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hoodarajesh
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hamare tute huye dil ke asiyane ko dekh
sanatta jahan rahata h us virane ko dekh
jis dil me bathe h aap barso se araam se
jra kareeb aakar us thikane ko dekh
::: Aaj Phir :::
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hamare tute huye dil ke asiyane ko dekh
sanatta jahan rahata h us virane ko dekh
jis dil me bathe h aap barso se araam se
jra kareeb aakar us thikane ko dekh
arvindsinghrot
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Raathe saab..ise kam jor to konay laagte aap....samajhan main...par bhai...gajab line kaad ke laya hai.....Anil bhai ye shayaron ki mehafil hai...... mere bhi kam hi samajh main aata hai.
vo kehte hain na:
kam hi hote hain jajbaaton ko samajhne vaale
isliye shayad shayaron ki bastiyan nahi hoti
very well written manisha ji
arvindsinghrot
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really good lines minisha..keep it up..
Aaj phir mann karta kuch gam seene ko
Basoon se chooti teri yaad-a-jaam peene ko
Tumne kalam kaya uthaai-jazbaat-a-samandar ko jinda kiya
Varna rakha hi kaya-tha-a-tabasum yaha jeene ko....
Aaj phir mann karta kuch gam seene ko
Basoon se chooti teri yaad-a-jaam peene ko
Tumne kalam kaya uthaai-jazbaat-a-samandar ko jinda kiya
Varna rakha hi kaya-tha-a-tabasum yaha jeene ko....
coolengineer
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few more lines.
Khudaa ki rehmaat saare sansaar par barse..!
Mere hisse ki rehmat mere pyaar par barse..!
E-khudaa mujhe kar dena paani.,
Agar mera pyaar kabhi paani ko tarse..!
Khudaa ki rehmaat saare sansaar par barse..!
Mere hisse ki rehmat mere pyaar par barse..!
E-khudaa mujhe kar dena paani.,
Agar mera pyaar kabhi paani ko tarse..!
Abki baar bhi shararat mere saath hui,
Mera ghar chhodd saare shehar mein barsat hui..!
coolengineer
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bahut khuub neelam jee
Aapki duniya se jane ke baad,
Aapko har taare main nazar aaya karenge..!
Aap har pal koi DUAA maang lena,
Aur hum har pal toot jaya karenge..!
Aapki duniya se jane ke baad,
Aapko har taare main nazar aaya karenge..!
Aap har pal koi DUAA maang lena,
Aur hum har pal toot jaya karenge..!
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vivekdh
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aaj phir
baat aisi hai ki 1 premika ruth ker chali gayi or uske premi ki agli subha kaa varnan kuch is prakar hai
sardi ki ye subha or aaj Alarm ki chikhti aawaj ne muje jagaya,
aankh khol ker dekha to khud ko bahut tanha or aakela paya,
uske hathon ki bani chai ko yaad ker aaj khud hi Omlet banaya,
aati thi mere jism se uski khusbu per aaj maine Deo. lagya,
kaanp gaya soch ker ki kya har subha aisi hi hogi meri,
or bhul ker sarri baaten AAJ PHIR maine hi usse phone laagaya
baat aisi hai ki 1 premika ruth ker chali gayi or uske premi ki agli subha kaa varnan kuch is prakar hai
sardi ki ye subha or aaj Alarm ki chikhti aawaj ne muje jagaya,
aankh khol ker dekha to khud ko bahut tanha or aakela paya,
uske hathon ki bani chai ko yaad ker aaj khud hi Omlet banaya,
aati thi mere jism se uski khusbu per aaj maine Deo. lagya,
kaanp gaya soch ker ki kya har subha aisi hi hogi meri,
or bhul ker sarri baaten AAJ PHIR maine hi usse phone laagaya
baat aisi hai ki 1 premika ruth ker chali gayi or uske premi ki agli subha kaa varnan kuch is prakar hai
sardi ki ye subha or aaj Alarm ki chikhti aawaj ne muje jagaya,
aankh khol ker dekha to khud ko bahut tanha or aakela paya,
uske hathon ki bani chai ko yaad ker aaj khud hi Omlet banaya,
aati thi mere jism se uski khusbu per aaj maine Deo. lagya,
kaanp gaya soch ker ki kya har subha aisi hi hogi meri,
or bhul ker sarri baaten AAJ PHIR maine hi usse phone laagaya
Achi lagi aapki subah ki daastaan
coolengineer
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bahut badiya vivek..
baat aisi hai ki 1 premika ruth ker chali gayi or uske premi ki agli subha kaa varnan kuch is prakar hai
sardi ki ye subha or aaj Alarm ki chikhti aawaj ne muje jagaya,
aankh khol ker dekha to khud ko bahut tanha or aakela paya,
uske hathon ki bani chai ko yaad ker aaj khud hi Omlet banaya,
aati thi mere jism se uski khusbu per aaj maine Deo. lagya,
kaanp gaya soch ker ki kya har subha aisi hi hogi meri,
or bhul ker sarri baaten AAJ PHIR maine hi usse phone laagaya
jab premi ki premika ne phone udhya to premi ne apna afsana kuch aise sunaya....
