Kitabon mein padha tha maine, purush ek chhavi hai
Naari ne khud mein bhawnaon ko samaya
Dono ko jodkar dekha to paya
Sunder chitvan jisne Rab ka roop darshaya
Purush teer to naari kamaan
Ik-duje bina na inki pehchaan
Ek agar talwaar bana to
Duje ne banke dhal saath nibhaya
Do sunder cheezon ka mail zaroori banta aise
Jaise Arjun akele ‘Geeta Ka Saar’ liye ranbhoomi mein na jeet paya
Naari bhi jeevan mein kimat rakhti aise
Jiske bina Ishwar iss sansaar ko nahin saja paya
Jeevan-maran ki dor to rachiyata ke haath
Rishton ki dor ka bhaar usne nar-naari ko hi sambhlaya
Maana vibhajan ki hai aaj ahmiyat kaafi
Rishton mein nahin, balki shrum mein isko batlaya
Gaate hain sab….’Satya hi Shiv hai, Shiv hi sunder hai’
Samajhte kyun nahi, iss sunder Shiv ko Gauri bin na koi pura kar paya
Purush ne agar naari ko suna aur samjha hai
Ye batlao kyun Ram fir ‘Hey Sitey! Hey Sitey!’ kah roya aur chillaya
Dono ko barabar zaroorat ek-duje ki
Kyun Bhagwan ne naari ko hi sehansheel bata apna bhed-bhaav chhupaya
Nar-naari khan gunon ki
Ek avgun ko dekh fir purush ne kyun naari ko thukraya
I wrote something original after a long time and after some observations. If its nicely created then ok,.........thought behind this creation is.......why couples get seperated when they both once had decided to stay together? Little adjustment is required, little more acceptance is required by one in comparison to another..........why this beautiful knot is opened when they once celebrated together with all love and respect?, why Ego and Self-esteem becomes the blocking stone of this relationship?, why they talk more as individualistic when they both has to share and spend together?......lot many questions come to my mind. Would like to have valuable thoughts of elders who have experienced life, also from those who are seperated and are members here (my intention is pure and holistic, just want to understand from their point of view)......others with serious thought can also participate without hurting anybody's sentiments.
My concern is just to spread my message to all through this simple poem.....might not be that impressive like a professional writer, but feel inside is all of a woman who is being neglected by man in any form....Sorry, that I could not put the feelings of a man's heart like that of a woman and that's why asking men to put up their opinions in relation to this serious concern.
