Dooriyaa

[subhashbalhara]

Bahut Khoob..aur is say inspire ho kar kuch pesh kar raha hoon..meri hi kuch pankatiyaan

Jab hum woh dooriyan mitaa na sake
paas ho kar bhi paas aa na sake.

Saanatta tha itna gehra
Ghar kay konay main ek deepak bhi jala na sake

Kya thi woh majbooriyaan
Ki apnay hokar bhi unhe apnaa na sake.

really very very good lines

SB
GJU

 

[subhashbalhara]

Good lines manisha...

It has nothing to do with previous mails but simply I would like to add something more which i read on net ......
Don´t let someone be your priority when you are just an option in their life.....relationship works best when they are balanced.

People who leave you with tears in your eyes were never there for you and those who really loves you will never bring tears in your eyes. Live for those who really love you.
Time spend together is worth remembering. But If its not part of present and future let it go.....let it have place in memories but no associated dreams......memories should be cherished with a smile....if they really deserve....
Its good to be good to the whole world but before that its good to be good to yourself as well. Before loving the whole world...its good to love someone who loves you most.....Love yourself first.....Before caring for the whole world..there is no harm caring for your soul as well and at first.........

shashi ji

I think u don't know the sweetness of tears. These r must in love.
aansu na bahe to pyaar hi kya hua. sab normal chalega to life to boring ho jaayegi na........
Don't mind be Happy

SB
GJU

 

[kdeshwal]

shashi ji

I think u don't know the sweetness of tears. These r must in love.
aansu na bahe to pyaar hi kya hua. sab normal chalega to life to boring ho jaayegi na........
Don't mind be Happy

SB
GJU

Muaff keejiyega SB Ji; Shashi Ji ke jawab se pahle hi ye khayaal munn mei aya aur likhne ki gustaakhi kur ruhi hoon: 'Shashi ji jaisi wisdom inn sub pahaluvo (aspects) aur tazurbon se guzar kur, unhe gaharai se mahasoos kur lene ke baad hi aati hai. (baaki unke javaab ka intazaar rahega).

I guess, her message is right here: "relationship works best when they are balanced." - pyaar mein Tears hon toh dono taraf zara baraabar se toh hon, fir hai maza toh aansuvon ki mithaas ka... kya kahate hai aap!

 

[maniisha]

Good Hit

Good lines manisha...

It has nothing to do with previous mails but simply I would like to add something more which i read on net ......
Don´t let someone be your priority when you are just an option in their life.....relationship works best when they are balanced.

People who leave you with tears in your eyes were never there for you and those who really loves you will never bring tears in your eyes. Live for those who really love you.
Time spend together is worth remembering. But If its not part of present and future let it go.....let it have place in memories but no associated dreams......memories should be cherished with a smile....if they really deserve....
Its good to be good to the whole world but before that its good to be good to yourself as well. Before loving the whole world...its good to love someone who loves you most.....Love yourself first.....Before caring for the whole world..there is no harm caring for your soul as well and at first.........

No words to express Sis..
Really the above lines r very true..

 

[subhashbalhara]

Muaff keejiyega SB Ji; Shashi Ji ke jawab se pahle hi ye khayaal munn mei aya aur likhne ki gustaakhi kur ruhi hoon: 'Shashi ji jaisi wisdom inn sub pahaluvo (aspects) aur tazurbon se guzar kur, unhe gaharai se mahasoos kur lene ke baad hi aati hai. (baaki unke javaab ka intazaar rahega).

I guess, her message is right here: "relationship works best when they are balanced." - pyaar mein Tears hon toh dono taraf zara baraabar se toh hon, fir hai maza toh aansuvon ki mithaas ka... kya kahate hai aap!

ms deshwal

really well said.. dono taraf barabar jaruri hai

 

[sunitahooda]

Shashi ...i could feel and relate these lines closest to my heart

Good lines manisha...

It has nothing to do with previous mails but simply I would like to add something more which i read on net ......
Don´t let someone be your priority when you are just an option in their life.....relationship works best when they are balanced.