AAJ PHIR tujh sang bitaya har haseen lamha yaad aaya
Aa gaya jab bhi kabhi zikr-e-shopping..
woh mera tere se, ATM card chupana yaad aaya ...
daru pee ke jab bhi ghar mein aana para mujhey
woh mera dantoon taley, Ellaichi chabana yaad aaya..
Jub Kabhi bhi taway pey roti jal janay per
woh mera tere belun se sur phurwana yaad aaya..
Tuj se teri umar poochnay per who tera duppatay main.. Sharmana aur 34 ko 17 bata tey hue muskurana yaad aaya
AAJ PHIR..!!
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vivekdh
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kasut chore kasuti lines likh di tanne haalat byan ker diye sacche dil se
bahut badiya vivek..
jab premi ki premika ne phone udhya to premi ne apna afsana kuch aise sunaya....
AAJ PHIR tujh sang bitaya har haseen lamha yaad aaya
Aa gaya jab bhi kabhi zikr-e-shopping..
woh mera tere se, ATM card chupana yaad aaya ...
daru pee ke jab bhi ghar mein aana para mujhey
woh mera dantoon taley, Ellaichi chabana yaad aaya..
Jub Kabhi bhi taway pey roti jal janay per
woh mera tere belun se sur phurwana yaad aaya..
Tuj se teri umar poochnay per who tera duppatay main.. Sharmana aur 34 ko 17 bata tey hue muskurana yaad aaya
AAJ PHIR..!!
bahut badiya vivek..
jab premi ki premika ne phone udhya to premi ne apna afsana kuch aise sunaya....
AAJ PHIR tujh sang bitaya har haseen lamha yaad aaya
Aa gaya jab bhi kabhi zikr-e-shopping..
woh mera tere se, ATM card chupana yaad aaya ...
daru pee ke jab bhi ghar mein aana para mujhey
woh mera dantoon taley, Ellaichi chabana yaad aaya..
Jub Kabhi bhi taway pey roti jal janay per
woh mera tere belun se sur phurwana yaad aaya..
Tuj se teri umar poochnay per who tera duppatay main.. Sharmana aur 34 ko 17 bata tey hue muskurana yaad aaya
AAJ PHIR..!!
Tejveer ne apni halat bayan ki hai in lines mei .kyu tejveer?
coolengineer
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preeti jee ye mere maaried doston ki haalat bayan ki hai maine..meri haalat to 2 post upar wala reply bayan karta hai..
preeti jee ye mere maaried doston ki haalat bayan ki hai maine..meri haalat to 2 post upar wala reply bayan karta hai..
Bahut Badiya experience le raha hai Dost laga reh ..
Gud Goin Guyzz
coolengineer
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Bahut Badiya experience le raha hai Dost laga reh ..
thanx a lot maniisha
Khuda ki mohabbat fannah kaun karega ..!
SAb nek ban gaye to Gunaah kaun karega..!!
A-khuda sanam bewafa ko bachaye rakhna..!
varna hamari maut ki DUAA kaun karega..!!
I wrote few lines...11-12 years before...when I was young...
Ab budhe hogaye ho kyaa ..
Born shayar
Jeete raho Bachcha...
Bilkul sahi pehchana baalike...sada saubhagyawati raho...sada safalta pao...doodho nahao puto phalo
...Ab to hum sanyas le chuke hain...
...Ab to bas jo kuchh naye yuvak/yuvti hain jo shayar banna chahte hain bas unko shayri sikhaate hain
...Apni bhi yaadein taaza ho jaati hain...
...Kya din the wo bhi...
Ab budhe hogaye ho kyaa ..
Born shayar
Bilkul sahi pehchana baalike...sada saubhagyawati raho...sada safalta pao...doodho nahao puto phalo
...Ab to hum sanyas le chuke hain...
...Ab to bas jo kuchh naye yuvak/yuvti hain jo shayar banna chahte hain bas unko shayri sikhaate hain
...Apni bhi yaadein taaza ho jaati hain...
...Kya din the wo bhi...
I wrote few lines...11-12 years before...when I was young...
...Dekha naa tune ek baar mudkar kuchh der to main ruka tha
...Jab dil ne tujhko rokna chaha door tu ja chuka tha
...Actually bachpan se hi shayar hain hum to
Okay Rahul ye aapne likha tha, i alws kept thinking that these are DDLJ's song "na jane mere dil ko kya ho gya" lines ...
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