from my side now...this one i stolen from one sweet song..;) ..not my composition....actually deemag main aaya nahin kuch bhi:( ....issliye yahi suno meri taraf se:D ....


kaise kaise hote hain ye dekho dilwaale
dheere se udaate hain ye aankhon ke ujaale
aankhon ka ujaala pardesi le gaya
jaate jaate mitha mitha gum de gaya
jaane anjaane usse pata na chala
moti moti ankhiyon mein aansu de gaya
ek pardesi mera dil le gaya.....;) :D :D
 
choudharyneelam said:
Deepak you are great...ek aur khush kar diya tumne..see how happy is Karmveer feeling now...;) :D


one from my side now...this one i stolen from one sweet song..;) ..not my composition....actually deemag main aaya nahin kuch bhi:( ....issliye yahi suno meri taraf se:D ....


kaise kaise hote hain ye dekho dilwaale
dheere se udaate hain ye aankhon ke ujaale
aankhon ka ujaala pardesi le gaya
jaate jaate mitha mitha gum de gaya
jaane anjaane usse pata na chala
moti moti ankhiyon mein aansu de gaya
ek pardesi mera dil le gaya.....;) :D :D
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umm..

wo pardeshi kaun thaa
kuch bola, ya maun thaa

jate jate wo bas dil le gaya
ya fir dil ke badle, dil de gaya

dekhiye kahin uska rumaal gira hoga
rumal ke oopar kuch likha bhi hoga
nahi kuch likha to aansu ponch lijiye
naak saaf karke, rumal fenk dijiye

RK^2
 
rkumar said:
umm..

wo pardeshi kaun thaa
kuch bola, ya maun thaa

jate jate wo bas dil le gaya
ya fir dil ke badle, dil de gaya

dekhiye kahin uska rumaal gira hoga
rumal ke oopar kuch likha bhi hoga
nahi kuch likha to aansu ponch lijiye
naak saaf karke, rumal fenk dijiye

RK^2
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Ha ha ha aha aha ha ahaa haa aha aha haa aha haa aha aha aha ahaaha ahah ahaa aha aha aha ahaa aha aha aaha anhaaahnaaha aha ahaa aha aha aha aha aha aha
 
na kitaabon mein mila na rishaalon(magazine) mein
hume sukh bhi mila to bus khayalon mein
meri parchhai ne bhi mujhse ye keh diya
ki main tera saath to dungi magar ujaalon mein!:)
 
rkumar said:
umm..

wo pardeshi kaun thaa
kuch bola, ya maun thaa

jate jate wo bas dil le gaya
ya fir dil ke badle, dil de gaya

dekhiye kahin uska rumaal gira hoga
rumal ke oopar kuch likha bhi hoga
nahi kuch likha to aansu ponch lijiye
naak saaf karke, rumal fenk dijiye

RK^2
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Wo aaya aur milke chala gaya
Deke sapno ki duniya dil mera le gaya
Baithi hun uske hi intezaar mein
Wo aayega ek din kuch aisa mujhse kah gaya


Itne puraane andaaz ka nahin mera pardesi
Jo kuch likh ke kahin gira de apna rumaal
Likhwaayega ek din kagaz pe hum dono ka naam
Aur aapko bhi phir dega nyota hai uska khayaal:)
 
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choudharyneelam said:
Wo aaya aur milke chala gaya
Deke sapno ki duniya dil mera le gaya
Baithi hun uske hi intezaar mein
Wo aayega ek din kuch aisa mujhse kah gaya


Itne puraane andaaz ka nahin mera pardesi
Jo kuch likh ke kahin gira de apna rumaal
Likhwaayega ek din kagaz pe hum dono ka naam
Aur aapko bhi phir dega nyota hai uska khayaal:)
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hahahaha...good one... magar;

yen pardeshi bade be-iman hote hain
katl karke jakhmon se anjan hote hain
intzar me unki butt bane dekha hai kitne
button ko kaun samjhaye, wo be-jan hote hain.

RK^2
 
rkumar said:
hahahaha...good one... magar;

yen pardeshi bade be-iman hote hain
katl karke jakhmon se anjan hote hain
intzar me unki butt bane dekha hai kitne
button ko kaun samjhaye, wo be-jan hote hain.

RK^2
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Ye to waqt batayega ki pardesi kaise hote hain
Kitno ko jakhmi kar kitne ilzaam sar pe lete hain
Intezaar karne ka matlab butt banna nahin
Ye intezaar aadmi kya jaane, jo intezaar karwate hain
 
rkumar said:
hahhaaa... kiya point mara Neelam ji.....bahut khoob....
Masa-allah aap bhi achchee khasi shayraa hain....

RK^2
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RK Sir

I'm not any shayar but just give the reply what i feel and think....so this is all i do....i don't know shayari....but would like to learn it, so i'll try my best to learn it....aur agar mere jawabon mein hi aap sab aisa kuch dekhte hain to i think shayari is very simple....kyunki ye mere sirf jawab hain...bas reply karne ka style different hai...:)

Regards
Neelam
 
choudharyneelam said:
RK Sir

I'm not any shayar but just give the reply what i feel and think....so this is all i do....i don't know shayari....but would like to learn it, so i'll try my best to learn it....aur agar mere jawabon mein hi aap sab aisa kuch dekhte hain to i think shayari is very simple....kyunki ye mere sirf jawab hain...bas reply karne ka style different hai...:)

Regards
Neelam
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U are on right track...just keep writing what ever comes to your mind...

RK^2
 
rkumar said:
U are on right track...just keep writing what ever comes to your mind...

RK^2
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Sir, say like that.....''just keep writing whatever comes in your" heart:D ...as i put my feelings here....baaten banani nahin aati mujhe....issliye jo mann mein hota hai wo prakat hota hai mere replies mein :D ...whether it is of serious kind or something like this that i'm writing nowadays.:)
 
hahhaa

Neelam tu bhi chupi rustam sei.. khamakha mhara ullu khinch ri hai .. koi na laagi reh...le ek aur phool dun hun tanne...:)


Ye surkh hont Gulaab se, badan makhmali, nazaron se sharab chalakti hai,
Thodi to pila de inse ki ab hosh khone ko jee chahta hai,

Laut aata hun tere pehlu mein majboor hokar,
Ab to har waqt madhosh hone ko jee chahta hai,

Na kar rukhsat be-abaru karke apni mehfil sei,
Ke ab to chand-taare teri maang mein sajane ko jee chahta hai,

Bahut badnaam tere ishk ne kar diya hai Zalim,
Tu aaye mere aagosh mein Kya tera Jee nahi chahta hai ???
 
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