People who leave you with tears in your eyes were never there for you and those who really loves you will never bring tears in your eyes. Live for those who really love you.
Time spend together is worth remembering. But If its not part of present and future let it go.....let it have place in memories but no associated dreams......memories should be cherished with a smile....if they really deserve....
Its good to be good to the whole world but before that its good to be good to yourself as well. Before loving the whole world...its good to love someone who loves you most.....Love yourself first.....Before caring for the whole world..there is no harm caring for your soul as well and at first.........

 

[deepakchoudhry]

I always wanted more from you,
Than you were willing to give;
So now we have gone our separate ways,
With each of us a different life to live…

The bond will always be there,
The friendship always intact;
But the time for us has come and gone,
And pages of time we can’t turn back…

I will remember those smiles & laughters,
And those fights that have left painless scars;
I will always be a friend to you,
And wonder how you are!

Sometimes on those busy days,
When you have thousands of things to do;
Just lemme slip through your mind,
And spend some time with you!!

In that quiet moment when you are surprised to find me there,
Just remember, even with the distances between us, I’ll always be that someone; who will forever care..!!

Inspired by Maniisha and Shashi's post..I have wriiten few lines

My Expecatations are a burden
Its time to let it go
If you walk away from me now
I wont say no....

I know you are pain in..babe
It has to be released
If you dont do it now
I wont be able to sleep

I love you so much
I cant explain
my expecations are a burden
they are causing too much pain

all we have are sweet memories to hold onto
and I want to remember us, its the way I want to..

walk away, walk away, walk away now

My Expecatations are a burden
Its time to let it go
If you walk away from me now
I wont say no....

 

[shashiverma]

First of all let me thank you for all your mails. Now coming to the replies...
Well Subash, K.D. have already replied it well. As far as sweetness of tears is concerned, I guess I know them quite well. I think, I know and understand the beauty and depth of tears....they are the expression of pain which our soul dare to be free of....they are expression of the love which touchs someones heart...they means a lot.... but we often mistake it for our weekness.

thanks Sunita, I think those lines must be close to anyone and everyones heart who were furtunate enough to be blessed with love at somepoint of time or the other in life.

Gud lines Deepak.... True expectations disappoint you...let the pain go....But one thing is for sure...someone who real loves you will never feel your expectations as burden.....In fact they will be glad to fulfill your expectations...they can or can not is a different story..but would definitely want to....
Fortunate are those who are blessed with love...
Let our instincts be pure enough to recognise true love...
Let our heart be open enough to welcome love when it knocks our heart,
Let our eyes see the beauty of world with the eyes of love,
Let our soul touch the sky and feel the clouds,
Let us be free enough to fly with the wings of love
and if it decides to leave....Lets us be generous enough to say goodbye with a thanking smile.....
Lets us be blessed enough strength to bear the pain...
Lets us be mature enough to learn the lessons....and cherish the past...
...........AMEN......we all have that strength.....its just the matter of time which is shorter or long for us to realise...

Ab jab jikar ho hee gaya hai to let me add what i feel for love.
Love is like butterfly..Feel the beauty when it is around....Don´t try to hold it too hard.....You may kill her....You may kill your love....Its free to be where it want to be....Live as long as its with you....let it go if it want to fly...Don´t run behind her..you can not catch her......otherwise you will shorten her life...Let it grow and so do u...
Pyar lehro kei tarh hota hai.....Dor khadee hokar sirf unhee dekhana hai ya mehsos karna hai thats the first thing you have to decide......Once you have made your mind to feel it.....remember that tides touchs the coasts only for a short while....they will be there but just for a moment......Jis pal wo aapko sahil per chota hai..wo pal jindagi hai.....per....wo ek pal hai...use pal ko samitana hain ya nahin..dt u have to decide....Don´t run after receding waves....they are no longer tides when they are part of vast sea....Its gone....But you have the feeling of moment......nd then with this freshness and energy...move ahead with your life.....

 

[vivekdh]

kya itna aasan hai shashi ji kisi ko bhulana. apki baat bahut taazgi si detti hain mann ko per kya sahi me TITLI(love) jise humne udda diya yaa wo khud udd gai ,usse bhul pana aasan hai.
insaan jita rehta hai khusi me khus bhi rehta hai per kya koi pehli TITLI ko bhula pata hai ?har baar usse yaad kerke muskra pata hai ?

