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prashantacmet said:
Tau to Khettan ki udd ne chaal gya , per wa sautan tai ke kaabu main fass gi........... arrr Tai ne bhaaj ke uski chotti pakad li arr bolli" Jerai ki bherai..........meri SHAUK ya to iss aapne thobdde ne leke rudak ja na to tere muh main kaalle kuttoien ka GOO bhar doongi ........Jerai RAAND........"...................
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Wa soutten aagge-2 arr Tai pachhe-2........Tai nei wa sheemm tein bahar kaaddhh di........Arr tau gharran aaya nahin sanjhh tahin...arr tai ke bhathh balle kasuuta.
 
din chhippe paachhe jib madak sa andhera holiya......to tau gharu aaya.............tau ne chugarde koo dekhya......... paar usne wa beerbaani kahi na deekhi...........tai tau ki udd ne tukur-tukur dekhan laag gi.............tau ne fer tai te poocha........ "wa kaha gayi.".......Tai to pehle hi fooki baithhi thi.......... bolli "Bilottne se Muh aale meri gail bollan ka matlab kona tera...........jaa rapat le yahan tai aapni ussi Damyanti ke dhoorre ......... yahan tajhe tikkad na mille eibb"
devdahiya said:
Wa soutten aagge-2 arr Tai pachhe-2........Tai nei wa sheemm tein bahar kaaddhh di........Arr tau gharran aaya nahin sanjhh tahin...arr tai ke bhathh balle kasuuta.
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ratheetheraist said:
fer tau bollaa....... mere saaley kii ......... meri billi mujhi ko myaaun....... ekk diyaa laamddaa kheench keey kadd main.....:p;):D:cool:
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Tai nei rolla macha diya arr gaam kathha karr liya.....Arr tai nei eilaan karr diya akk ibb iss budhhe-khhussat gell konya rahoon...arr apni gathhaddi baandhh ke wa ja wa ja.
 
hmm........

devdahiya said:
Tai nei rolla macha diya arr gaam kathha karr liya.....Arr tai nei eilaan karr diya akk ibb iss budhhe-khhussat gell konya rahoon...arr apni gathhaddi baandhh ke wa ja wa ja.
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tauu ke taawlii ee samajh main aalii......... buddhlii chali gaii tee rottiyaan ne bhi tarseegaa..... hoo liyaa LAANGADD THAA KEE PAACHHEE PAACHEE.....:D

eeeeeeeeeeee main kee tannee saachii main kahun thaa.... nuee likadd gii muhh tee.......;)
 
ratheetheraist said:
tauu ke taawlii ee samajh main aalii......... buddhlii chali gaii tee rottiyaan ne bhi tarseegaa..... hoo liyaa LAANGADD THAA KEE PAACHHEE PAACHEE.....:D

eeeeeeeeeeee main kee tannee saachii main kahun thaa.... nuee likadd gii muhh tee.......;)
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Tai aagge likkadd gi arr tau ho rhya golli langgadd thhahein.....Rah mein ussne ek chhora milgya...ow bolya rei chhorre tnne terri tai dekhkhi.Chhora bolya ghanni-e haan ho li...gathhaddi thhahein Rowantti ja thi Nyun Qutubgarh kennyan. Ittanni suun kei tau ka passanna pattya.
 
arr fer Tau dhotti chadha ke paatta todd bhaaj liya Qutubgarh ki udd ne................ buddha manas tha tau, madak waar main tau ki dhokni bandh gi............arr wo passeno main lathpath holiya........................
devdahiya said:
Tai aagge likkadd gi arr tau ho rhya golli langgadd thhahein.....Rah mein ussne ek chhora milgya...ow bolya rei chhorre tnne terri tai dekhkhi.Chhora bolya ghanni-e haan ho li...gathhaddi thhahein Rowantti ja thi Nyun Qutubgarh kennyan. Ittanni suun kei tau ka passanna pattya.
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hhmm......

prashantacmet said:
arr fer Tau dhotti chadha ke paatta todd bhaaj liya Qutubgarh ki udd ne................ buddha manas tha tau, madak waar main tau ki dhokni bandh gi............arr wo passeno main lathpath holiya........................
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par itne saalaa kaa pyaar nuee thoddii bicchdeey thaa......... taai jaanee thi akk oo aawegaa paachhee paachee......... becharii bhollii baadall ho lii ultii..... arr jibb dekhyaa akk tauu passinyaa main taram tarr ......... haamftaa aann laag ryaa thaa......... tee bhaaj lii tauu kennii apni GATTHRII bagaa key........ arr saaree aale ghar maan tee DALLU main paani bhar kee lyaaiiiiii............
 