Ab jab jikar ho hee gaya hai to let me add what i feel for love.
Love is like butterfly..Feel the beauty when it is around....Don´t try to hold it too hard.....You may kill her....You may kill your love....Its free to be where it want to be....Live as long as its with you....let it go if it want to fly...Don´t run behind her..you can not catch her......otherwise you will shorten her life...Let it grow and so do u...
Pyar lehro kei tarh hota hai.....Dor khadee hokar sirf unhee dekhana hai ya mehsos karna hai thats the first thing you have to decide......Once you have made your mind to feel it.....remember that tides touchs the coasts only for a short while....they will be there but just for a moment......Jis pal wo aapko sahil per chota hai..wo pal jindagi hai.....per....wo ek pal hai...use pal ko samitana hain ya nahin..dt u have to decide....Don´t run after receding waves....they are no longer tides when they are part of vast sea....Its gone....But you have the feeling of moment......nd then with this freshness and energy...move ahead with your life.....

 

[deepakchoudhry]

Shashi,

This poem was not in context with this thread.

Jo dimag main us waqt aaya, toh socha share karoon aap sabse.

I should have mentioned it.


Deepak

 

[shashiverma]

kya itna aasan hai shashi ji kisi ko bhulana. apki baat bahut taazgi si detti hain mann ko per kya sahi me TITLI(love) jise humne udda diya yaa wo khud udd gai ,usse bhul pana aasan hai.
insaan jita rehta hai khusi me khus bhi rehta hai per kya koi pehli TITLI ko bhula pata hai ?har baar usse yaad kerke muskra pata hai ?

Kisi ko bhulana asan nahin hota hai....per us se pehlai sawal ye uthata hai..ki kisi ko bhulana hei kyon hai...Why at all do you need to forget someone...I never said that we should forget people.....If you ask me..I would say do not even try to forget them....for they are the one along with whom you had the best of best time.......... you should be thankful for those moments......But as far as being thankful to the person is concerned..i think....You paid your best by being part of the moment..and you received the best of moment as well....What should be important is not the person but those moments.....
Yaadoon ko jiyo per sirf yaadoon ke tarah....

Har baar use yaad karke muskuranee itna asaan nahin hai.....true...everything in life takes time......Do not fight with yourself..let things happen in a natural way...But surely one can... if one could give oneself enough reasons for smiling thinking about the past.....nd the share of reasons each one have to dig themself.....

 

[dkumars]

First of all let me thank you for all your mails. Now coming to the replies...
Well Subash, K.D. have already replied it well. As far as sweetness of tears is concerned, I guess I know them quite well. I think, I know and understand the beauty and depth of tears....they are the expression of pain which our soul dare to be free of....they are expression of the love which touchs someones heart...they means a lot.... but we often mistake it for our weekness.

thanks Sunita, I think those lines must be close to anyone and everyones heart who were furtunate enough to be blessed with love at somepoint of time or the other in life.

Gud lines Deepak.... True expectations disappoint you...let the pain go....But one thing is for sure...someone who real loves you will never feel your expectations as burden.....In fact they will be glad to fulfill your expectations...they can or can not is a different story..but would definitely want to....
Fortunate are those who are blessed with love...
Let our instincts be pure enough to recognise true love...
Let our heart be open enough to welcome love when it knocks our heart,
Let our eyes see the beauty of world with the eyes of love,
Let our soul touch the sky and feel the clouds,
Let us be free enough to fly with the wings of love
and if it decides to leave....Lets us be generous enough to say goodbye with a thanking smile.....
Lets us be blessed enough strength to bear the pain...
Lets us be mature enough to learn the lessons....and cherish the past...
...........AMEN......we all have that strength.....its just the matter of time which is shorter or long for us to realise...

Ab jab jikar ho hee gaya hai to let me add what i feel for love.
Love is like butterfly..Feel the beauty when it is around....Don´t try to hold it too hard.....You may kill her....You may kill your love....Its free to be where it want to be....Live as long as its with you....let it go if it want to fly...Don´t run behind her..you can not catch her......otherwise you will shorten her life...Let it grow and so do u...
Pyar lehro kei tarh hota hai.....Dor khadee hokar sirf unhee dekhana hai ya mehsos karna hai thats the first thing you have to decide......Once you have made your mind to feel it.....remember that tides touchs the coasts only for a short while....they will be there but just for a moment......Jis pal wo aapko sahil per chota hai..wo pal jindagi hai.....per....wo ek pal hai...use pal ko samitana hain ya nahin..dt u have to decide....Don´t run after receding waves....they are no longer tides when they are part of vast sea....Its gone....But you have the feeling of moment......nd then with this freshness and energy...move ahead with your life.....

Dr Sahiba, TITLI wala example bahut achha laga... sach mein dil ko choo gaya ??? Although its difficult to forget someone who was so close to u but wt u wrote is damn practical... Life mein emotions bahut jarrori hai, emotions par hi duniya tiki hai but one should be practical also when time demands.
It makes no sense when u stop ur life and stay hanged forever.
The best thing i experienced is suffer suffer and suffer if u r a broken heart.
No one can help u. Cry as much as u can, on moms lap, friends shoulder or alone on ur pillow but after this gr8 suffering start a new life which will remain intact of ur past. Later on this feeling will be just a rememberance.

The guy/gal who gave up easily was never urs. It was ur madness, u considered that guy/gal urs.

And Vivek... wanna say one more thing, most of the guys/gals participating in this thread have experinced this pain(sweet/bitter wtever)

 

[dkumars]

Jo Ghoda tumse tej daudta hai aur tej daudna bhi chahta hai uske peeche bhaagne se koi fayda nahi... nahi usko paane ki khwahis rakhna.
Agar phir bhi daude ja rahe ho toh thak haar kar gir jaoge... search another one jo tumhare sath sath daud sake... ghodo ki kami nahi hai duniya mein... hehe

 

[kdeshwal]

Jo Ghoda tumse tej daudta hai aur tej daudna bhi chahta hai uske peeche bhaagne se koi fayda nahi... nahi usko paane ki khwahis rakhna.
Agar phir bhi daude ja rahe ho toh thak haar kar gir jaoge... search another one jo tumhare sath sath daud sake... ghodo ki kami nahi hai duniya mein... hehe

DK Ji: aapne maahaul to zara light saa kia, aur baat bhi sahi hi hai.
Ek mazaakiya khayaal saa ayaa: ki, agar zindagi ki daud mein mauka mil jaaye aur woh Ghoda still mil jaaye (kabhi break toh leta hi hoga?), aur shaayad aapko uski ruftaar ka andaaz he na ho. Toh kyon na sumbhalkar USS PAR SAWAAR HO LO.? kyu thakna saath saath ya peechhe peechhe daud kur? Zindagi ki raftaar apni bhi badh jaayegi aur ghode ko bhi bhagne ka kaaran mil jayega, varnaa kya maza?!!!!!! (Titli ser pyaar kur chhodo aur Ghode ko saathi bana lo?!!!!!)
I know, ye kuchh Jat waali si kah di manne

By the way, I like your postings

 

[chhavi]

Kisi ko bhulana asan nahin hota hai....per us se pehlai sawal ye uthata hai..ki kisi ko bhulana hei kyon hai...Why at all do you need to forget someone...I never said that we should forget people.....If you ask me..I would say do not even try to forget them....for they are the one along with whom you had the best of best time.......... you should be thankful for those moments......But as far as being thankful to the person is concerned..i think....You paid your best by being part of the moment..and you received the best of moment as well....What should be important is not the person but those moments.....
Yaadoon ko jiyo per sirf yaadoon ke tarah....

Har baar use yaad karke muskuranee itna asaan nahin hai.....true...everything in life takes time......Do not fight with yourself..let things happen in a natural way...But surely one can... if one could give oneself enough reasons for smiling thinking about the past.....nd the share of reasons each one have to dig themself.....

Shashi ji!

Bahut Badiya! Words of wisdom!