ratheetheraist said:
par itne saalaa kaa pyaar nuee thoddii bicchdeey thaa......... taai jaanee thi akk oo aawegaa paachhee paachee......... becharii bhollii baadall ho lii ultii..... arr jibb dekhyaa akk tauu passinyaa main taram tarr ......... haamftaa aann laag ryaa thaa......... tee bhaaj lii tauu kennii apni GATTHRII bagaa key........ arr saaree aale ghar maan tee DALLU main paani bhar kee lyaaiiiiii............
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Ow nass karr diya Climax ka iss kameen nei....suspense kho diya saarra...lyaya sei dallu thha kei..........ibbe tei iss tau ki akkall phoddni thi.....ibb tu hein twist de iss story nei.....terra sussra.
 
haha...... theek saii tee.............

devdahiya said:
Ow nass karr diya Climax ka iss kameen nei....suspense kho diya saarra...lyaya sei dallu thha kei..........ibbe tei iss tau ki akkall phoddni thi.....ibb tu hein twist de iss story nei.....terra sussra.
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manne na bera thaa thari story kaa........khi khi......

te ferr paanii piyaa taau neey.......... arr fer ho gyaa theek...... parr taai nee sochii akk yuu ferr apnii aali pee aawegaa .. arr rojj lathh bajawegaa........ taai ho lee ultii gatthrii kehniii.........arr rukke maartii chaalii jaaa.... akk ibbkee tee terii akkall thikkannee lyaa kee rahungii .............
 
ratheetheraist said:
manne na bera thaa thari story kaa........khi khi......

te ferr paanii piyaa taau neey.......... arr fer ho gyaa theek...... parr taai nee sochii akk yuu ferr apnii aali pee aawegaa .. arr rojj lathh bajawegaa........ taai ho lee ultii gatthrii kehniii.........arr rukke maartii chaalii jaaa.... akk ibbkee tee terii akkall thikkannee lyaa kee rahungii .............
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Bess ke tha....tai ne chalti dekh kei tau ke deedde patte ke patte rehgge...arr [jhoothhi]gass kha ke padd gya........arr saanss bi rokk liya........tai nei sochchi he kadde sache-hein ludhhakk gya ho.......tawalli si ultti muddi arr thhaddu bolli...OMMI ke babu...ow Ommi ke babbu....bess ke tha tau nei jhatt aankh kholli arr bolya..arr tu ja thi....
 
Tau ne uthha dekh tai ke kasutta cho utha arr tai bolli "Bhapparbharney Budhed , tajhe laaz na aayi Bhapper bhartu iss budhape main pi, main bhi teri bhappar dekhi dekhti buddhi holi , tu aaj lok kona sudhara,,,,,,, paar eibb ke gharu diva kona jalle......... main to jaan laag ri aapni Bhai ke"..................
devdahiya said:
Bess ke tha....tai ne chalti dekh kei tau ke deedde patte ke patte rehgge...arr [jhoothhi]gass kha ke padd gya........arr saanss bi rokk liya........tai nei sochchi he kadde sache-hein ludhhakk gya ho.......tawalli si ultti muddi arr thhaddu bolli...OMMI ke babu...ow Ommi ke babbu....bess ke tha tau nei jhatt aankh kholli arr bolya..arr tu ja thi....
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Sundu katayi haar manra tha sukka pada tha chaand pe usey kuch khaan ku ni paya bus baraf chusssu gya... sab te garam tikkad mangta phire thaa...jib tau usey takrayaa...:o
 
aarre eeeeeeee ooooooooooo KOONGER.......... yu konsaa kissa tha diya tai...................... kHagad thread ki direction ku kuoey tarodmarod rya......................... ssodham soodh chaal ne........................ROOKA@ THREAD KI DIRECTION.........................
amitranamba said:
Sundu katayi haar manra tha sukka pada tha chaand pe usey kuch khaan ku ni paya bus baraf chusssu gya... sab te garam tikkad mangta phire thaa...jib tau usey takrayaa...:o
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