 

[kdeshwal]

Kisi ko bhulana asan nahin hota hai....per us se pehlai sawal ye uthata hai..ki kisi ko bhulana hei kyon hai...Why at all do you need to forget someone...I never said that we should forget people.....If you ask me..I would say do not even try to forget them....for they are the one along with whom you had the best of best time.......... you should be thankful for those moments......But as far as being thankful to the person is concerned..i think....You paid your best by being part of the moment..and you received the best of moment as well....What should be important is not the person but those moments.....
Yaadoon ko jiyo per sirf yaadoon ke tarah....

Har baar use yaad karke muskuranee itna asaan nahin hai.....true...everything in life takes time......Do not fight with yourself..let things happen in a natural way...But surely one can... if one could give oneself enough reasons for smiling thinking about the past.....nd the share of reasons each one have to dig themself.....

Shashi ji, Aap anubhavi toh hai hee, satth mei aap outstanding lekhika bhi hain (yeh, expression kaa Vardaan hai aapko). Aapke bhav dil ki gaharaiyon ko chhoo jaate hain - jis tarha aap bayaan kartee hain khud ko. You are an inspiration.
Please keep pouring out and sharing. Thanks!
(highlighted above comes after making peace with our ownselves - it's a process, may be a tough one but healthy.)

 

[chhavi]

Hello frnds,
while browsing through some site i came across this heart touching lines which i want to share with u all ..

Samajh na sake dooriyan kyun thi,
Zubaan per the lafz phir majbooriyon kyun thi,
Dilon ki baat agar chaye haqiqat hoti hai,
Hamare darmiyan woh khamoshiyan kyun thi,
Boone the humne bhi kuch reshmi dhaagon ke khwaab,
Humare hisse mein woh kaali dooriyan kyun thi,
Idhar honthon per azab si joombish,
Udhar kuch raaz dil ke talon mein,
Samajh nake na sargoshiyan hawaon ki,
Humare hisse mein sehra ki andhiyan kyun thi,
tumhe gurez meri chand baaton se,
Main bhi parwaz ki thi hamil,
Pahoonch ke mill ke patthar per sochti hoon,
Safar tanha tou phir woh dooriyan kyun thi...
​

Wonderfull Contribution to the forum!

Meri taraf se bus itan hi ki

Dooriyaan gar raaste hon ,
Musafir chaletey jana hai!
Dooriyaan gar dil ki hon
Toh bus ek bahana hai!!

Regards!

 

[devdahiya]

Wonderfull Contribution to the forum!

Meri taraf se bus itan hi ki

Dooriyaan gar raaste hon ,
Musafir chaletey jana hai!
Dooriyaan gar dil ki hon
Toh bus ek bahana hai!!

Regards!

Bahut khhubb Chhavi bebey.


Har duuri ahsaas kratti hei fir najdeek jaane ka
Har Najdeeki ek bahana hei fir se bichhadd jane ka
Mohobatt bhar dillon mei chal fir kya durri kya najdeekki
Jab mar mittne ka aallam ho tou,kya meethi aur kya teekhi.

 

[chhavi]

Bahut khhubb Chhavi bebey.


Har duuri ahsaas kratti hei fir najdeek jaane ka
Har Najdeeki ek bahana hei fir se bichhadd jane ka
Mohobatt bhar dillon mei chal fir kya durri kya najdeekki
Jab mar mittne ka aallam ho tou,kya meethi aur kya teekhi.

Kaku! Kya badiya Likha Aapne!

Dil ki duniya main,
in Dooriyon ka bolbala hai!
Jo takra kar chal de!
Wohi hi toh dilwala hai!

Dilwale ki manzil
Koi door nahin!
Dooriyon se takrana
Koi kasoor nahin!!

Regards

 

[devdahiya]

Kaku! Kya badiya Likha Aapne!

Dil ki duniya main,
in Dooriyon ka bolbala hai!
Jo takra kar chal de!
Wohi hi toh dilwala hai!

Dilwale ki manzil
Koi door nahin!
Dooriyon se takrana
Koi kasoor nahin!!

Regards

AAp tou KAVIYATRI bhi ho bebey...Nice ones!


Logg tou paas reh kar bhi kattle-aam karte hein
Ek hum hein ki ittani duur sa sab ko salaam karte hein
Kya majja uss paas rehne mein jahan dil dhhaddakte hi nahin
Unse achhe tou dil hein duur wale jo mohobbat srre aam karte hein.